Creative Writing (Voting Completed)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Now that the creative writing contest is completed, its time to vote for your favorite stories. All eleven entries to the contest are posted in this topic right here: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/debate-mansion/1426574/creative-writing-contest-official-entries .

Our contestants have put time and effort to write these stories, so please take the time to read all of them and then vote. The voting will be open for a week, so there will be plenty of time to vote. Once you have done picking your favorites list your top three picks in this topic. Please give reasons for your ranking. Feel free to leave additional feedback on all entries too. DO NOT vote for any disqualified or unofficial entries. Last date to vote is July 24th.

Summer has volunteered to count and compile the votes. Thank You Summer. 👏 Each first place nomination is three points, second place nomination is two points and third place nomination is one point. The story with most points will be juntas winner.

In the meantime, I will review all entries myself and have feedback. I will pick the judges pick winner, should it be different from junta's pick.

Organizers Note:

I have tried to have the issue regarding Entry#3 resolved; but unfortunately it keeps getting brought up again. I see a lot of newer people who I don't see on DM often, also voting here and it has caused some issues again. I'm not sure if my message here is the right thing to do. However, it is an honest open appeal to keep the spirit of this contest intact. I hope everyone can read it with an open heart and mind and hopefully resolve this issue for once and for all.

I understand that some people are very upset that an entry was disqualified, and it is indeed unfortunate that things turned out that way. Let me layout the brief history for those who are new.

The author of entry#3 submitted an entry, which took me aback. It was hurtful and upsetting to me because my online name and photo story was associated with a story, which content I found over the top. I'm sorry that my opinions cannot appreciate offbeat humor, but I can't change the way I think. However, to be fair to her as an organizer; despite my personal feelings I did publish the story as an official entry.

Unfortunately, I was not the only one who was upset by it. There were several reports/posts and PMs objecting to the content of the story. Some members objected to their names being used as rape victims in the story. Which I feel is a valid objection, I don't think it is fair to expect people not to care how their name is used. The second objection was that it trivialized and portrayed rape beyond acceptable levels of decency. Perhaps people with an offbeat, different sense of humor can appreciate the story. But not everyone can think that way. Different people have different lines. As a moderator I have to step in and take action when significant number of people feel there is a COC violation. Sometimes I have to take action even against what I support, sometimes I have to stand by what I maybe against. I respect the sentiments of people who are upset that entry #3 was disqualified, and that you wish to stand by your friend. However, at the same time I hope that you can respect the fact that as a moderator and organizer ' there are other considerations I have to keep in mind and take action and try to take that in stride. I respect that the author and other supporters maybe upset, but at the same time other people were also hurt and offended. We all cannot share the same level of open mindedness and humor, and the least we can do is come to some compromise about it.

That being said the author was requested to edit the story and resubmit. That is remove names of people who do not wish to be referenced and remove the casual usage of rape. It was the fairest compromise I could come up with given light that it had hurt people. The author chose disqualification over editing the story. It was a conscious decision on part of the author knowing that disqualified entries are ineligible from contest. The author even asked if they could submit a new entry and I allowed the author to resubmit an edited story or a new story before deadline. The author itself was never disqualified from contest. As a side note I will add apart from the story the author chose to disregard anonymity by making it obvious who wrote the story, as well as letting many people know they were.

Whether you are voting to support a friend or make a statement. Even if you feel that the disqualification of entry #3 was wrong and unfair. I honesty ask everyone to reconsider their decisions. All contestants put in a good amount of effort and creativity to come up with their stories. Please try to read through all the qualified entries and appreciate the efforts others put in too. In spirit of the contest and due consideration to everyone who participated and tried to maintain anonymity try to be fair and reasonable and vote for a qualified entry.

If you still feel that this is unacceptable and need to make a statement for entry #3, I cannot stop you from doing so. However, I hope you will understand that disqualified entries are ineligible and respect the fact that those votes will not be counted.

I'm sorry if what said or done here is unpalatable to people. It is just a statement as an organizer. I earnestly hope that we can all end this chapter here and enjoy the remainder of the contest, and let others enjoy it too.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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My 1st choice is entry #7: dil kya karey jab kisi ko kisi sey pyar ho jaye. The story captures the crushes and sweet little desires most human feel at any given point in their life - especially the adults already in a committed relationship with a loved one. The story also dwells on where to set the limits - something that is extremely important for folks in a loving relationship. Desiring is not a sin. Giving in to the desire when you should not is something to be avoided. I loved the simplicity of that story and, of course, the picture it painted of me:) Additionally, the length is just perfect - neither too short nor too long and it held my attention till the end.

