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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: freeda

hi
CAN'T I WATCH CID SPECIAL BUREAU FROM LAST WEEK PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ 😕

please kindly check the Archieve section before posting topics or requestiing on wrong topics. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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This week's Scene

Situation: A case involving Doshi's, who are biggest enimies of Tejali and her family (once were friends). ACP Pradyuman says that tejali cannot be involve in this case of this. A big confratation between Tejali and Acp Pradhyuman.

Characters: ACP Pradhyuman, ACP Ajatshastru and Tejal

ACP P: tejali tum es case mein kaam nahi karogi, jab tak yeh case chalta hai tum leave par ho.
Tejali and Ajatshastru are shocked
Tejali: But why? why I've done? Mera kasoor kya hai?
ACP P: Coz this case involves Doshi family and I know the history about u+family and the doshi family. So i can't trust u.
Acp P: Nahi ajatshastru, she's not going to part of this case and that's my orders.
Tejali is in shock
ACP A: but why?
ACP P: Coz of she will take part and maybe her enemity come in between and
Tejali (completes his sentence for him): and maybe to take my enmity I may betray CID team and produce wrong evidence to make them go to jail.
ACP P looks down and Ajatshastru too and Tejali is now fuming.
Tejali (rising her voice): ACP sir, app mujpe shak kar rahe hain, app ne Tejali Jai Chuhan par shak kiya.
ACP P: Go to ur leave.
Tejali: NO WAYS, Main kahin nahi ja rahi. App ne meri self respect ko thais pohonchai hai. I promise u ACP Pradhyuman (points finger at him) I promise you that ke yeh case main hi solve karongi.
ACP Pradhyuman is shocked and tries to say something but Tejali continues.
Tejali: Agle 48 hours mein yeh case solve karongi and main hi karongi. Yeh Tejali Jai Chuhan ka wada hai aur ACp sir appke liye yeh mera challenge hai. Aur meri zidd bhi, arre Tejali Jai Chuhan ki zidd ke agay toh uss bhagwan ko bhi jhukna padta hai toh app kiya hain? 😡 😡 aur aaj tak maine apni har zidd puri ki hai aur yeh bhi karongi.
She turns to leave but turns around and says: Hum Chuhans hain aur Chuhans aik bar kisiko apni zubaan dede hain toh palatey nahi. Aur mere papa ne muhje kisiko dhoka dena nahi sikhya not even our worst enemies 😡 😡 😡.
48 ghante.
And she leaves Ajat is shocked and ACP P is now relaxed and says
ACP P: bilkul apne baap par gayi hai, ab mujhe pura yakeen hai ke yeh case yehi solve karegi aur insaaf bhi hoga 😃

and laughs slightly and says
ACP P: bilkul jai par gayi hai, xerox copy uski jaisa bapp waisi beti. Baap ziddi toh beti akhadh ziddi 😃

THE END

By: Day_Dreamer

Please guyz do comment 😳
Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Got to say gave me a BIG shock, when she was shouting at Acp 😆
Incredible, super 👏
Your too good Ika 😃 😉

Thankyou for commenting on my scene 😛

didnt anyone else like my scene 😭😭
Edited by payal_r - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^^^aww thankyou soo much for liking it 😃 . I read ur scene and liked it do write more 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this scene is jus MIND BLOWING!!!---kinda funni though!!

GREAT WORK!!!!!!!day dreamer

i wonder where do u get all those interesting ideazzz???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Daisy!!

this scene is jus MIND BLOWING!!!---kinda funni though!!

GREAT WORK!!!!!!!day dreamer

i wonder where do u get all those interesting ideazzz???


Well, it is weird but my imagination some times get v wild and even i imagine these scenes in my dreamz😆 then next day i wake up and write them down and the post them 😆Thanx for liking

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


<span>Well, it is weird but my imagination some times get v wild and even i imagine these scenes in my dreamz</span><span> th<span>en next day i wake up and write them down and the post them </span></span><span>Thanx for liking</span>



what a coincedence 😛
i try to imgine things like this 😛
sometimes imagining it makes it comes in my dreams 😉😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: payal_r



what a coincedence 😛
i try to imgine things like this 😛
sometimes imagining it makes it comes in my dreams 😉😳

Excatly same with me😆😳....i' would love to dream about abhi all day all night😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyy day dreamer!!...u've got a CREATIVE mind!!...y don u participate in the october inter form fest!!..and write a song about this CID forum!! 😉


~Luv Daisy!!~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Daisy!!

Heyy day dreamer!!...u've got a CREATIVE mind!!...y don u participate in the october inter form fest!!..and write a song about this CID forum!! 😉


~Luv Daisy!!~

Woah...this is big news...😳thanx ...I'll try but not really sure. thanx anywayz..Btw can u gimme more detials about it.😊

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago

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