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thank u so much guys...u have really inspired me.. so I just gave another update..n don't worry it vl b finished by 2da 😊

everyone was busy in the rajmahal for the royal engagement..media people surrounded the palace..rajmata was very happy... brijraj accepted moniya as she started behaving normally..n jai was just ignoring all this.. but in this only uday saw the sadness in manyata's eyes n wasnt 2 happy about it but was 2 ignorant to accept it..

the moment finally arrieved..manyata was all dressed like a queen n sitting quietly ih her room..

she cudnt believe that in a few days her life turned upsisde down..

the person she thought 2 be hr father and the man she fell in love with for he first tym only wanted money from her ...

n the person she hated was going to be her fiance in just a few hours...

she was all lost in her thoughts when uday entered her room..

uday-aaj toh tum sach mein rajkumari lag rahi ho..kya yeh mera pyaar ka asar hain..

moniya- (glared at him) tum yahan kya kr rahe hon..?

uday- apni hone wali wife ko dekhne aaya hoon.. par lagta hain ki woh apne aashiq ko bohot miss kr rahe hain…kyun princess..aakash ko miss kr rahe hein.?

Moniya-tumhe koi dusra kam nahi hain.. mein kya soch rahi hoon who meri problem hain..tumhe isse kya..aur haan mein aakash ko miss kr rahi hoon, tumhe koi problem hain isse.. agar hain toh kushi se yah sagai tor do, mujhe koi problem nahi hogi..

Uday-hain! aapki issi ad ape toh hum fida hain..par apni princes ko dukhi nahi dekh sakte..toh chalie hum hi aapke aakash ki kami pura kr deta hoon ..

Saying this he started moving near manyata..manyata backed off till she hit the wall..uaday started coming forward..uday and manyata were inches apart when suddenly jai entered the room..

She was pissed off in seeing them in that position.. jai in an angry tone said to uday..

Jai- dadisab is calling u both n plz come down soon.. m not ur servent that I vl have to call u..

Uday-kya jai.. barbad kar di nah moment..rajkumari hoke inti bhi tameez nahi hain ki kisi couple ke room mein aane se pehle knock krna chahie (he said while giving a lil smirk at manyata)

Jai stomped her foot n went out of the room while moniya giving an angry glare at uday went inside the washroom..

Continue...

okie awesome part do continue

love it so far keep it up!😃

that was well written...i hope murari's part comes true 😳

OMG Continue! Please continue! I can't wait

superb ...plz continue ...👏

🤗please continue..! loved it ;)) ...

AWESOMEE!
Aray yaar tum uday ko aakash ki kami pooray karnay deti =p

:O AWESOME! :D

Heey, do you send out PM's? If you do can you send me one when you update? Thaaanks! :)

But if you can't, that's alright. I'll just, ya know, stalk your FF. ;P

thank u all very much.. u inspired me a lot😊.. my vacations have just started today so i took a day off..i'll update by 2moro n xxdevilishxx sorry but m new to this forum n do not kno how to send pms..😛