Create Scenes (UPDATED NEW pg6) - Page 2

Originally posted by: lucky_lakshmi

lol Uma "sit back and read".... 😉
Ikra....aap toh genius ho yaar...kitni baar kahoongi I really dunno..But U are so damn good!!!! 👏
I am really really proud that my sis is soo creative and talented...way to go yaar! Its rocking...Nice scenez...how do u get so many idead..I mean Fan Fic n all this...Hats off! 👏
well done and keep it up! 😊

n yep pl do continue yaar...u are doing a great job...I really loved that "Thaaaaadd"!!!😆😆😆

Thanxxx....awwwwww😳Thankyou, So wait till next week for next scene. Yeh "THAAD" kya hai?😆😆😆Slap toh nahi? Mujhe slap kis khsushi mein? Thanx for such nice words..awww😊 😳😳 By the way luks why don't you also try and write? (even abhi-teji😳)...

App logon ke saath se hi toh main courage karke yeh sab write kar pati hon, manage karti hon. College start hone ke baad bohut mushkil se time nikal pati hon. all of you who soppurts me, only coz of u people i manage tmie and update all this stuff. Thankyou so much. 🤗

Originally posted by: umi82990

WOW!! You are doing a great job!!

I don't think I'll be able to contribute to your great scenes. I will just sit back and read!

😆😆😆Only sit back and read?😉😆 why don't u also try and write. come on guyz try...😃Then u know after some poeple write the scenes we'l have Writing Scene Contest. 😃 What you think?

Thats a great idea!! 😃

that was amazing, your such a romantic person 😉 😳
very very good!! 😊
Sorry yaar, i keep forgeting to make a scene,
i think of some ideas then,i leave them 😕 😳
i'll try though 😳 😊

Originally posted by: payal_r

Thats a great idea!! 😃

that was amazing, your such a romantic person 😉 😳
very very good!! 😊
Sorry yaar, i keep forgeting to make a scene,
i think of some ideas then,i leave them 😕 😳
i'll try though 😳 😊

Aww...thankyou😳 romantic person toh main hon hi na😆😉. its ok take ur tim. But do write the scene.😃
By the way RAMAZAN MUBARIK to everyone😃

Sorry, for taking so long!! 😳

This Scene includes: Acp Ajatshatru, Dr Niyati, Akshay, Jasmine, Pratap, Tejali, Samar, Abhimanyu, Dr Niyati's ex- boyfriend 😉 , a person (no name)

Everyone's in the Bureau, working on a case about a murder of a little boy and its night time around 19:30, suddenly the lights blow, all the computers turn off and the electricity in the bureau goes out. The electricity elsewhere is working except the bureau. Acp tells Samar, Tejali and Abhimanyu to go and check out what the problem is, Dr Niyati and Pratap go to get the torches, its really quiet but then BANG, they hear a bullet fire. It fires again and this time it hits Jasmine on her arm 😲 , everyone comes back, the lights turned on. Acp Ajatshatru, Samar, Tejali, Pratap, Abhimanyu, went to see and find out who fired the bullets. Akshay put a bandage around Jasmine's arm, while Dr Niyati was watching, thinking how sweet 😉😆 .

Abhimanyu caught the person who fired the bullets, when they questioned him, he said that the bullets were supposed to hit Dr Niyati, but bad aiming, as she knew the person very well who murdered the little boy and would easily find who it was. The person who fired the bullets confessed It was Niyati's ex- boyfriend, everyone got a big shock especially Akshay and Dr Niyati (I would love to see the expressions on their face 😃 )

23:00 at night and They arrested him (Dr Niyati's Boyfriend) at his house, they got back to the bureau, Tejali and Abhimanyu take him away, everyone's looking at Niyati and asking since when did you have a boyfriend, and she responses why can't I have a boyfriend and leaves with a grin on her face.

Sorry if it was boring, I'll continue if you want me to 😃 , but won't take so long next time 😳 😳

Do comment! Do say if it was good or bad, how to improve 😛
Payal 😛

Wooowwww gr8 job Payal👏
Brilliant, marvelous 😃 😃 😃
Please do write more scenes 😃
all the best,
regards
day_dreamer 😊

man day_dreamer u r damn good yaar i just luv ur story its damn good man i could just imagine my self there 😆

Originally posted by: sallu_lover

man day_dreamer u r damn good yaar i just luv ur story its damn good man i could just imagine my self there 😆

good tum imagine karo, but plzz haan mere abhi ke saath khudko imagine mat karna😆😆😉 Thanks for liking it 😃

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Wooowwww gr8 job Payal👏
Brilliant, marvelous 😃 😃 😃
Please do write more scenes 😃
all the best,
regards
day_dreamer 😊

Thankyou so much 😃
sure, will love to do more scenes 😉

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