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Tulip92 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey loved the ff.. missing your ff's is like missing DEK's episode!
seriously amazing way of explaining each and every scene!! as always i will say you write very nice!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sonali.. I loved it.. UV staring at her in the morning.. and helping her with her dress..so many lovely Manveer scenes.. And oh how can I forget you remembered Goa and London...😆😛.. It was an amazing chapter.. can't wait for the next part..!!😊

Happy New Year..🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
when will the next part be up
Somia3 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz put it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
I still have to write more. I will try to update soon, thanks everyone for the lovely comments!
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Posted: 13 years ago
CAN YOU PUT UP TWO PARTS
PLZ
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol I started writing and it got deleted now I have to start all over ugh!😔

Only one part once I retype the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
I simply have no words for your fantastic writing! i was smiling all through reading oyur scenes,,
Im simply blown away!!
amazing
pleaseee continuee soon...
Loveee it
Thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok here is part twenty-four, sorry if it's not good, had to rewrite it because the orginal update got deleted. Following update is pg-13

Part Twenty-Four

She changed into something more comfortable for the journey to Goa. He changed into his casual shirt and jeans and put on a blazer. Things were packed quickly. They were accompanied by two security guards and a driver.

Manyata didn't realize when her eyes started to droop. Udayveer shifted her head so she could be more comfortable. She was resting peacefully on his shoulder the rest of the way. He felt like the luckiest guy int the world now. He had the power of two kingdoms and a beautiful princess as his new bride. He continued to gaze at her. When they arrived, he tried to nudge her awake. She grabbed his arm with a strong grip. He got out slowly with her. Her eyes suddenly fluttered open and she tried to stand up straighter. He supported her as the hotel staff took in their things. She moved away from him slightly. He merely smirked at her antics.

He stayed close to her in case she would have lost her balance in her sleepy state. She waited expectantly by the door. Instead of keys he pulled out a key card. She looked at it in surprise. She was delighted to see it opened with a slight nudge after it highlighted with green.

She sat down and removed her shoes. She noticed a bottle of champagne in a bucket of ice. She raised her eyebrows.

"Are you planning on drinking this?," she inquired.

"Maybe but I don't think you should have any. You can barely stand on your own feet now," he stated.

"Manyata abhi baachi jaisi hai. Aap ko unka kas dhan rakna hoga. I know it will be difficult but I believe you are the only one that can support her and love her for what she can become," Dadisa stated.

Knowing his wife would probably rebel anyway he let her try to open the cork herself. She succeed in opening it but got some over her clothes.

"Ugh!," she stammered.

He took the bottle out of her hands before she could smack it against anything. He poured some and handed her a glass and poured a glass for himself.

"Take a sip," he said.

She gingerly let a small sip pass through her lips. The next instant she was grimacing. Apparently it wasn't up for her palate. She ran into the bathroom ad started to spit it out.

He nursed his own drink and smirked. He went over to help her tuck her hair away.

"I guess it didn't suit your taste princess," he quipped.

"You could have told me it tasted bitter," she snapped.

He grabbed her chin. She glared back at him.

He smirked and let her go. She nudged him slightly.

She grabbed pajamas and then searched her suitcase for t-shirt. She realized she only had a fimsy nightgown. She put it aside and started going through his suitcase instead. He picked up the nightgown.

"This would have looked so nice on you princess, what are you looking for in my suitcase?," he inquired.

She found a t-shirt of his that would cover most of what she wanted to cover.

"I am taking your t-shirt. Apparently I need to get some for myself. Don't worry you'll get it back in the morning,"she hissed.

"Take a shower while you are at it. I don't want the sheets to smell like champagne," he called after her.

She rolled her eyes at him. She turned the water on and then locked the door. She sighed. She didn't know how she would deal with him alone here and then in London. Maybe they would have other people hanging around in London.

She emerged from the hot shower feeling much better. She opened the door and nearly bumped into him.

"What is with you always knowing when I am coming and going?," she exclaimed.

He smiled as she gazed at his torso that was more exposed since he was wearing a vest with pajamas now.

She tore her eyes away when she realized he was sizing her up. He looked her up and down. His shirt hung a bit on the sides of her waist but it looked nice on her.

"Maybe you should wear my shirts more often. Aap iss mein kafi acchi lagti hain," he quipped as he passed her to go into the washroom.

She raised her eyebrows and sat down at the dresser to brush her hair and dry it before she went to bed.

She snuggled into her side and tried to get comfortable. He smiled at her, and lay down beside her. He spooned her realizing she was cold. She tried to nudge him away but he held onto her with full force. She grabbed his finger and bit him. He almost yelped but instead stared at his finger and then pulled her close to him again.

"Kya karo ho?," she exclaimed.

"Tuhme thaand lagri hain na?," he hissed.

"You barely have anything on. How are you going to help me feel warm?," she retorted.

He raised his eyebrows and said,"It's called body heat."

She rolled her eyes.

" I need some personal space she quipped.

"Aao na humare paas humari jungli billi," he teased.

She cursed at him.

He ran his fingers all over her face. She felt her heartbeats increasing. Then he leaned in to kiss her. She covered his mouth. He kissed her fingers instead.

"That's what you should be doing for me. You bit my finger," he hissed.

"Don't be a sissy," she hissed.

She immediately regreted her words seeing his eyes turn dark. He pinned her down and planted kiss on her mouth. He pulled back and bit her ear.

"Never say that again ," he said firmly.

She looked at him stunned. He turned to go to sleep. She felt bad but how to make it up to him? She had severely sliced his ego today. She thought for a moment then pulled on his arm.

"I know you aren't sleeping. I am sorry Udayveer. You know you are very manly, the complete opposite of what I said you were," she said.

He turned to face her.

" I am listening princess," he said.

She smiled at him and took his finger and kissed it. He indicated to his lips. She turned her eyes down for a mere second for meeting his eyes again. She leaned in and kissed him. He reached around and started tickling her. She broke the kiss and started giggling. She leaned on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around her. They soon fell asleep listening to each other's breathing and heartbeats.

She awakened before him this time. She hestitantly reached over and ran her hand in his hair and across his face. He suddenly grabbed her hand. She stopped short and smiled.

"Good morning!," he said.

"Aaj kya plan hain?," she inquired.

"Today we are going to the beach for water sports. You know how to swim right?," he asked.

She nodded.

"Good now get ready soon. We'll have room service and then we will head out," he said as he got up and headed into the washroom.

Manyata watched him go wondering if she would feel comfortable in the swim suit she had bought the week before.

They ate together, then she went to grab her bathing suit.

"Hey Manyata, mujhe yeh shirt chaiye hai," he quipped.

"Abhi?," she asked.

He nodded in the affirmative.

She raised her eyebrows at him.

"I'll give it to you after I change," she stated.

"Why not now?," he asked.

She rolled her eyes.

"If you can catch me then I will give It to you," she hissed. He chased her around but she was able to get into the washroom.

He sighed.

"Theek hai jungli billi you won!," he called after her.

She opened the door a crack and threw the t-shirt at him, it hit him in the face. He removed it in time to see her stick out her tongue at him before she closed the door in his face.

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG I LOVE THIS HONEYMOON ALREADY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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