Hey sonali(di- I realized I need to call you di. Your much older than this bacchi 😆 ).
I'm just done with reading and I must say you've got a great flair with writing.
Now I've got a confession to make. I've been a silent reader of your posts In the RBO forum. And by god you're absolute awesomeness. You've got a new pankha. 😳
Now coming to the point. That is what I'm loving in this ff
- The fact that you've portrayed the gradual change in manyata. Its progressing really well and I'm hoping to see something like this on the show too 😳 I know sigh wishful thinking. :-(.
- The fact tht J has become more fond of her sister. Their banter is what reminds me of my relation with my cousin. BEAUTIFUL. 10 on 10 for portraying such love able relations
- Ohhh frankly saying. I'm loving the Uday-Manyata union you put in Here. They actually have an amazing chemistry. It's so sweet him teaching her how to love and all😳 but it's sad to see her move away from him albeit due to hesitancy. I'm sure you will make Uday open her heart out to him
I found this poem. Apt for this.
?A queer thing about those waters: there are no
Birds there, or hardly any.
I did not miss them, I do not remember
Missing them, or thinking it uncanny.
The beach so-called was a blinding splinter of limestone,
A quarry outraged by hulls.
We took pleasure in that: the emptiness, the hardness
Of the light, the silence, and the water's stillness.
But this was the setting for one of our murderous scenes.
This hurt, and goes on hurting:
The venomous soft jelly, the undersides.
We could stand the world if it were hard all over.
I loved it. Pls do continue soon
Love
Lekha.
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