~Koi Apna Yan Koi Ajnabe~IMP/Last Par p36 - Page 11

it would be cool if we had a picture of rohan 😊

I am not aware of this fan fic till my sis Iqa told me..Sis u are the best!!1 For u I am reading the fan fic!!! So far so good lemme complete reading it Aap sach much shaayar ho! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: lucky_lakshmi

I am not aware of this fan fic till my sis Iqa told me..Sis u are the best!!1 For u I am reading the fan fic!!! So far so good lemme complete reading it Aap sach much shaayar ho! 👏 👏

Thankyou ji sis.😆😳 i'm happy u liked it, but as u'll read more u'll like it more. This credit goes not only to me but also my other sis, my friend Sallu_lover.😃 without her I did not had courage to write it.

To WASU,

Thankyou so mcuh for supporting me in to rite this fan-fic, i know sometimes i annoy u😳, but thans for supporting me. three cheers for u:

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To luks, thanx main hon shair akhir Big B ko impress jo karna hai😆. looking forward to your more replies. 😳

Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

Part 12
Rohan smiles and looks at teji while she's trying not to look in his eyes. and finally say good bye and leave. Teji thinks "Strange guy, but nice guy" and look at herself in mirror and smiles and goes.

While in bureau Dr. Nayati calls Acp and tells him to come fast she got some clue.

ACP, Akshay, Abhi, Ashwini, Samar goes to Dr. Nayati tells them that she got one clue. Acp asks what clue? Dr tells that these both girls are killed by one person. Acp rolls his eyes (arre every1 knows this, tell something new lol😆) She tells that the murder weapon is "Scalper" (its kind of knife). All look at each other😉. While Pratap calls acp and acp aks him to come beauru. They all leave from beauru.

Tejali's House
Tejali comes home, goes to her room. She then looks herself in a mirror and remember Rohan's words "Has someone ever told u that how beautiful u r and esp. ur eyes". She smiles 😳and then suddenly her eyes goes on the tweety baer which was hanging on the mirror and remembers her and Abhi's time when he bought this for her.
Flashback: Abhi and teji are shopping and Teji bought almost all shopping mall and Abhi was holding all the bags. Then at the ned when they were about to go out of mall teji stops and Abhi sees in ther direction her eyes were looking and sees a lovely Tweety bear. She really wanted to buy it but knew Abhi was really tired so she goes. Both its in car when Abhi says: I'll be back teaji I think I left one bag back in the shop, and goes. While teji waits after 5 mins she also goes to mall and goes into that shop and asks salesperson that She want to buy that Tweety bear. But salesperson says that that one was last one and someone just buyed it and she directly goes back to car and sits with her off mood. Abhi was waiting for her and shows the bag her left. Teji didn't feel like opening it but on Abhi's insists she opens the bag find the Tweety Bear and she gots so happy and hugs Abhi and asks him: how did u know I wanted this?
Abhi: teji we may not know our own choice but definitely know each others choice. 😳
And teji gets happy and both hug. Flashback ends;
Teji cries and thinks no Abhi we were wrong we certainly not know each other's choice and then takes the tweety bear and puts in the cupboard. (poor abhi)

Morning
In beauru ACP gets call from someone telling that they found a girl's body. All officers go to the crime scene (teji was also there). This time with the body they also find the murder weapon a SCALPER.
Akshay: so Sir Dr. Nayati was right murder weapon is scalper. (akshay why r u behind Nayati still?😡)
So ACP asks Akhsay, khusal, Jas and samar to take boday to forensic and also a scalper, while others investigate.
While nearby teji and Abhi investigate while investigation Abhi teji splits and teji goes to nearby dhabba. And while questioning her eyes caught someone and is shocked to see the person there. IT is ROHAN. Rohan sees her and waves at her, she also waves and rohan starting coming towards her. Meanwhile Dhabba people turn there roadi's volume up and teji gets annoyed with this and songs plays:

