~Koi Apna Yan Koi Ajnabe~IMP/Last Par p36 - Page 13

Originally posted by: sim_indian

i can't wait till friday...great story guys!!! waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting and waiting some more for friday😃 ....u should write this in ur own book "koi apna yaan koi ajnabee- by sallu_lover and day_dreamer" it'll be a hit!😉

good idea. 😃 1st let us finish here, then we'll publish it.😆😉 Wat say wasu?😉

but if we finish writting n here n finish it n then decide to write a book wouldnt some steal our story

Originally posted by: sallu_lover

but if we finish writting n here n finish it n then decide to write a book wouldnt some steal our story

Yep totally.😳

Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

Part 16
Abhi still cannot remember where he saw this man, but was sure he saw. (Ufff he's in CIDSB and still such a bad memory😡)

In Night
Pratap is driving Teji home from doctor's appointment. He drops her home and goes.

Rain starts heavily. Teji looking trough window and shivers, she was lost in her thoughts when a door bell jolts her back to the reality. She thinks who can come this time? And opens the door. And is shocked to see Rohan all socked.
Ro: my motorbike actually… and when he looks up shocked to see Tejali.
T: App?
R: oppss.. Hi I'm sorry didn't know it was your house. Well, I didn't thought ke hum itni jaldi phir milenge. (haan han tumne toh 5 saal baad ka kaha tha na😆/)
T (Smiling rather shy): App yahan kaise?
R: Bike se..(😆😆..I lvoe this' boy's sense of homour😳) both Laughs sorry bad joke, actually my bike broke down and its raining really hard so I thought to get some help from here.
T: Oh yea sure.
R: Yahin se, don't u invite inside whoever comes to ur door.
Teji now realises what he meant and invites him in. Now he was totally drenched.
Teji then get towel for him, and goes in the kitchen to make "coffee" for him. Then rohan starts to sing these words of song:
Kisiko samjhein hum apna
Kal ka naam hai ek sapna
Kal ka naam hai ek sapna

Teji hears it and is little surprised and then goes in the living room and is surprised to see there's no Rohan, then she turns around and jolts back to see Rohan standing in front of her.
T: U scared me so much. I'm making coffee it'll be ready soon. Rohan is just staring at her, Teji is getting little uncomfortable and tries to look away. Then she goes in kitchen where Rohan follows her and enters the Kitchen Rohan moved his head left n right n gave evil look to tej n tej is feeling abit scared now. n teji is trying to make coffee, rohan says u know tej iam the killer 😃, mujhe maloom hai tum bahat aachi lardki hoo but phir be mujhe tumko khoon karna hoga
Rohan then put his hand in pocket and that out the SCALPER. (Haila, I was sure this boy is not good for Teji😳)
R: how long I waited for this, now its your turn to die. I'm sorry teji u r a nice girl but I've to do this.
Yess, u r rite guyz its ROHAN!!!!! 😆😉😳
Rohan crazily starts singing:
Aaj ager tum zinda ho toh kal ke liye
Toh kal ke liye mala zaphna
Gumnaan hai koi badnaam hai koi
Kisko kabhar koun hai woh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi

A cup falls from teji's hands and Rohan turns around and smiles and starts moving towards her. Teji was so shocked that she could not even find her feet to move away.
R (while slowly moving towards her): Woow red my fav colour, sindoor lal, mirchi lal (haye haye mirchi, uff uff mirchi😆), Gussa ke rang laal, VEHSHAAT ka rang bhi laal (when he says this he sees Vehshaat I tteji's eyes) aur khoon lal, then starts laughs maniacally. Now he's front of teji and teji finally gather herself and says:
T (shocked, shaking): ohh, it was u who mur..der all the girls. Rohan hoo..w co..uld u doo thi…ss? (poor girl )
Tej is very shocked to see that she became friend to a serial killer, she tells rohan that it was u who who muuuurderr all those gilrs.
T (whispering): ho..ww?
R: who Rohan? I'm Ashu.
Teji is now in complete total shock.
A/R: ufff enough talk now, I've to kill u, sorry, beautiful girl. Bye bye now. (oh plzz dont do this, orelse how our story will complete?😕)
T: But wh…y did u killed all the girls? Tum pagal ho kya?
A/R (Shouts): MAIN PAGAL NAHI HON. NA MERI MAA PAGAL THI.my mum wasnt pagaal but still she went to mental hopistal, n then at skool everyone was paying me out n used to say that my mum was pagaal, then he punches the door, he says in a very angrily voice MY MUM WAS NOT MENTALLY ILL,he says in skool no one would be my friend, no girl would wanna talk to me so thats y i hate every beautiful girl.
Now Rohan/Ashu saying this pushes her n she hit her head on the table n then he slowly takes his scalper n govles out.

