Swadarsh OS ~ The Turnaround

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Forgot to mention, this ended as if on a cliffhanger. Will there be another part to this? Though even this is sufficient by itself - because the focus was on the conversation.

Yes. It was meant to focus on the point that Adarsh was turning around to think and see her point of view and how she got him to do that...

I don't intend to continue it as such...Don't know what else to write 😆

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sushfiza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

verification paper!

cv's forgot about it

swa raised d perfect point. it could help adarsh to see d truth!

ahh i wished to see all these swadarsh moments in d show😭

perfect os👍🏼

do write more😳

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dh19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome
This should suppose to happen in the show
Police verification- completely forgotten point
But there are many things which are missing due to finite series
It looks like each incomplete wish - whatever we are not able to see in show - priti will write on it
😉
Three cheers for priti in advance
Pls cont with the next part

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chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wonderful OS...plz continue...make Adarsh as Robin Hood pursue the truth...i guess due to quick wrap up the whole sequence after the blast was cut short...considering the long sequences of the tragic nyt i seriously expected a longer battle...but cvs ne end mein Adarsh ko bekar bana diya...yes he was with Swa but we didnt get to see much from him.

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parisjtaime

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This was amazing. Kudos to you girl. Keep writing more.

wish this was shown in the show.

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Sharmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Another great part from Dahleez.. I wish the cvs would have shown these poignant scenes too if they did not have had a deadline. But still reading this made my heart warm.😊

Will there be a second part of this where Adarsh finds proof of Asad being innocent? Hope there will be if u want.😊

Loved it again..another marvellous writing.👏

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Stylikson
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Priti this is exactly that what was needed... and I am even sure if the cvs wouldn't have rushed the show they would have shown this

Ohhh God so many missing things were there 😭

And please say that this has another part as well😛

They had a lot of potential. I guess they were just pressed for time in the end. But they always knew this was a finite series. When they created these possibilities themselves, I don't know why they didnt use it.

Anyways, no point complaining. Let us try and bridge all the gaps that the CV's missed. We might enjoy Dahleez as a better story is we fill in the missed aspects 😆

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Manonidz
I was so wishing for such poignant scenes bw them ...I wonder what the makers thought we are asking for ? We just wanted proper conversation bw the couple! 😭

Keep it up Pri !

I know. There was not one proper conversation between them, even after they resolved their differences (abruptly). Chodo. 😆

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
THIS! ❤️
Priti, you are our CV for our virtual dose of Dahleez. During Swadheenta's research, whenever I thought about the verification papers signed by Abhay, I know that even if she were to stumble on them, she would not use them or at least till she reached a hopeless point.

You have very beautifully used the idea to whip this entire episode. The conversation was touching, and everything more! I also liked the initial thoughts and feelings that you portrayed within the two, and the conversation before the confrontation. It would have been so amazing if we would have actually had a conversation like this in the show. :)

Kudos, girl! And thank you for writing this. ⭐️

😆

I was actually waiting for her to find out about the verification papers. When Abhay signed them without checking, we were all sure that would blow up in his face. Almost every chance thereafter, we kept waiting for these to show up. I was surprised that they totally left it unquestioned. This was the only thing that could go against Abhay but was left unquestioned. So many things went against Asad.

I am glad you enjoyed it. Adarsh acted like he was affected by everything Swadheenta was doing, but he never voiced it out much. And it was high time Swadheenta also got frustrated with everything that was happening around her.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Dumpling
I think dehleezz too had to live upto SP policy i wud say where the female lead s shown to b a super woman n leaves nothing for the male lead to do n leaves him looking dumb.

I know. Adarsh had so much potential. The show was meant to focus on Swadheenta's journey in her quest for justice, so it was understandable that she played an important role. But it was unrealistic that she would be able to do it by herself. I truly wished Adarsh had joined in to support her atleast half way through. Sighhh!

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