Shakti and Raghav fanfic Part 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

After dance plus season 3 has starte there was a lot of changes that can be seen on and off the show... Shakti was mentor on this season also... Raghav was the new padosi of the show... All three mentor's were now all bucked up to win the show... Shakti was now even more focused...
On the other hand Raghav was ek level up with his anchoring and masti... international artist were invited... everone was having a great time... Punit and Shakti was also having a good fun loving chemistry onscreen as per script and some things were unexpectedly done by Punit... All this were taken as the part of the show... to entertain the audience...
Raghav since the beginning had a crush of Shakti...and because of the show he got the chance to be with her... He never showed that he liked her... As per the script scince season one he have to flirt with her and that made the situation even worse as he started to like her more and more each day...
Shakti had no idea about Raghav's feeling towards her... she used to take all his flirting as the part of the show... even when he used to flirt with her offscreen she never thought it was anything serious...
During shooting one episode... Shakti was really tensed about the performance of her team and Raghav was messing with her backstage before the episode starts...
Shakti : Raghav.. please yaar.. kya hai.. kyu pareshan kar raha hai mujhe... abhi toh shooting start bhi nahi hui hai...kabhi toh serious rehe... kitna tention hai... har baar baccho jaisi baiten karke irritate karta reheta hai...
saying this she went to her dressing room...
Raghav stood there still as he never expected this reaction from shakti... he felt hurt.. anger... embarrassment as few people noticed this... he also went outside the studeo avoiding people's glances...
Dharmesh saw all this but kept quite coz this was not the right time to talk to either Shakti or Raghav... he knew Raghav like Shakti... he have noticed how Raghav acts when Shakti is around... how he tries to make her laugh...
Shakti in her green room...
Shakti (thinking) : Shit... what is happening to me... me kyu itni choti si baat pe itna react kar rahi hu... Competition hai... mujhe itna sochna nahi chahiye... mene bichare raghav ko kitna kya bol diya.. uski toh koi galti bhi nahi thi...
suddenly she heard knock on her door... calling her saying the shoot is soon to begin...
As she went out she saw Raghav at the other side talking with the crew about some script... she wanted to go talk to him but the time was not right... the show started... everyone was on thier position...
Raghav saw Shakti talking to her team contestant... then he felt that someone was starting at him... when hi found who it was... he gave him a small smile... it was Dharmesh who was looking at Raghav giving him a confronting look... Raghav knew that Dharmesh witnessed the fight...
the show was going well... Raghav was doing everything right according to the script... but was more serious for the rest of the anchoring... everyone noticed it... even Remo sir asked him what was wrong... he just said that nothing is wrong... competition is getting tought... so he had to be serious.. and joked after it later... But Shakti and Dharmesh Knew the reason behind Raghav's behaviour... Shakti felt bad... Raghav was acting the same as he used to but only on screen... during breaks he ignored her.. he didn't even try to look at her...



hey guys.. so here js the first part of my story... hope you like it... and please do tell if i should continue this story or not... and guys please suggest some title for this story... thank you guys...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey write about shanit please because I think more people can relate to that and our imagination also will be wide in that case
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandy786

hey write about shanit please because I think more people can relate to that and our imagination also will be wide in that case


yeah I'm working on ShaNit story also will post soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely.. Don't know why but I love and enjoy Raghav-shakti more than Punit-shakti. So I am In for this lovely story. You have kept everything simple and intriguing. Love how Raghav tuned into serious just after Shakti scolding and advising raghav. Very interesting. Will wait for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow...intersting ..
please do continue .love it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls do continue. Love Raghav and shakti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why are you not updating it?
am waiting.
Plz post the second part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2

Precap : Shakti yells at Raghav for being childish... Raghav feels hurt as he was just trying to make her smile... Raghav have feelings for her but didn't tell anyone about it... Shakti feels bad for yelling at Raghav... Raghav acts normally on screen but ignored shakti offscreen...