Okay okay --- I admit that I am a bit biased towards this one😆 Whoever wrote it - thank you so very much for being so kind on me🤗
My 2nd choice is entry # 10 based on RTH's 500. This one touches a chord somewhere --- brings back some memories buried under the layers and layers of other memories life left me with. It is sweet and sad and hurting and cute - all at the same time. The story, although based on one of the most mushy gushy feeling in the world - love - somehow manages to stay away from being dreamy or overly diabetic.
It is mostly about remorse and regret and then picking up oneself and moving on. The line that touched me most was where the writer said, "He opened the freezer and picked up a pint of ice-cream, chocolate peanut butter, his favorite flavor. Not a whisper of this would reach another soul, but who said that men don't indulge or feed their woes away." I feel we should not put double standards around how men and women should react to heartbreak or any other emotion and this line echoes my feelings. And then there was bumping into someone and dropping the ice cream scene only to see that it was the same flavor😆 I loved the subtle hint about moving on with life. Grieve, get over and move on! Loved the way this story conveyed this message.
My 3rd choice is entry #11 based on Ajnu's Doh Pal. I wish the author shared with us why Aman had to leave abruptly. I can't help but keep pondering over that "why". I liked the way this story flows and the finishing with that song - kind of like cherry on the top. Bas yeh bata don kee Aman gaya kahan aur kyoon?
Edited by Gauri_3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great thanks to all the participants and of course the voters too.
Yes I shall be counting all the votes and hope we do not get any trolls voting.
Last day July 24 which is a Saturday.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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while commenting on the entries can we comment on our guesses regarding the authors ..and are the contestants also allowed to vote /
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_sunny

while commenting on the entries can we comment on our guesses regarding the authors ..and are the contestants also allowed to vote /



Yes contestants can vote too, in fact they should vote.

A lot of guessing has been done so I guess it can continue. However, writers should not reveal themselves till results are announce. 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Entry 3 it was hilliarious
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I must say that most of the submissions are very well written and I am not up to the task of judjing them. All the entries are great.👏👏
( with the exception of my personal entry).
It is pretty obvious that the contestants had taken great pains in writing them and are very well thought out.
Here goes my vote:
1. ---No. 5
( loved the wit and comedy too but most importantly it held my interest in reading it)
2. ---- No. 8
(Great effort and she left no stones unturned in fully interpreting all the symbols)
3. ---Nos. 10/11
(Nice lovely writing styles)
I must add the unofficial entries are great too.👏
Edited by Summer3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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1 - Entry 3 - it made me LOL
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Posted: 15 years ago
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#1 - Entry 11 - Lovely style of writing the story full of appropriate feeling, there is a suspense too...it stayed in my mind and I keep wondering the reason behind Aman's leaving....hope the writer can high-light the reason 😃

#2 - Entry 8 - for the interpretation of the symbol👏 what seems like a random juggle up of signs is all meaningful under the explanation .. and what happen to larry he just left there being confused 😆

#3 -Entry 3 / 6 without a doubt both gave me a good laugh and i enjoyed both 👍🏼


Ok although Entry 3 is disqualified but I still wanted to show my liking for it so i put it as the 3rd one.

Good luck to all contestants ! can't wait for the reveal of writers 😃
Edited by _DrEaM_ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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1st choice Entry # 8
I liked the way the writer made the title as well as picture relevant to the story or was it the other way round ? Pace of story is racy .Good imagery. I was transported to the ruins in the African jungle. I liked the characters in it . I would like to know more about Larry and Dan 😆. I think I already know them and Indy and Noora. But Ju and shelly ..? Is Ju, shelly or can Shelly be Ju? I also liked the interpretation of the symbols . The starting and end were also good.
But I didnt want it to end....Larry are you the author? Cant be , You still eating your pies .It must be Ju if not Indy.
Choice 2 Entry # 9
A nice story of love, patriotism , sacrifice and irony. Vikram the protagonist as our typical war hero and the selfish politician rings so true . But why the sad ending ! Author must be Captain Vikram but why no name for the girl ?
choice 3 Entry # 1
I liked the way the emoticons and their sequence was interpreted. Did gobar actually mean what the writer has written? We will never know .
Or is Gobbar or Jetty the writer ?🤔
Edited by crazy_sunny - 15 years ago

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