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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊guys its the first time i m writting so plz don't throw tomatoes if its bad..😉



part 1-page 1

part 2-page 1

pat 3- page 2



it's been 3 week since moniya is in rajmahal.. she is tired of shouting n pleading to let her go, n is quiet normal now.. but hopes to run away if she gets an oppurtunity..
uday is well aware of moniya's intentions n planed a way to convince moniya about her real identity..
one day he went to the police station to meet murari..
uday- (with his devil smirk) murari ji, aap kaise hain..itne duble kaise ho gaye.. police station mein khana toh milta hain nah...?
murari- tum! tum yahan kya kr hrahe hon.. aur meri moniya kaisi hai..?
uday-dekhie murari ji(in his usual teasing voice) aap ki beiti ap tak toh thik hain .. par baad mein..
murari- baad mein kya .. meri beti ko haat mat lagana tum log..
uday- tumhari beti ek tikhimirchi hain, jo tumhe milne ke liye taras rahi hain.. par tum aur hum, dono jante hain ki yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta.. ab tak toh hum unse acche bartap kr rahe hain.. par agar yo aisi hi rahi toh pata nahi hum kya kr baithenge..toh agar apni beiti ki bhalai chahte hon toh humari baat man lo..
murari- tumhe kya chahie.. hum sab krne ke lie taiyar hain bas meri beiti ko kuch mat krna..
uday-yeh hui nah baat.. hum aapse yeh chahte he ki aap apni beiti ko sari sacchai bata de aur use apnane se mana kr de.. agr aap ise krne ke lie taiyaar hai toh thik hain, barna...
murari- nehi nehi.. tum jaisa kehte hon hum waise hi karenge..
taking the assurance from murari uday went back to rajmahal..
murari was a watchman in the rajmahal.. his wife died after giving birth to a son.. he was murari's life.. he was also loyal to the royal famiy untill his son fell ill.. he was suffering from cancer n needed to be opperated asap..he was in need of money.. he wanted to ask rajmata's help but he feared that she would refuse.. so in order to save his son, he kidnapped rajkumari manyata, to demand ransom in return.. but the day he fled awya with her, his son died.. he was shattered.. after that incident he raised moniya as her own child.. although his intentions were worng behind kidnapping manyata.. but he forgot his past n considerd her to be his daughter..

here uday goes to manyata's room n see her trying to put her top's hook..( rajmata had coninced her to wear appropiet cloth.. but it took her more then 1 hr 2 wear them.. as she is not used to wear this kind of cloth)
uday- itni mushkil ho rahi thi toh hame bula liya hota..(with a smirk in his face)

moniya-( suddenly turning back n looking at him) tum! Tum yahan kya kr rahe hon! Rajkumar hoke itni bhi tameez nahi hain ki knock krke aana chahie..

uday- ab apne hone wale biwi ke kamre mein aane ke liye knock krna hum jaroori nahi samajhte..

moniya- tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho..tum ya tumhari dadisab humein bolegi aur mein tumse shaadi krne ke lie maan jaungi.. KABHI NAHI!

Uday- shaadi toh tumhe krni hi paregi.. par who badmein socha jaega.. ab tum taiyaar ho jao,
hum tumhe tumhari baba se milwane le ja rahe hain..

Moniya-KYA!(not believing wt she heard just now) tum sachmein mujhe leke jaonge..

Uday- ya sachmein.. ab apni princess ko itnee udaas nahi dekh sakte..

Saying this he went near her n grabing her hand turned her.. he slowly ran his finger through her bare back and finally closed her hook.. but during this moment moniya didn't react at all.. she was only thinking about his father.. uday taking her hand came down the stairs n made her sit in the car n drove away..
CONTINUE'




SORRY GUYS BUT M TOO TIRED NOW SO WILL UPDATE TOMORROW😛.. PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON IF U ENJOYED READING IT😊.. N IF U DIDN'T THEN SORRY😒.. COMMENTS ARE MOST WELCOMED.😃.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb yaar...👏 Loved it...cant wait to read more...take ur time 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u all for ur lovely comments😊.. here goes the next part..

(murari in the jail thinking to himself)

murari- mujhe moniya ko sach batana parega.. nahi toh woh log kuch bhi kr sakte hain.. par woh aakash; use kaise moniya se duur rakhu..kuch toh krna padega..

here moniya was still surprised..she cudnt believe that she was going to meet her father n moreover uday was taking her there..

they reached the police station and uday took moniya to the cell where his father was kept..

moniya- baba aap kaise hain.. aap thik hain nah! baba in logo nein aapko kyun pakra hain...

murari- tu yahan kya kr rahi hain..aur sab kuch janne ke bad bhi tu mujhe baba bula rahi hain..

moniya- (shocked at her fathers reply) aap yeh kya keh rahe hain.. kya janne ke bad..

murari- oh toh un logo ne tujhe kuch bataya nahi..thik hain mein hi tujhe bata deta hoon..tu meri beiti nahi hain.. tujhe toh maine paiso ke liye kidnapp kia tha.. tujhe kya laga mein tujh se pyaar karta hoon.. kabhi nahi !..teri baje se meine apna beita khoya..
aur woh aakash jisse tu pyar kr baitha.. woh bhi tujhse pyaar nahi krta..woh sab kuch janta tha aur sirf paiso ke lie yeh sab kr raha tha..

moniya was standing there lifeless,she cudntbelieve her ears..the person she loved the most didnt loved her at all..she quietly came out of the station..
uday- ab toh tumhe bishwas ho gaya hain nah ki hum sach bol rahe the.. kyun princess..
moniya didnt reply.. she was still shocked and her fathers words about him and aakash were echoing in her ears..

suddenly moniya turnd to him and said-
moniya- mujhe rajmahal leke jao..

uday- (surprised) jaisi aapki marji rajkumari..

on reaching the rajmahal. moniya asked uday to call all family members..

moniya-mein taiyaar hoon.. aap log jo kuch bhi kahenge mein use krne ke lie taiyaar hoon.. par meri do shart hain..

rajmata- kaisi shart..

moniya- pehli yeh hain ki, hum chahte hain ki aap log murari ko chod de.. aur dusri (she said directly looking at uday ) aakash ko kuch nahi hona chahie

uday- (smirking) dont worry rajkumari.. aapke lover boy ko kuuch nahi hoga..

rajmata- humein aapki shart manjoor hain.. par aapko yeh wada krna padega ki aap humari sari baat suneng ge

moniya- mein wada krti hoon

rajmata- toh meri pehli iccha yeh hain ki.. aapki aur udayveer ki sagai kal kr di jae
everyone was shocked and happy.. and uaday was giving his usual devil smirk.. but in all this happiness, of his plan being succesfull he didnt fail to notice the tear that escaped from manyata's eyes

continue...


will update the last part by today evening.. comments are welcomed😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls do update its awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS..



continue soon!!!

take care!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's amazing! But I don't want there to be a last part... :( Can't you turn this into a FF?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice... Loved it do continue :) ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uday is such an intrigue...and a tease. 😆

Loved your os! Look forward to the next part! 😃

TC.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

pls do update its awesome

thank u soo much..vl update as soon as possible..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: filmyprincess

Wow nice... Loved it do continue :) ❤️

thank u..

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