Pal do pal ki masti hai
Bas do din ki yeh basti hai – 2
Cheen yahan par mehanga hai aur maut yahan
Maut yahan par sasti hai
Gumnaan hai koi badnaam hai koi
Kisko kabhar koun hai woh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi
And teji tells them to turn volume down. While she is shocked to see rohan and rohan comes and tell her
Ro: hi, I told u we'll meet soon. And teji remembers his words and gets surprised by his good confidence. 😳
Teji: what r u doing?
Ro: Well usually people stops at Dhabbas to eat, I'm not sure what u do in Dhabbas? 😆
Teji llaughs and gets embarrassed😳: I mean here so far from Mumbai.
Ro: well I was going for a some out of Mumbai so thought to stop here. What about u?
Teji: investigating the case. And then suddenly stops herself and realises her mistake
Ro(excitedly): oohhh. So u r police officer?
Teji bitting her lip and confused: errr, no actually CID SB officer.
Ro gives her his million dollar😃 smile and teji gets embarrassed and say: I gotta go, rrrmm bye.
Ro (smling): hum phir milenge
Teji whiel going trudn around and simles ans waves at him and goes and Abhi who saw this (not heard) gets mad at teji even more for mot telling him about her new friend. (aww abhi, why dont u ask herself?😆😉)

In Forensic
Dr. Nayati is investigating and finally says:
Bingo.. Akshay looks at her and jas gets jealous
Aksh: what happened? Looks like appki lottery lag gayi.
Nayati: Not mine but urs, there are some fingerprints of killer on the Scalpar.
Then they start matching the fingerprints but unfortunately that have no luck.
Khushal: looks like this person never had any criminal roecord.
Jas: but the way he is murdering girls looks like he's criminal.
With this they all leave for Bueau

Buearu
Akshay tells him what happened in forensic. They all discuss how discusting he is. Then Abhimanyu comes and tell ACP that the girl (who murdered today) lives in Banglore with her family mo one is here. So ACP tells
ACP: Abhi, teji and Pratap u all go to banglore right now and tell girls parents about this and try to find some clues from there. All trio gets shocked hearing they'll be going together. 😆😉

THE END

Preview: what will happen when the war will begin between love and friendship? Will love bow down in front of friendship or this war will continue?

P.S. pheeww its over this is the longest part I think I've wrote so far. 😉

By:
day_dreamer 😊 & Sallu_Lover 😊

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

To WASU,

Thankyou so mcuh for supporting me in to rite this fan-fic, i know sometimes i annoy u😳, but thans for supporting me. three cheers for u:

Hip Hip Horray

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Hip Hip Horray👏

To luks, thanx main hon shair akhir Big B ko impress jo karna hai😆. looking forward to your more replies. 😳

jaanu anything for ya thats y best friends r to help each other

this story of ours is soo good

i will always be there to do the story

Originally posted by: sallu_lover

jaanu anything for ya thats y best friends r to help each other

this story of ours is soo good

i will always be there to do the story

Aaawwww, u r my best friend jaanu,

acha sirf story ke liye mere liye nahi?😳😆 (just kidding)

Koi Apna Yaan koi Ajnabee

Part 13
ACP: Abhi, teji and Pratap u all go to banglore right now and tell girls parents about this and try to find some clues from there. All trio gets shocked hearing they'll be going together.
All trio tries to argue but Acp is adamant, and asks then to pack their bags and leave. (aiise keh raha hai jaise beauru se nikaal raha ho) they all leave. In car park Abhi goes to his car while Pratap and teji goes to their and then Pratap goes to Abhi and after sometime says: I'll pick u up in 1 hour, before Abhi could say Pratap says: sir said we have to go together. Then pratap leaves.

1 hour later
A car stops front of Abhi's house, its Pratap and teji. Pratap honks and Abhi sees it and comes out. Teji sees the house and remembers the night. After that night teji did not came to this house did not had courage to. Abhi comes and sits at the back, coz teji, Pratap sitting in front. Then they begin their journey, and they reach banglore in 4 hours (sorry, guyz don't know how long it takes). Throughout the journey no one talked to each other, while teji fall asleep. After reaching to go to hotel and take the key from reception and goes to their rooms for fresh up.

Morning
All three of them goes to that girl's house (let's name her Preity) and imform her parents about death, preity's parents beakdown teji and Abhi console them. Preity' parents decide to leave for Mumbai, and these trio leaves afterwards in night, coz they had to find about this girl.

They all go to Priety's workpalce and find out that just 3 days ago she was transferred to mumbai brach (she works in bank). After getting their findings they decides to go back to mumbai.

