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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey evry1 it's a OS please don't throw tomatoes on me

Manyata was in the garden .it had been 2 weeks since she was in rajmahal but she couldn't accept the truth.she always thought of murari as her father and suddenly there are some peoples calling her rajkumari manyata,life was getting weird it seems.she felt someone was watching her and turned around. It was him The devil.

Who had actually brought her to the palace.

he kept gazing at her

Will you stop staring at me like that? She said

Umm no I don't think so. ,what are you doing here? He asked

Same could I ask you she said rolling her eyes

You are coming with me tonight to a party he said with a smile

If I choose not to?she said

Well you don't have a choice because daadisab had asked me to he said taking a few steps

I just don't get it, why are you always odering me? She asked

Uday came towards her and pulled her close towards him

She could feel his hot breath on her face

I have the right to oder you he whispered in her ears

You want to know why? He said looking straight into her eyes

No I don't want to she said trying to go away

But he caught her hands and again pulled her close .

Again you don't have a choice he stated

"I have a big right on you since our childhood because you are my fianc "

They stood there in silence for sometime

WHAT? This cant be happening. What rubbish,don't you have any work other then troubling me? She said in a angry voice

It has happened when we were young ,we had our roka and you have to accept that you are soon

going to be my wife plus I have the proof also. He said with a smile

manyata couldn't imagine to be the wife of that devil she was in a shock .

my whole life with this man,I cant even imagine she thought

lost in your thoughts huh he said bringing her back to her senses

he moved more close to her and whispered holding her hand

"Now you know about my right on you"

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guyz i an not that great writer i just imagiened what would happen when the truth will be reavealed

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os.👏...i could imagine how udayveer would be smirking every second...and how manyata would show her shocking face...good job👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS ...hope something like that happens in the show ...UV with his cool attitude and smirk and Manyata getting irritated 😍 Love the last line "Now you know about my right on you"😉

Do write more 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was sweetly written...🤗 contineu soon...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue It pleaseeeXD
IT WAS FREAKING AWESOME.
I can like imagine this happeniing =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one ...luved it...Please do conitnue...I'm sure Udayveer is gonna say something like that to Manyata in the show tooo...He WILL Exercise HIS RIGHT over HER...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GREATTT LUUVVV IITT..
uufff udayvvveerrr iiisss too hawwttt to handdlleee

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx guyz glad that you like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am going to post last part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice!!



continue soon!!

take care..

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