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During the break Dharmesh excuses himself and corners raghav so no one can hear them
Dharmesh : Chal bata aab.. kya hua hai...??
Raghav : are kuch bhi toh nahi kya bhai.. aaj kyu sab mujhe ye hi sawal puch rahe hai
Dharmesh : Are kyu dil pe le raha hai.. usse ko kaha pata hai tu usse pasand karta hai... aur bichari aaj tention me thi issliye nikal gaya hoga anjane me... chill yaar...
Raghav : bhai.. kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samjh nahi raha hai
Dharmesh : abe dhongi... atlest mujhse toh jhoot mat bol... Tujhe shakti aachi lagti hai nah...
Raghav : aap ko kaise pata chala...
Dharmesh : baap hu me tera... aab chal.. chod yeah sab... meri meri baat sun.. Shakti ko bol de...
Before Raghav can reply on that.. Shakti came there...
Shakti : Raghav... baat karni thu tujhse...
Dharmesh goes from there giving them some personal space to talk
Shakti : Raghav... im really sorry yaar.. me kuch jyada hi bol gayi... me bahot tention me thi... aur sara frustration tujhpe nikal gaya... please gussa chod de... aase aacha nahi lagta.. tu masti karte hue hi aacha lagta hai...
Raghav smiles at this...
Raghav : are its okay yaar.. hota hai kabhi kabhi...
Shakti : nai.. phir bhi I'm really sorry... maf kar diya nah tune...
she said this... making innocent face at him
Raghav couldn't resist her cute face and hugged her...
she hugged her back
Raghav: bas kar pagli aab rulayegi kya...
Shakti laughed at his comment and broke the hug...
Shakti : chal aab.. shoot start hone vali hai...
They both goes back for shoot...
Dharmesh smiles seeing them together normal...
The shoot started and again Raghav was back on his Bakaiti mode... making jokes scripted and non scripted...
Shakti was happy seeing him normal again.
After the shoot ends everyone say thie goodbyes and leaves for thei home...
Dharmesh caught raghav wile he was going home..
Dharmesh : are bhai.. ruk..
Raghav : kya hua.. ghar nahi jana...
Dharmesh : ha jana hai.. pehela tu bol ... tune bola kya Shakti ko ki tu usse like kaeta hai...
Raghav : nai.. voh... me
Dharmesh : kya hua kya baat hai... chal ek kaam ka aaj mere gharPe chal... baat karte hai aaram se
Raghav agrees and goes to dharmesh's place with him
They both gets settle on the sofa... then Dharmesh asks
Dharmesh : abb bata kya problem hai
Raghav : bhai... samjh nahi aa raha ki kaise bolu me usse... matlab.. agar mene usse kaha aur usne mana kar diya toh hamari dosti bhi khatam ho jategi... i know me filmy sound kar raha hu.. but i dont want to lose her... aur mujhe nahi lagta ki voh mujhe friend se zyada kuch samjhti hai...
Dharmesh listening this hugs him...
Dharmesh : bhai... tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai... par baat sun meri... tu ekbaar apni dil ki baat bol... try toh kar...
Raghav: okay... parso Star parivar ki award party hai... toh vaha try karunga usse bolne
Dharmesh : yeah hui nah baat... ab chal sote hai.. me bahot thak gaya hai... tu bhi ja guest room me soja
Dharmesh gets up and heads to his room.. Raghav stays in the living room thinking about what Dharmesh said
Raghav (thinking) : kya karu... bolu Shakti ko what i feel about her... i doubt if she even likes me more than a friend...
Raghav feels asleep on the couch...
Next morning Dharmesh wakes him up
Dharmesh : Raghav... uthja...
Raghav : are sorry meko pata hi nahi chala me kab soo gaya...
Dharmesh : are koi nai... kya socha phir...
Raghav : mene bahot socha... Shakti ko bolne se pehele me janna chahta hu ki voh mere bare me kya feel karti hai ...
Dharmesh : toh phir ek sahi idea hai mere pass...

hey guys.. so here is the second part of my story... hope you like it... and please do tell if i should continue this story or not... and guys please suggest some title for this story... thank you guys..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot dear.I was eagerly waiting for this story to update.Finally you did it and i loved it once again.I know everyone is shipping ShaNit and want their story but you know what there is uniqueness in Raghav-shakti story and you should definitely continue this one.Story is simple,fresh,light hearted and intriguing.I loved how you give it a real touch.Loved how you are making Dharmesh an intregral part of the story and skipping Punit's part is making it more interesting.Will love to know what happen next.
As for the title,i can suggest you wehat i think is best for me- "Khel Khel Mein" Why i choose it because Raghav is flirting with shakti acc to script which means it is just an act or play for them.But doing such raghav eventually fall in love with Shakti.Hope you liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle55

Thanks a lot dear.I was eagerly waiting for this story to update.Finally you did it and i loved it once again.I know everyone is shipping ShaNit and want their story but you know what there is uniqueness in Raghav-shakti story and you should definitely continue this one.Story is simple,fresh,light hearted and intriguing.I loved how you give it a real touch.Loved how you are making Dharmesh an intregral part of the story and skipping Punit's part is making it more interesting.Will love to know what happen next.

As for the title,i can suggest you wehat i think is best for me- "Khel Khel Mein" Why i choose it because Raghav is flirting with shakti acc to script which means it is just an act or play for them.But doing such raghav eventually fall in love with Shakti.Hope you liked it.


Thanks dear ... means a lot to hear that you loved what i wrote ... and thanks for the title suggestion ... thanks again

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