Its evening now, and Pratap decides to have dinner before leaving coz he know teji hasn't eaten since morning.
P: I think before leaving we should have dinner.
T: but then we'll be late.
P: But u've not eates since morning, and in this condition u need to have proper food.
T smiles and aggress and looks at abhi, who was rather bored and annoyed not a bit interested in their care talk.
A (mokingly): u both go, I don't want to ruin ur ROMANTIC dinner.
Pratap gets surprised and Teji is rather had 250 watts ka jhatka.
A: I'm going for some important work, when u both finished call me I'll came to car.
With that he turns to leave when pratap starts
P: Abhi till when u'll behave like this, we used to such a good friends, for our friendship sake stop this, u r hurting teji and me. Why are u being so childish?
A (getting angry): Mr. Pratap kochar we were friends our friendship broke the day u both took such a big step without telling me. When u both betrayed me, my friendship, broke my trust. Abhi holds pratap's collar.
Teji had tears in her eyes and put her hands on her ears coz she could not bear one more accuse of abhi. Pratap was so shocked to see him angry like this. (hhmmm seems like Pratap's angry young man award now goes to abhi)
T: Leave it abhi, and Shut up.
A (shouting and points finger at her): U SHUT UP.
Teji gets scared with abhi's this behaviour and holds pratap. Abhi sees this and gets hurt and leave from there.
Teji was crying pratap holds her face and wipes her tears, and convince her for dinner. Teji was in no mood now, Pratap had very togh time comvincing her and finally they both go to resturant and have dinner.

Beach
In meantime abhi is at beach sitting on a rock thinking "Why I'm behaving like this? What happens to me when I see them both together? Why cant I control myself? Today I've hurted teji so much, when I don't wanted to hurt her?" and after sometimes he gets up and leave.

He finally comes to car and sits and sees pratap and teji there. Journey starts with silence. Raining starts half an hour car jolts and stops.

Their car beaks down all three of them gets out of the car to check the car pratab holds tej's hands, abhi is just looking n gettting jealous n says that u r pregnant n at this condition u should bt studying so go n sit in side.
pratab n tej smiles as they r smiling from the middle abhi is just starring at them n raining very hard (haila soo much of jealousy from abhi) the car doesnt get fixed as it has major problem in it abhi n pratab says there is a house over there maybe we should go there for the night until we get a help. (aslo they tried to call but no network)
abhi is standing in the rain n pratab says wait i will get tej from the car.
pratab opens the door n tells tej that there is a house there we r going to spend the night there as the car is broken n its not going to be fixed tonite. Teji is getting out of the car n abhi is just standing SUDDENLY tej's foot slipped n then pratab catches her they both look into each other's eyes. but then tej's looks at abhi too n she stands up. pratab helps tej to walk n goes in the house. They knock at the door and someone opens then door.

The End

By: sallu_lover😊 & day_dreamer😊

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Aaawwww, u r my best friend jaanu,

acha sirf story ke liye mere liye nahi?😳😆 (just kidding)

of course we r good mates

ufff oh u n u jokes 😆

Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

Part 14
Someone opens the door Abhi asks him can they spend night there? As their car broke down and also its raining heavily. A guy starts thinking while. Then guy (he's servant ram singh) says ok, but till morning only as the owner in not in town, so they've to leave tomorrow.

Then he brings them to guest rooms (which have 2 rooms) and also gives them the night colthes to change as their clothes are wet.

After a while when they all settle down ram singh brings "Kawa" (its kind of tea which is really bitter) and gives them. Teji makes faces as she does not like "kawa" but Pratap says she need to have it, as it'll make her feel better. But teji refuses Pratap tries really hard (while whole time Abhi is looking at teji who is looking so cute while making those faces😳) but then Pratap makes such a cute sad puppy face which makes teji laughs and Abhi gets so annoyed.😆😉
A (mockingly): Have it Tejali before he bend downs on his knees. U never know he might romantically proposes u. (OMG ABHI, its look like u wanna propose her😳)
Pratap gives him an angry look and teji inside knows that Abhi is getting jealous so she takes opportunity and knows how to shut his mouth.

Teji gradually put her hand below Pratap's chin and make him look at her😳. And Smiles at Pratap and says
T: arre baba, I was joking na, I'll definitely drink it for u, and for our child and yea for me too, I know If I'll feel sick u won't bear it. 😳😉

Abhi now was burning inside so much that from his heat inside the whole room's temperature was rising He felt like someone gave him a really tight slap across his face. The cup Abhi was holding so tight the with the tightness cup can break into pieces any minute. Teji was enjoying this moment and knew now he's mouth is shut for good. Pratap 1st surprise then seeing Abhi's reaction knew what teji was really upto.

