~Tera Mera Pyaar ty vm pg 68

soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow luvly os beautifully written

fanx 4 da pm x

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cornelia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awww.. that was sooo CUTE 😳. udayveer getting possesive over her 🥳. i hope this happens for real in the show. that will be awesome. thanks a lot for the pm. continue soon (i don't think i need to say that but still) 😉 every episode I watch, i'm waiting for another episode 😳 so i need to read os like urs to keep my mind occupied ..n thank u for ur wises for my ff, lol sometimes i dream about the show 🥱 n i wrote what I dreamt 😆 n the way i want the story to go like .. i know i know i'm crazy 🤪..lol anyways tc 😊

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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: cornelia
awww.. that was sooo CUTE 😳. udayveer getting possesive over her 🥳. i hope this happens for real in the show. that will be awesome. thanks a lot for the pm. continue soon (i don't think i need to say that but still) 😉 every episode I watch, i'm waiting for another episode 😳 so i need to read os like urs to keep my mind occupied ..n thank u for ur wises for my ff, lol sometimes i dream about the show 🥱 n i wrote what I dreamt 😆 n the way i want the story to go like .. i know i know i'm crazy 🤪..lol anyways tc 😊

I am the one who is crazy, am supposed to be responsible adult and study but I can't focus since I got into this show lol.

Thanks everyone for reading!😃

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

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So she found out..poor thing, she's broken...awesome OS!

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awww, so cute! i really liked how you kept manyata in character ,she wouldnt forget morari sooo easily. BUT now that murari has confirmed it - we can start her journey towards a royal wedding in earnest! 😆 i love it when Udayveer's possessive peaks through .. 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

ur writing style is really good and i love reading abt udayveer and manyata!

plz pm me when u write again :)

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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223
awesome do write more

thanks hope you can write more soon too!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Awww, that's so cuuute! :)

Continueee, please! :D

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Apocalypse

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Aww loved it dear. It was beautiful. I think you understand Uday's character the best. The dialogues you write for him so belong to him. Like i can totally imagine him saying them. And then can envision Uday the way you describe him. It appears just perfect.!

I just love your OSs, please keep them coming :)

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