In Buearu
Abhi was looking at sketch and then suddenly remembers that he saw him at the dhabba with teji and then thinks teji must know something about him and then he tells ACP now All CIDSB officers sits in car and starts going towards Teji's house.

Teji's house
Tej sat up n her head is spinning around n she manages to scape from rohan.
R/A: Tuck tuck, come on girl don't make me run now, I promise I'll go easy on u.
Teji still running in self defence from one room to other, but Rohan is near her, she quickly runs into the store room and looks the door and calls Pratap (there is an extension phone in store room) Pratap's phone ringing and not picking up
T: pllzz pick up Pratap pick up I need u.
Pratap picks up the phone (finally)
P: Hello..hello
T (whispering): Pratap..he.s here. He'll kill me.
P (shocked): who? What happened? dont worry tej i will be there in like two mins u stay in there i will get there as soon as I can. (aawww u r an angel😳)
Teji was about to tell him when suddenly Rohan starts banging the door, to make it open.
Pratap runs to his car and starts driving as fast as he could.

At some road CIDSB people are stuck in the middle of traffic. (uuff jaldi karo, ladki ki jaan khatre mein hai 😡)
Abhi: damn it. Pata nahi yeh trafiic kab kaam hogi

Teji's house

Rohan/Ashu is still banging when teji trying other way other, when her eye caught on something It's a main switchboard and quickly goes there and take the switch out and the whole house's lights goes off. Rohan/Ashu gets pissed and finally opens the door and tries to look for her, teji meanwhile trying to reach the door. Ashu starts singing:
Maut ko kudh heerani hai
Maut ko kudh heerani hai
Aye sada virano se Jo paida howa
Paida howa woh fani hai
Gumnaan hai koi badnaam hai koi
Kisko kabhar koun hai woh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi
Gumnaan hai koi kisko khabar koun ha iwoh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi
Teji then sees a rod and picks it up and about to him when he turns around and cut her hand (in which she was holding rod) with scalper and blood starts to flow. He grabs her and teji struggles and finally kicks him hard and runs.
Pratap is driving totally madly.
He runs behind teji and finally catches her, about to stab her now and teji hits him with lamp and he falls on ground. Teji is crying and now she finds her feet and starts to run for life when suddenly Ashu gets up and holds teji's feet and make her fall, she falls on sofa. Teji cries in pain. He then holds both of her hand and take the scalper and teji closes her eyes and shouts: NOOOO
Teji opens her eyes and sees Pratap is here (yippiie my boy😳) and fighting with ashu teji hides behind sofa. Finally CIDSB team reaches teji's house. (haan sab kuch ohne ke baad😆)
Pratap kicks him and make him fall on ground and point gun at him. Teji comes and hugs Pratap tightly and snobs a little. Pratap holds her tight while still pointing gun at ashu and ashu falls unconscious and finally team comes inside and is shocked to see the horror. Abhi gets so shocked without thinking he runs towards teji ad asks her if she's fine. CIDSB team get hold of ashu and he regains conscious he sees teji so scared and asks her
R: Why are u scared of me?
T: Pratap he's ashu.
R:I'm not ashu I'm rohan damn it.
All are shocked CIDSB team takes him away while he's shouting he's not Ashu but Rohan.
Teji is badly hurted so she falls unconscious so Pratap takes her to the hospital.
In Bureau
Doctor tells then that Ashu and Rohan are same person but suffering from Split personality disorder. All are shocked. Doc also says when he's Rohan he's fine but when he sees RED colour he becomes Ashu and starts to murder all the girls, but after he become Rohan again he don't remember anything. ACP says take him to the mental asylum (cant think of anything else lol).
In hospital (Where teji is admitted)
All CIDSB team goes while Pratan abhi were there already. doc comes out and says to pratab n abhi n everyone,
doc say to pratab: we r very luck that she came on perfect time if it was a bbit late then she would have lost her baby. Everyone gets shocked and relievd that she's fine.
D: She has to stay under observation for few days. 1 of u has to stay with her 24-7
Before abhi could say anything pratap says
P: I'll be with her always.

