Create Scenes (UPDATED NEW pg6) - Page 5

ok 😊
now i have so much work
- this scene
- homework--- so much long list
- and questions from motw
😊
will try to asap 😊

Tejali gets off the car and is about to go inside her house when abhi stops her.

Abhi: ermnm...tejali, 1 min..please zara ruko.😳😳😳

Tejali just stops there and turns around. Abhi is looknig here and there not looking straight at her😳😳😳 Tejali looks at him and gives him "What happened" looks😆😆

Abhi: errm..tejali..well Main tumhe kuch dena chahta hon.

Tejali is surprised, when abhi holds his hand out and he was holding a small box wrapped. Tejali gets shocked, she looks at him

Abhi: tejali please mana mat karna le lo.

Teji is disbelive takes the box from his hand and opens it gently, she gets shocked to see the earrings.

Teji is so happy and shocked: abhimanyu...yeh..sab kaise? yeh toh.

Abhi: I know, woh maine unse display wala hi kharid lein😳) (hayeeeee

Teji is sooo happy, she had no boundries of happiness.

Teji: omg..thanks abhimanyu, mujhe toh yeh bohout pasand thin, par tumne mere liye yeh kyon??😳😳😳

Abhi: bas tumhe achi lagein na, toh i thought to buy them for you, jo chezz apko achi lage usey le lena chahiye.😳😳😳

Abhi thinking "mujhe bhi nahi pata maine kyon kiya yeh tumhare liye"😆 (omg abhi bhi nahi samjha)😆😆😉

Teji gets so happy without realizing she just hugs him tightly, abhi gets shocked but inside enjoying it 😳 (chupa rustam)😉

He then also tried to hug her but beofre that teji realsies and moves away quickly😳😳😳 but steal glances from each other.,

Teji gets shy: thanx, saying this smiling she runs away from there.

and abhi too smiles and run his hands through his hairs😳

THE END

So guyz..liked it? should i continue more?😳😳 plzz do comment.

Reg,

IKA

awww. so sweet and romantic 😳
you're very good 👏 👏 👏
do continue 😳 😃
i'll try to 😃

Originally posted by: payal_r

awww. so sweet and romantic 😳
you're very good 👏 👏 👏
do continue 😳 😃
i'll try to 😃

awww thanx😳😳😳 wil ltry to write more😃

O wowwww thats AMAZING..great jobb ika
its soooooo sweet n romantic
gr888

btw ab next scence shud be abhijeet's or daya's..k?
thxxx

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

O wowwww thats AMAZING..great jobb ika
its soooooo sweet n romantic
gr888

btw ab next scence shud be abhijeet's or daya's..k?
thxxx

awww thankyou😳😳
sure, i think Abhi😳

Ye Pyar Kya Hain

Place: lonavla
Characters: ACP Pradyuman, Dr. Salunkhe, Abhijeet,Daya, Fredricks, Vivek, Devyana, Muskan, Dr. Tarika.
The Whole CID team along with forensic team go for a picnic in Lonavala.

ACP Pradyuman & Dr. Salunkhe were brushing up their brains and were taunting with each other as usual, but the difference was both were in good mood.

Daya & Abhijeet was beside on a lake, sitting there and was talking about their childhood.
Daya:(being very thoughtful & ruminative) ,abhijeet, yaha pe hum bachpan me picnic karne ke liye ate the,
Abhijeet: achchha??, tumhare parents ke saath?
Daya:( after a pause) nehi,
Abhijeet: to...?
Daya: ashram se
Abhijeet was ashamed for a little while and then he told--- I'm sorry Daya, main tumhe dukh pauchana nehi chahta tha
Daya: (with a very rueful smile) no abhijeet it's all right, mujhe maloom hai.
Abhijeet: hamara school to bohot strict tha, no picnic, nothing to enjoy, aur ghar se bahar ane ka koyi tarika bhi nehi tha,
daya:( with a smile) kyu??
Abhijeet: ma bohot strict thi, unhe bohot darr tha ke unke bete kharab na ho jaye



Tarika bumped against Muskan & Muskan was really irritated by this.
Muskan: kya Dr. tarika, dekh ke nehi chal sakte hai aap?
Dr. Tarika didn't answered but she was looking very excited and hesitant.
Muskan: kya baat hai, aap thik to haina?
tarika:nehi , ....
Muskan: nehi?? kya hua hai ap ko?
tarika: Muskan, tumhe maloom hai Daya kaha hai??
Muskan smirked and then frowned at Tarika and then asked --- kyu? Daya sir se tumhe kya kam hai?
tarika: mujhe kuchh baat karna hai unke saath.
Muskan( with a haughty attitude) baat?? kaisi baat?
tarika was silent, for a few moments she kept her eyes on muskan and then turned her face away.
Muskan: aajkal Daya sir pe bohot zada interest dikha rahi ho??
tarika( with stern face) that's none of your business.tarika stepped to go away but Muskan snatched one hand of tarika and said with scathing contempt--- tum jaisi kali larki ko Daya sir kabhi pasand nehi karega, samjhi. muskan went on her way.

