||Kaidi No.#48 Haazir Hai|| - Page 10

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Ahaa...someone's enjoying being grilled.

Next week toh deep fry hi karna padega.😈

Originally posted by: gadhadada

why this Baccha...😲

Originally posted by: gadhadada

jis tarah Questionnaire COPY/PASTE ho raha hy na...😛😛

wesy hee Answers bhi...😉😆😆

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Mera pehla que...

You will enjoy answering this.😉

Suppose you get a chance to interrogate Abhijeet and Aditya Srivastava. What would u ask them?

Originally posted by: bluetides

Qs for mistic 😆

1. I saw u know traditional cooking, Now I demand more details. Which cuisine? What are you good making?

traditional Bengali cuisine😊. I know some more. But i am not satisfied with my skills for those. Bengali cuisine is my comfort zone dear.

2. Did you recognize me when u come to IF? if yes how?😉

i guessed you actually. you put ur review in two three of my stories. coming here once i saw someone addressed someone as BT. before one or two page there was a comment of yours. i guessed the BT was you and i carefully peeped into your full name😳. & later that... my guess proved right😃

3. Which AT / FC are you in?

its Aditya Srivastav🤬 and SRK❤️. But myself only a silent stroller of SRK FC😉. Sometimes i love to visit Daya Shetty's AT also😳

4. What is your occupation?

i m a chef😊

5. Are you a traditional person or consider yourself modern?

mixture of both. neither strictly traditional🤢 nor too much devotee of modernism😳. try to maintain balance😊

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Q: as per You, as a Reader or Writer, Mention 2 Strong and 2 Weak Points of these Writers and their Stories...?

1. Krittika

Strong point:

1. mature social issue I can find in her stories which compels me to think about the matter deeply.

2. she can handle emotional plots very efficiently.

Weak point:

1. investigative issues padhke maza nehi aata😛

aur kuch lagta nehi mujhe😳 hoga sayad.. par mujhe dikhta nhi. inka weakness nikalna mere bas ki baat nehi😳

2. Nandita

Strong Point

1. awesome episodic continuation capability
2. well handling of emotions ( i wonder if Krittika helps her 😛)


Weak point:

1. kabhi kabhi inki stories ka ending bada weird hota hain. incomplete sa lagta hain, no head n tail😛
2. serious emotional plot start karte hain achha.. bich me mess ban jata hain... phir grip kar lete hain😉... lack of continuity

3. Riya

Strong Point

too much strong writer in this young age👏👏 blessed with heavenly writing skills😃

Weak point:

thora arrogant hain, genius joh hain😉. readers ko humesha dhamki dete rehte hain. put fb otherwise i'll nt updt😲

inhe cross karna mere liye impossible. mujh me inka typing pad hone ka bhi quality nhi😆

4. Diya

Strong Point

1. well narrated investigative plot
2. friendship matter me expert👏

Weak point:

1. kabhi kabhi story adhura chor ke nau do gyara ho jate hain
2. minute points miss kar jate hain kabhi kabhi... (chalta hain... full proof humesha likhna mushkil hain😳)

5. SHZK

Strong Point

1. genius brain... marvelous plots
2. strong grip maintaining suspense

Weak point:

1. bahat interesting ek plot kabhi kabhi inka bich me phika padh jata hain... whole story pe same standard kabhi kabhi maintained nehi hota
2. light moment based likhne me sayad she feels uncomfortable

6 DNAFAN

Strong Point

1. huge knowledge of history of CID
2. successfully & in simple way narrates a plot

Weak point:

1. unable to handle serious issues.
2. she has charm in her stories but the spark which attracts like a magnet in someone's story... that's absent in her writing. if i want, i can neglect her piece😲 (though i dont😛)

7. MRF

Awww... my sweetie... Everything I found in her story is just perfect. No irrelevant dragging (other than WHY YOU DID THAT😛)... Nothing. Every story of this lady is master piece to me. 😳I have nothing to say about her without praising phrases.😃

8. GD.

Strong Point

1. Superb handling of any theme.😃 Too much versatile. 😳 Brain me zaroor kisi dusri duniya wale ne chip fix kar diye the kabhi😉

2. Smooth language👏👏

Weak point:

1. Unnecessary use of Dr. Duo (OC) in some place and in most irritating way... like they both r only to tease our cop duo. Kabhi bhi kahin pe bhi shuru ho jate hain🤢