THE END

P.S. in Blue are my personal comments.😳 s oguyz how did u liek our twist? Pura twist kar diya na?😉

By: Sallu_Lover😊 and Day_Dreamer😊

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

Part 16
Abhi still cannot remember where he saw this man, but was sure he saw. (Ufff he's in CIDSB and still such a bad memory😡)

In Night
Pratap is driving Teji home from doctor's appointment. He drops her home and goes.

Rain starts heavily. Teji looking trough window and shivers, she was lost in her thoughts when a door bell jolts her back to the reality. She thinks who can come this time? And opens the door. And is shocked to see Rohan all socked.
Ro: my motorbike actually… and when he looks up shocked to see Tejali.
T: App?
R: oppss.. Hi I'm sorry didn't know it was your house. Well, I didn't thought ke hum itni jaldi phir milenge. (haan han tumne toh 5 saal baad ka kaha tha na😆/)
T (Smiling rather shy): App yahan kaise?
R: Bike se..(😆😆..I lvoe this' boy's sense of homour😳) both Laughs sorry bad joke, actually my bike broke down and its raining really hard so I thought to get some help from here.
T: Oh yea sure.
R: Yahin se, don't u invite inside whoever comes to ur door.
Teji now realises what he meant and invites him in. Now he was totally drenched.
Teji then get towel for him, and goes in the kitchen to make "coffee" for him. Then rohan starts to sing these words of song:
Kisiko samjhein hum apna
Kal ka naam hai ek sapna
Kal ka naam hai ek sapna

Teji hears it and is little surprised and then goes in the living room and is surprised to see there's no Rohan, then she turns around and jolts back to see Rohan standing in front of her.
T: U scared me so much. I'm making coffee it'll be ready soon. Rohan is just staring at her, Teji is getting little uncomfortable and tries to look away. Then she goes in kitchen where Rohan follows her and enters the Kitchen Rohan moved his head left n right n gave evil look to tej n tej is feeling abit scared now. n teji is trying to make coffee, rohan says u know tej iam the killer 😃, mujhe maloom hai tum bahat aachi lardki hoo but phir be mujhe tumko khoon karna hoga
Rohan then put his hand in pocket and that out the SCALPER. (Haila, I was sure this boy is not good for Teji😳)
R: how long I waited for this, now its your turn to die. I'm sorry teji u r a nice girl but I've to do this.
Yess, u r rite guyz its ROHAN!!!!! 😆😉😳
Rohan crazily starts singing:
Aaj ager tum zinda ho toh kal ke liye
Toh kal ke liye mala zaphna
Gumnaan hai koi badnaam hai koi
Kisko kabhar koun hai woh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi

A cup falls from teji's hands and Rohan turns around and smiles and starts moving towards her. Teji was so shocked that she could not even find her feet to move away.
R (while slowly moving towards her): Woow red my fav colour, sindoor lal, mirchi lal (haye haye mirchi, uff uff mirchi😆), Gussa ke rang laal, VEHSHAAT ka rang bhi laal (when he says this he sees Vehshaat I tteji's eyes) aur khoon lal, then starts laughs maniacally. Now he's front of teji and teji finally gather herself and says:
T (shocked, shaking): ohh, it was u who mur..der all the girls. Rohan hoo..w co..uld u doo thi…ss? (poor girl )
Tej is very shocked to see that she became friend to a serial killer, she tells rohan that it was u who who muuuurderr all those gilrs.
T (whispering): ho..ww?
R: who Rohan? I'm Ashu.
Teji is now in complete total shock.
A/R: ufff enough talk now, I've to kill u, sorry, beautiful girl. Bye bye now. (oh plzz dont do this, orelse how our story will complete?😕)
T: But wh…y did u killed all the girls? Tum pagal ho kya?
A/R (Shouts): MAIN PAGAL NAHI HON. NA MERI MAA PAGAL THI.my mum wasnt pagaal but still she went to mental hopistal, n then at skool everyone was paying me out n used to say that my mum was pagaal, then he punches the door, he says in a very angrily voice MY MUM WAS NOT MENTALLY ILL,he says in skool no one would be my friend, no girl would wanna talk to me so thats y i hate every beautiful girl.
Now Rohan/Ashu saying this pushes her n she hit her head on the table n then he slowly takes his scalper n govles out.

