New Investigative try last part on pg 3 - Page 3

very nice ending...

Thnks misti.. Dimaag mere pass kam hey to stry simple hi hogi na

thnks shzk

Sab aapke hi koshiso ka asar hey dada

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

Thnks misti.. Dimaag mere pass kam hey to stry simple hi hogi na

thnks shzk

my pleasure di 😳 🤗

Wow

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

yea ley mao tere cuhe

aab khush?

chal review kr quick

awe bahut khush 😳 🤗

A very good story Krittika 👏 👏 👏
Initially I thought there is no CID in this story, I really loved the way CID was bought in. Basic investigation vagaira karo, and direct to CID if needed with all information gathered. I liked that your inspector (lo, naam bhool gayi 😆) is not shown as a cop who doesn't give proper attention to the case. 👍🏼. At this point, my only suggestion is to avoid terms like "Some hospital". When a graphical reader like reads the story, we visualize the things ( esp when story is good like urs)... these some words appear like speed bumps in my imagination. I literally frown. I hope you don't mind my suggestion 😳. ( agar mind kiya toh bhee chuhe wapis nahi milenge 😛)

Coming to case, maza aagaya 👏 👏 . One dead body, one death statements, two husbands and two wives missing. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Plot amazing tha. ab mao ki dimaag ki ghode daudne lage. Initially I thought it was same lady who married both men and died ( like a cheating wife, Thanks to Crime Patrol)😆. After CID investigation proceeded, the actual foot work, inquiring, gathering small details etc 👏 👏 👏 and part 2 ended, I was sure ki death statement me gadbad hi 😳.. awe I am correct 😎 ( hai na mao intelligent *** raising color ***)

part 3, the unveiling part was again well executed 👏. An investigation is thrilling when a simple thing would solve the case 👍🏼. Here I need to really appreciate you. There is a famous theory in theater arts. If you show a wall clock in a scene, the wall clock should have some preference in script. It perfectly applied to the prescription. not only the doctor was useful, also the prescribed medicine was useful as well ... taaliyaa 👏 👏 👏. Loved the climax esp Freddy sir phasaoing lolitha 😳 ( chalo extra marks for giving us our Freddy sir back). I really liked the confessions and reasons behind it. Again they should have gone to police as advised by CID... in CP language Crime never pays 😆

bahut khush hi mao ... par sorry yaar der hogayi review dene me 😳

A Master piece again !!

Originally posted by: NavyaYarlagadda

A Master piece again !!

you always do very well in investigation but don't understand why you never accept it.

bcoz of two reasons
ek to mera dil satisfied nahi hota dusra critical reviewers ki sawal

unki logical sawal mere dimaag ka halwa bana deti hey

my current FF stry mey bhi yea prob strt ho gaya..so bas dil krta kisi tarah wrap up kr do

jab ki uninvestigative mey im much more cmfrtble and usmey kisi bhi sawal k liye mera apna logic hota hey..
Hhehehe 😉