Tarika was stunned , tears roll down her face and she stood there helding a tree,she was in a trance and she didn't know how much time passed by like that.
she awakened by someone's touch, as she startled to get the touch, she saw Devyana was there.
---arrey devyana tum? tarika asked pretending to be natural & happy
Devyana: tarika , aap ro kyu rahi hai?
tarika: nah, kaha? main thik hu,
Devyana; aap bol sakte hai, hum dono hum umru hai, phir kya hum dost nehi ban sakte?
Traika ( muskurake) Devyana, tumhe maloom hai Abhijeet aur Daya kaha hai, freddy aur vivek to lawn pe tennis khel raha tha lekin Abhijeet Daya aise gayab hai, sab ek sath ho jate to antakshari khelte,
Devyana: (with delight) ha, Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir to lake ke pas baitha huya tha
Tarika: sach?
Devyana: ha,main to akhri bar dono ko waha par hi dekha tha.
Tarika started to run and said-- thanks devyana, you are indeed my freind.
devyana was a bit astonished to see tarika's erratic behaviour and was watching tarika as much as possible
---deeev--- y--a--n---a, vivek yelled
--- ha,
-- come here na, freddy sir to thak gaye hai, tum khelo na.
--o.k vivek, I'm coming. Devyana agreed and went towards lawn.


Tarika came nearer to the lake and saw Daya & Abhijeet was talking about salunkhe & ACP's baldness.
---hmm, kya ho raha hai? main sir ko bata dungi.
Both were astounded and embarrassed.
--- bata dijiye. Salunkhe sir hamara kya karega?? Abhijeet told with a mumbling voice.
--- aur ACP sir?
Daya & Abhijeet both kept their eyes on each other and were speechless.
Abhijeet: arrey, Dr. tarika , aap ko pata hai Devyana aur Muskan kaha hai?
tarika: ha , main to dono se hi milke arahi hu,ap us pahar ki taraf jaiye,waha par hi honge woh log
Abhijeet blinked his eyes to Daya and whispered--- all the best
Daya: arrey boss tum .... daya was very much abashed
Abhijeet: take care.
tarika came beside Daya and sat. daya was feeling very squirm ... but tarika ... gazed at him for a little while and then said--- Daya, mujhe tumse kuchh kehna hai.
-- kahiye, Daya answered facing opposite tarika
Tarika opened her bag and took a tiffin box within it.She then gave it to daya and told-- ye tumhare liye
Daya was hesistant and a bit disconcerted.
Tarika gave him a titter and told--- tumko mung ka laddu,Imli ka achar aur muli ka paratha achchha lagte hai na? ye lo.
-- ye aap ko kahase ...
-- maloom hai.Tarika interrupted Daya and answered.
--Main sab jawab dungi, lekin pehle khalo na , tarika begged.
--nehi , main aise akele chhupke chhupke kha nehi sakta
tarika was a bit depressed and said--agar main batau ke kahase mujhe pata chala hai, to khyoge kya?
Daya was silent & didn't answer Tarika.
--Daya, main Mamta foundation me gayi thi.
Daya left gobsmacked and couldn't say anything for a few seconds
--kya!!! ........... aap mamta foundation ..... lekin kyu?
Tarika gazed deep into Daya's eyes and said--- ye tum jaise patthar ko samajh me nehi ayega.
With a feighned frown Daya told--- mujhe aapki baat samajh me nehi aaya.
--- woh kaise ayega? apne dil ko jo patthar bana liya.
---iye aap... Tarika interrupted Daya placing her palm over his parched lips and said--- Main sab janti hun.
within a few minutes her face was suffused with tears and she was blubbering badly
--- ye...please aap is tarike se ..... mat.... daya was helpless,abashed & confused.
But tarika was rasping in pain--- main kali hun, lekin meri dil me kali nehi hai Daya, kali nehi hai, vishwas karo, kali nehi hai,
-- arrey ye kya....... kisne kaha tumhe ye sab.....Daya was trying to pacify her.
tarika was crying her heart out, her face was contorted with tremendous pain.
to quell her agony Daya kept his hand over her windswept straggling hair & said--- tum istarika se maat roya karo, please , main... main... kya bolu tumhe...
Tarika took Daya's hand from her straggling hair and clasped it for a few second & then she very very softly caressed on it.
Daya was startled and blushed in crimson as tarika kissed him,he couldn't react for sometimes.
tarika wiped her eyes out and gave a veery fetching smile to Daya and the started to run towards the bunglow.
Daya was in daze & gaze and thought fervently--- yehi dusky beauty hi kya mere sapno me ati hai... har din ...har rat... har pal??

( To be continued)

Great scene cant wait to read the rest of it 😃

Do continue 😛 😳

Omg...its brilliant 👏 plz contine soon 😃 i love it

Thanks for liking the scene freinds 😃
yes, I am writing the next, and very soon will post that. o.k?