Abhi without saying puts the or say bangs the cup on table hard and starts to leave when suddenly he starts sneezing and teji could not control herself and say
T: Abhi, drink "johar Joshanda" now, coz with that only your cold gonna get better. Then suddenly bit her lip and what she said. While Abhi was surprised a bit and was soo happy inside that she knows that. Then pretends the he did not hear it and goes. Pratap looks at her and smiles.
P: Its so strange na. tum uski (Abhi) ki choti si choti baat janti ho ke uski cold sirf "johar Joshanda" se hi thik hoti hai, (teji lower her eyes) par who tumhari zindagi ka itna bada sach nahi samajh sakta.
T: I'm sure he'll understand 1 day.
P: But I'm afraid by then maybe its too late. Tejali u still have time to think, coolly think through ur decision and tell Abhi the truth before its too late.
T: I've made this decision after thinking a lot, and I'm not gonna change my decision now. I'm so lucky to have companion like you, and happy my child will have u as father.
Both smile and Pratap hugs her as a friend. 😳
Pratap then leaves as now teji needs to go to sleep too. He goes to his room which he and Abhi unfortunately they had to share, so as soon as Pratap comes Abhi goes out out in lunge and sleep on couch. (Their room is little far from teji). Teji then fells thirsty (u just had a "Kawa" girl) and goes to kitchen. She then drinks water and then goes out from kitchen there's another room next to kitchen she hears someone talking on and goes there (how rude, where r ur manners girl?) and the person is still talking. Its too dark coz light is not working in that room. She hears the voice which is talking on phone and teji thinks she heard it somewhere. Teji then remembers and thinks his voice matches with Rohan and says:
Teji: Rohan u here? Is that u?
The person is not moving.
Teji: Are u Rohan? Answer me. Someone from behind taps her, she turns around and its ram singh.
RS: What r u doing here? And who are you talking to?
Teji: him. Pointing backwards still her face at RS.
RS: looks where she's pointing and says: WHO? There's no one there.
Teji: what rubbish. And turns around and sees no one is there and is shocked. She tries to convinces RS she saw someone there, and his voice matches with Rohan.
RS: Who Rohan? My owner's name is "Tarun Desai. I think you need to go to sleep, I think Kawa is affecting you.
Teji gets so mad at him but doesn't say anything, and was giving herself a second thought as If really she saw that or was her mind playing with her.
RS: go madam go back to room.
Teji starts leaving when her hand bangs with something and it falls, teji sees its frame and its fallen downwards (means, picture is on ground side) teji picks it up in that way, she almost turns it when Rs snatches it from her and says
RS: sont touch anything, saab doesn't like it.
Teji gets mad and leaves from there.
She comes to room and sits on bed and starts thinking "was it really Rohan or my imagination, well, I didn't saw his face but his voice…I can't forget his voice. But where did he vanished? I think its my imagination" with this thinking she goes to sleep.

After everyone goes to sleep a guy (who teji saw and thought it's Rohan) goes to the guest room, while going he sees Abhi sleeping on couch in lounge and goes near him making sure he's sleeping than goes to Pratap's room and sees him sleeping then sees his bag and check the bag and then find the ID card (CID SB)
Guy: ohh thats mean my guess was right, so these are from CIDSB.
And then keeps the ID card back and goes to Teji room. Sees her sleeping and then goes by her and then covers her with blanket and slightly touches her face and pulls the curtains together and goes from the room.

Morning
They all three have their breakfast and thanks Ram Singh, Pratap and Abhi goes to car while teji coming slowly, then she also goes out from the main door, and she sees someone in garden and goes behind him and again sees him and thinks he's same who she saw in room and thought he's Rohan. While going Pratap calls teji and she turns around and Pratap signals her to come and she nods. She turns around and shocked to see no one is there. Again thinks her mind playing with her and leaves.

They all sit in car and leaves. While sitting in car teji thinks "Is this my imagination or was it Rahan? But how can he be here when he's in Mumbai. Ram Singh was so wired na. I can't forget Rohan's voice. Well, I think its my imagination, well Rohan is kind of person who you want to imagine all the time." And smiles at herself and slaps on her head (OMG..girl now u falling for him😡.) While Pratap was watching her and asks
P: What's the matter?
Teji just make some excuse. Finally they reach Mumbai and goes to CIDSB.

THE END

By: Day_Dreamer & Sallu_Lover

P.S. Finally its finished, phewww longest part so faar. hope u'll like it. sorry, for delay, my copmuter not worknig soo.