In Buearu
Abhi was looking at sketch and then suddenly remembers that he saw him at the dhabba with teji and then thinks teji must know something about him and then he tells ACP now All CIDSB officers sits in car and starts going towards Teji's house.

Teji's house
Tej sat up n her head is spinning around n she manages to scape from rohan.
R/A: Tuck tuck, come on girl don't make me run now, I promise I'll go easy on u.
Teji still running in self defence from one room to other, but Rohan is near her, she quickly runs into the store room and looks the door and calls Pratap (there is an extension phone in store room) Pratap's phone ringing and not picking up
T: pllzz pick up Pratap pick up I need u.
Pratap picks up the phone (finally)
P: Hello..hello
T (whispering): Pratap..he.s here. He'll kill me.
P (shocked): who? What happened? dont worry tej i will be there in like two mins u stay in there i will get there as soon as I can. (aawww u r an angel😳)
Teji was about to tell him when suddenly Rohan starts banging the door, to make it open.
Pratap runs to his car and starts driving as fast as he could.

At some road CIDSB people are stuck in the middle of traffic. (uuff jaldi karo, ladki ki jaan khatre mein hai 😡)
Abhi: damn it. Pata nahi yeh trafiic kab kaam hogi

Teji's house

Rohan/Ashu is still banging when teji trying other way other, when her eye caught on something It's a main switchboard and quickly goes there and take the switch out and the whole house's lights goes off. Rohan/Ashu gets pissed and finally opens the door and tries to look for her, teji meanwhile trying to reach the door. Ashu starts singing:
Maut ko kudh heerani hai
Maut ko kudh heerani hai
Aye sada virano se Jo paida howa
Paida howa woh fani hai
Gumnaan hai koi badnaam hai koi
Kisko kabhar koun hai woh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi
Gumnaan hai koi kisko khabar koun ha iwoh
Anjaan hai koi Gumnaam hai koi
Teji then sees a rod and picks it up and about to him when he turns around and cut her hand (in which she was holding rod) with scalper and blood starts to flow. He grabs her and teji struggles and finally kicks him hard and runs.
Pratap is driving totally madly.
He runs behind teji and finally catches her, about to stab her now and teji hits him with lamp and he falls on ground. Teji is crying and now she finds her feet and starts to run for life when suddenly Ashu gets up and holds teji's feet and make her fall, she falls on sofa. Teji cries in pain. He then holds both of her hand and take the scalper and teji closes her eyes and shouts: NOOOO
Teji opens her eyes and sees Pratap is here (yippiie my boy😳) and fighting with ashu teji hides behind sofa. Finally CIDSB team reaches teji's house. (haan sab kuch ohne ke baad😆)
Pratap kicks him and make him fall on ground and point gun at him. Teji comes and hugs Pratap tightly and snobs a little. Pratap holds her tight while still pointing gun at ashu and ashu falls unconscious and finally team comes inside and is shocked to see the horror. Abhi gets so shocked without thinking he runs towards teji ad asks her if she's fine. CIDSB team get hold of ashu and he regains conscious he sees teji so scared and asks her
R: Why are u scared of me?
T: Pratap he's ashu.
R:I'm not ashu I'm rohan damn it.
All are shocked CIDSB team takes him away while he's shouting he's not Ashu but Rohan.
Teji is badly hurted so she falls unconscious so Pratap takes her to the hospital.
In Bureau
Doctor tells then that Ashu and Rohan are same person but suffering from Split personality disorder. All are shocked. Doc also says when he's Rohan he's fine but when he sees RED colour he becomes Ashu and starts to murder all the girls, but after he become Rohan again he don't remember anything. ACP says take him to the mental asylum (cant think of anything else lol).
In hospital (Where teji is admitted)
All CIDSB team goes while Pratan abhi were there already. doc comes out and says to pratab n abhi n everyone,
doc say to pratab: we r very luck that she came on perfect time if it was a bbit late then she would have lost her baby. Everyone gets shocked and relievd that she's fine.
D: She has to stay under observation for few days. 1 of u has to stay with her 24-7
Before abhi could say anything pratap says
P: I'll be with her always.