Dusra weak point nikalna thora mushkil hain. Sorry😳

9. Palak

Strong Point

1. well gripping in mature topic as well as light hearted
2. have a magnetic effect in her writing

Weak point:

1. Duo dose kabhi kabhi bada dramatic ho jata hain😛. childish lagta hain

aur kuch nhi suj raha hain😳


itne bare bare writers ka weak point nikalna mere liye thora muskil hain cop jee😳. i m not this much standard... i'll find fault in them😛 still today i am a learner😳 & these are my invisible teachers😳

10. Mistic Morning.

Ye kab se writer bani? 😲Koooiii strong point nhi. 🤢 bakwas😡

Weak point:

1. romantic and investigation likhte waqt iski toh watt lag jati hain.😆

2. Initially affected very much by criticism. No... in writing that not shows, 😛but mentally she affected... and her regular readers or writer friends know the matter well. 😉(A secret, she is slowly overcoming the issue getting someone's gyani guidance 😳)

Q: which Inspiration brings you in IF, Does anyone Suggest You to Join here...?

It's our beloved Rifah... suggested me to join here

Q: in these 18 Years Journey, Name 3 Episodes where You wanted to give Punishment to Character Daya and Character Abhijeet on Something They did really Stupid in Episodes?

1. Abhijeet trapped... He should inform his team atleast Daya sir before rushing to rescue that strange lady. Aare aisa bhi hota hain kya, koi bhi kahen bacha lo... ek Sr. cop aise bhagenge!

2. Episode name forget. The episode Daya went alone to fulfill goons demand and rescue a dumb girl named Anjali. Later he was shot and Anjali along with him came in danger. Abhijeet and Nikhil went behind them. Lastly Daya's some college mate proved the culprit. He wanted to trap Daya as his career collapsed on Daya's complain related to cheating in xam. Daya himself was at risk in that case for his own stupidity. Not only was that but also the little girl Anjali's life in danger. If she hurted badly then?????

3. missing bullet...(most probably naam yahi hain) first time Daya did suicidal attempt. police wala hain... itna bhi dil pe kabu nhi rakh sakte, bada chala suicide karna hain😡... zindegi halua hain kya😲

Q: Obviously FW did Big Blunders in CID, as per Your Thought which is the Biggest One and Why...?

Biggest jaisa kuch likhna mushkil... I can give a tiny list... amongst them...

1. Previous strong suspensive story-line has gone.🤢

2. Most irritating destroy of the character Freddie.😡

3. Abhijeet-Tarika hidden relationship still dragging. How can a senior cop like Abhijeet, flirts a girl for such a long time?😲 Aare bhae, propose karna hain toh karo warna chapter khatam karo. 15 years younger lady se kya itne din tak chupa hua pyar pyar khelna🥱

4. Again n again Daya's disastrous love life. Real life me bhi kisi ka aisa nehi hota.. huhh!😆

5. Weird present casts... Kisi ko dialogue bolna nehi aata 😡toh kisi ka appearance hi irritation ke liye enough.😕 Acting? Forget that. FW lost so many wonderful casts.🥱

6. The present bureau set😲... Actors' costumes😲... stupid dialogues...

Getting bore? Ok I'm finishing😛

Originally posted by: Mistic_Morning

Mistic: (skipped heartbeat🤗) hawww Abhijeet sir😳

Abhijeet: hello beta!😊

Mistic: (huhh! bada aaya beta😉) hello sir!😃 (feeling butterflies in stomach )
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Mistic came in action😈... THE ANGRY SAWAL😡

so many times u hv been humiliated here. even your buddy() also shouted on you (recent Dareya breakup🤢). earlier he doubted your intentions . your senior doubted on you after so many years😡. even after well knowing the whole plan... he did not support you. your another senior refereed you as gandi machli😭. a mere junior dared to handcuffed you😭. why you didn't raise your voice damn it😡. are you a man of blood n flesh or sachhi me an alien😡? aur kitna din Tji se flirt karte rahoge aap sir?🥱 is there no other lady in Mumbai?😲

