Swadarsh SS ~ I am not Perfect ~ Last part, Page 17

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Dumpling
Just perfeccct '

Thank you 😊

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
👏 superb priti 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Adarsh heard everything 😆 saved himself 🤣
But i loved that 😳 SwAdarsh
& his attempt to be friendly with Asad again 👍🏼
Perfect new Beginning 👏

Thank you Sana. I am glad you liked it.

I had hoped that we get to see such scenes in the show, but since we will not, I am hoping to create some 😃

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Sharmi_swadarsh
Read the whole SS in one go...and WOW!!
You are a marvel..love ur writing..from the frst to this part..every line, every word beautiful..

Adarsh feeling guilty..to Swa's tricks of trying to seduce adarsh...to swa and suhasni's convo..are out of words...and last but not the least adarsh wanting to visit asad..this was touching..

Loving this SS so much...if Dahleez had been aired for a few more episodes then we may have been seen these situations too..but still have the fortunate to read this in ur story and actually imagining everything..

Loved it truly ❤️

P.S. Please pm me when u update the next..if u can please 😊

Thanks Sharmi. 😳

I am glad you enjoyed reading it. I am only planning one more part to this SS, or at best 2. Will let you know when I write the next bit.

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Dumpling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Priti may b sp come up with mini finite seriez for dehleez n incorporates all ur ideas 25 episodes 😛

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Dumpling
Priti may b sp come up with mini finite seriez for dehleez n incorporates all ur ideas 25 episodes 😛

😆

I will gladly give them the rights. I don't even want credit. Bas, Swadarsh dhika do

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Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Read it!
Bwahaha! So I was right! Adarsh actually heard the entire conversation between the three ladies. 😆

The whole conversation between Adarsh and Swadheenta was very sweet and something that was needed to clear things between them. Since Adarsh heard their convo, it also helped him understand what Swadheenta was truly going through.

It's a pleasure to see Adarsh wanting to reconcile with Asad. I doubt this is something that we will get to see in the show.

Enjoyed reading it!

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Read it!
Bwahaha! So I was right! Adarsh actually heard the entire conversation between the three ladies. 😆

The whole conversation between Adarsh and Swadheenta was very sweet and something that was needed to clear things between them. Since Adarsh heard their convo, it also helped him understand what Swadheenta was truly going through.

It's a pleasure to see Adarsh wanting to reconcile with Asad. I doubt this is something that we will get to see in the show.

Enjoyed reading it!

Yes you were right. He had heard the whole thing.

I was so hoping to see some light moments between them in the show, but really doubt we will get any. Maybe 1 during the gruhapravesh. But that is also in front of the entire family. Disappointing.

I still believe that maybe, as part of the script, they had incorporated details of Adarsh's regret and making it up to the Jilani's, Radhika's scarf becoming one of the evidence etc. But maybe they had expected to get a few more episodes. They may have had to edit out a lot of what they had originally planned.

What I do not understand is why were JJ not edited to incorporate some of these things?

And Manohar's act today. It disgusted me to be honest. Such hypocrisy!

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Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Yes, I'm positive that they have edited out some scenes. Since the case started, we haven't got any SwaDarsh moments, which is so ridiculous considering the fact that they're the main leads of the show.

The amount of JJ scenes that have been dumped on us is simply unfair and unjust. Even the Arvind track could have been ended by showing him captured after Adarsh confronts him and rescues Swadheenta. The whole hostage and Yash situation wasn't really needed. They could have given us some SwaDarsh instead.

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Meghna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

The next part is updated... Read it when you get a chance

exactly 😆 But I am so sure that if he gets drunk, that scene would be so cute

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Meghna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Pritiii this was

Literally unexpected 😆

Thanks to Pilliyarappa that he gave Adarsh some brain. .. he wasn't able to see what our dear Swa wanted ❤️ just like CVs are not able to see what we want to see 😡 but derby aye durust aye in Adarsh's case 😆

And Adarsh kitne araam se uski taang kheech raha tha 😆

And our desperate Swa sirf hi bolke resort chalenge 🤣

Amaziiinggg update soon 😃