THE END

P.S. in Blue are my personal comments.😳 s oguyz how did u liek our twist? Pura twist kar diya na?😉

By: Sallu_Lover😊 and Day_Dreamer😊

yah!! wow guys..great stories...oh yea..pura twist kar diya

so do ya guyz liek the twist we surely enjoyed writting the twist 😆

Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

Part 17
Story starts with 1 Week later. For the whole week Teji has been admitted in hospital and Pratap took good care of teji 24/7.
Teji get discharge from hospital, she and her child is fine. Pratap comes and tells teji that now she?s getting discharge from hospital. She gets happy, Pratap: Teji before I need to go and get some medincines for u. Teji is still down with this incident by thinking what if something happened to her child that day? Thinking this she holds his hand and says: Pratap don?t leave me plzz.
Abhi: where he just walked in n saw tej holding pratab?s hand(haila he is getting soo jealous) abhi knocks at the door
Tej: looks at abhi n then looks at pratab and says pratab plz don?t leave
Pratab: i have to tej im sorry
Tej: ok fine go
Abhi: pratab if u don?t mind i will stay with her?
Tej: just looks at him
Pratab: yeah sure u can stay.
Pratab kisses tej on her forehead n goes
Abhi: gets abit jealous
Tej: is just looking don?t know wat to talk about
Abhi: so tej how r u feeling?
Tej: yeah good.
Tej is thinking old days where they used to be best friends n they were comfortable with each other n now they r acting as they r strangers.
Abhi: So how u r feeling now?

Tej: Yea fine. Pratap took good care of me. (abhi makes faces😆)
Abhi: so u finally getting married to pratab?
Tej: looks down n says yes
Abhi: but do u love him?
Tej looks n she is silent.
Abhi: well do u? Ur silent means that u r not in love with him?
Tej: Can we not talk about it plz
Abhi: come on tej i know u, u used to tell me u marry someone whom u love the most n i can see in ur face clearly that u don?t love pratab. The love u used to talk about, ur dream man,the love u dreamt about.

Teji thinking he should not know turth at any cost, so she tries to convince him

T: He i..s Fath..er of my child isn't that enogh to prove that we er... love each other.

A: I'm talknig about only u. Also being father of ur child doesn't really show on ur face that u love him.

Before he could carry on teji intrupts him and says

Tej: Abhi Just Leave plz i wanna be on my own.
Abhi leaves the room n tej is all confused now.

Abhi is so sad and blames himself of teji?s condition thinking he sohlud?ve recognised Rohan soon so he could save teji. He?s jealous and remembers the scene and his talk with teji.

Abhi goes to club to meet his friend when he remembers that (this is the same club where in 1 part) he proposed Anu. And remembers that night (not what happened between him & teji) And goes from there.

Pratap's House
Teji?s friend come (say sia) to invite her to her wedding, but she refuses she could not take her mind off from the incident and also the wedding was in Lonavla so she don?t wanted to go far. Sia tries hard to convice her but she knew teji is adamant so she the leaves with sad face.

In Evevning
Pratap and his sis (Priya) finally convinces her to go. But teji says she?ll go if Pratap comes with her and Pratap have work in bureau so say Priya will go with her. Then Teji agrees Pratap finally sighs relief and thinks ?now sh?ell be able to take her mind off from the incident?. And hewr calls Sia and lets her know that teji and his Sis Priya are coming she gets happy.
Next day Teji and priya leave for her Sia?s wedding in Lonavla.

THE END
By: Sallu_Lover and Day_Dreamer

i am hooked like crazy!!!
but is it nonalva or lonavla??
anyways...great story... 😃

Originally posted by: sim_indian

i am hooked like crazy!!!
but is it nonalva or lonavla??
anyways...great story... 😃

Thanyou for liking it. Sorry do not know how to spell ur 1 is rite one. 😳