Swadarsh OS ~ The Turnaround

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: pikychu
Pri love this if the makers didn't go with SP demands then we would got want we all wanted loving ur writing

I know Deepz. If they were not pressed for time, and SP's demands, I am sure they would tell a slightly different story.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sushfiza
verification paper!
cv's forgot about it
swa raised d perfect point. it could help adarsh to see d truth!
ahh i wished to see all these swadarsh moments in d show😭
perfect os👍🏼
do write more😳

😆

CV's forgot a lot of things towards the end.

Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: dh19
Awesome
This should suppose to happen in the show
Police verification- completely forgotten point
But there are many things which are missing due to finite series
It looks like each incomplete wish - whatever we are not able to see in show - priti will write on it
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Three cheers for priti in advance
Pls cont with the next part

Thanks. That is the idea... because I missed them too... In my own head, if these things were included in some way, the entire story would make so much more sense. They created all these possibilities but didn't really act on it.

I am glad you enjoyed it... This is a OS just to show that Adarsh started thinking of other possibilities, and maybe started helping Swadheenta hereafter. I don't intend for this to be continued unfortunately. this was a One Shot.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: chemgirl
Wonderful OS...plz continue...make Adarsh as Robin Hood pursue the truth...i guess due to quick wrap up the whole sequence after the blast was cut short...considering the long sequences of the tragic nyt i seriously expected a longer battle...but cvs ne end mein Adarsh ko bekar bana diya...yes he was with Swa but we didnt get to see much from him.

Thanks. I am thinking of a plot where Adarsh works in Robinhood mode, but I don't know if it will fit well with the story that was told. These OS's are missing links in the story. I will try and think of another completely imaginary plot where Adarsh and Swadheenta work together towards resolving bigger problems. Let me see.

I had hoped to see so much more from the blast track. What I missed most was a collaborative effort between these 2.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
👏 wow! Nice..

Thank you Sana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: .rumki.
loved it
continue soon

Thank you. This was a One Shot. I will write something else... 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sharmi_swadarsh
Another great part from Dahleez.. I wish the cvs would have shown these poignant scenes too if they did not have had a deadline. But still reading this made my heart warm.😊
Will there be a second part of this where Adarsh finds proof of Asad being innocent? Hope there will be if u want.😊

Loved it again..another marvellous writing.👏

Thanks.

Actually this was meant to be a One Shot to focus on the fact that Swadheenta did something to help Adarsh get out of his unthinkable mode. And how after listening to her Adarsh actually started thinking. There is no continuation to this unfortunately...