Abhijeet: (bachhi abhi toh blush kar rahi thi mujhe dekh kar, achanak Rani Jhanshi kiun ban gayi😲) amm... beta... wo ans apko baki ke cops denge, jinhone apko iss baar kaidi banaya. gussa nehi karte beta. 🤣loh pani piyo, shant ho jao😆

a bell rang somewhere... and Mistic's nind tuta. aare main sapna dekh rahi thi😲😛



Diya: get ready Addi... all set nah? Aditya sir is on way.😊

Mistic:

Diya in tension: Addi kya hua... ankhen kholo Addi... hey kya ho gaya😲

Mistic faint faint faint...🤪

after some moment, Mistic opened her one eye slightly and jumped on her feet, grabbing Diya from her shoulder: beta, really😲 i m not dreaming nah😕 really i m going to meet Aditya sir... yaaa😃😳☺️


lastly the moment came... Aditya Srivastav entered into the room❤️

Mistic: amm... mujhe chak... chak... chakkar aa ra... & faint again😆

Aditya sir hurriedly: aare aare bachhi ko kya ho gaya😲 abhi tak main isse baat tak nehi ki. dekhte hi behosh ho kayse gayi😲

getting back sense, Mistic: opening her mouth, but no sound came

Aditya sir: beta kuch toh bolo😲

Mistic trying hard to say something but ... but... but😆

Aditya sir: ok. main hi kehta hoon. beta (forwarding his hand)... myself Aditya Srivastav😊

Mistic besharam ke tarha looking at his face ( kash aap 10 saal bhi chota hote, main tapak jati apke kandhe pe😳) hmm... sir... sorry sir... myself***** (again words stuck in throat🤔)😆

Aditya sir: beta are you feeling uncomfortable?😉

Mistic( in mind: samne itna hot admi baytha, khak comfort feel karungi main😲. isse achha main behosh hi rehti😛)🤣

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Mistic: you are such a ultimate of expression..🤡.( in mind, talented kehne se sahi nhi hoga sayad.😕 same time feeling a gurrr gurrr in stomach... aare phir se kya ho raha hain😲? aare haan... faltu ki baten choro, sahi sawal puch Mistic🤓)... nehi, i mean... you are such an awesome actor... i mean... such a fantastic...🤣

Aditya sir cut Mistic smilingly😊... ok beta, aage bhi bolo😛

Mistic😳: (scratching head mentally😆) wo main keh rahi thi... aap jada movie kiun nehi karte? 😊 CID toh thik hain🥱... pahele ka episodes jada achha lagta tha hume. phir bhi abhi tak apke liye hi dekhti hoon. lekin sath sath saal me ek movie bhi toh aap kar sakte hain sir ( in mind: Mistic yaar bol daal😉... abey chup kiun hain.😛... bol nah😡... abey unka muh kya dekh rahi hain, abhi phir se behosh ho jayegi tu😈)

Mistic: mm... sir one more que.😳

Aditya sir: haan beta😊

Mistic: wo main keh rahi thi... agle janam aap India me hi janam lena aur insaan ban kar hi aur as a man hi😳☺️

Aditya sir:😲( bachhi zaroor mansik santulan kho rahi hain. better mujhe ihan se chalna chahiye...😉)

Mistic: sir sir.😕

Aditya sir: haan... mmm😲

Mistic: sir plz😭

Aditya sir: kiun? i mean😲

Mistic ( blushing badly) iss baar aap mujhse two decade se bhi jada bade ho gaye ho nah☺️... i wanna marry you in nxt birth😳☺️

Aditya sir: kya😲

Mistic: hmm☺️



Addi Addi... hosh me aao. Aaj TV pe Abhijeet special aa raha hain Sony pe aur Star Gold pe Kaalo & Zee Cinema pe Gulal. Apko dekhna nehi?😛 Kya tab se behosh hoke padhe ho? someone splashed water on Mistic.

Mistic: hnn... haaann... hmm... kya main ye bhi sapna dekh rahi thi😲

Diya: kaysa sapna?😲

Mistic: nehi kuch nehi. Abhi kya kaha tumne? kya? wooo... Aditya sir's movie😳
yeee... TV on karooo☺️

Originally posted by: Mistic_Morning

beta nxt wk grilled/ tandoor kuch bhi hone ke liye main available nhi rahungi😉
i hv a business trip
& in my working outing i don't carry my laptop😆
8th Apr ke baad agar chaho toh phir mujhe grill karne ka sochna😛

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Hmm...

Riffi phir se pakarna...

Bade dino se fish fry nhi khaya...😉