~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Adarsh is such a cartoon! 😆

Adarsh and Maamu conversations since the past few updates have been a delight to read - full of humour and jovial banter.
But Adarsh's confession was a beautiful moment. All his emotions and feelings came gushing out and so did Swadheenta's tears. So they both meant more to each other than either accepted or was even aware. Lovely! Can't wait for their moments to begin. :)


He is a shy and simple guy but fun loving too. He is a cartoon really, just happy with his new found feelings.

Maamu is one of my favorite characters in the show too. He is just so amazing. And here too, he is one of the best, wanting the best for his children and going out to his way to ensure to get it.

I think you say some of the more beautiful things when it comes directly from the heart. Emotional moments cannot be thought out in the head. The more natural the better. But as emotional as Adarsh is, he is also a practical guy. That is why he wanted to go over what he was going to say to her. But Allah had different plans... I was just re-reading what I had written after reading your comment. It did feel nice, his confession that is.

Swadheenta already knew that Adarsh was better than Jeevan. But that was her practical side. She was too scared to upset her father and hence had her emotions bottled up. She just didn't want to face it. Maamu had seen that, as had Asad. And Adarsh, we have seen his turmoil. So, yes. Both of them like each other more than they even knew.

I have a plan for her confession. Let us see if I can execute it well.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Adarsh baba u r d cutest thing I ever see.

Adarsh n mamu. I love their bonding. Mamu is so understanding. Adarsh baba kuch seekho.. Finally swa get the bestest thing. They deserve each other. Confession

And reading ur ff is the most pleasant thing in the morning.. I just login n get the pm.. I was like.. Yupeee.. Thanks pri.. Lobe u

Continue soon


😳 Thank you.

I know, Maamu is the best! And Adarsh, what he is feeling is new to him. He has not been in love before... but he is learning fast 😆.

Swa lost consciousness after the accident while listening to Adarsh, and opened her eyes to see him with her. I thought that was so cute.

Will try and update again in the next couple of days
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was very good... mamu all time fav type... loved the confession part... will wait for d next one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
The most cute n adorable character is adhu😳
Confession☺️
Pree waiting for the update😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nyx-

lovely
thanks for pm😊


Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cuty16

It was very good... mamu all time fav type... loved the confession part... will wait for d next one...


Hey, thanks. Maamu is my all time fav too.. 😊
Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yawfeh

The most cute n adorable character is adhu😳

Confession☺️
Pree waiting for the update😳


Adarsh is sweet, I agree... and very cute too.. 😆

Sure. Will try and update soon. Thanks Gayu 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Totally loved it..
Mamu is so so understanding and the convos between adarsh and mamu are so well written..mamu is one of my favourite character in the show too..the way he speaks makes ppl warm towards him..be it swa or adarsh..
Adarsh's confession was so beautiful and it was portrayed beautifully too..adarsh practicing what he'll say and swa regaining consciousness just at dat time made the moment more sweeter..his words and her tears confessed their feelings for each other..even imagining both of them in my mind while reading this makes it even more special and wonderful..
Thank you for such an amazing update and ff..this is one of the best ff's i have read..
Waiting for swa's answer and her confession too..and definitely for the swadarsh moments to come.. :) :)
Edited by Sharmi_swadarsh - 9 years ago

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