New Investigative try last part on pg 3

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i know whenever i try investigative stuffs i end up in a complete disaster..but still once more i tried.. will be glad if u all do Review

tHE mYSTERY oF wIVes

A lonely dark street

A lady came down the street at night when someone attacked her from behind with a rod she held her head and falls back when a voice is heard "kaun hey.."

And the attacker flees with the rod..

Two couples came running near the lady and after discussing took her to hospital..

In some hospital

A doctor is sitting in his cabin with a lady "samjhne ki koshish karo yea itna asan nahi hey.."

The lady just shook her head frustatedly when a ward boy came in running with "sir ek patient laya gaya hey..haalat bahut kharab hey.."

The doctor moved out immediately with "mein abhie aya..."

He checked the lady and ordered "police ko call karo immediately aur nurse OT tayar karo.."

The police team reaches the hospital and is informed that the doctor failed to save the lady

"ha per meine unka dying statement record kiya hey..aisa lag raha tha wo kuch kehna cahti hey to humne...record kr liya sayed wo aapki koi kaam asake.."

The on duty inspector, Gaurav asked the doctor to bring the recording it went in broken painful tone as

"mere..pati...Atul Verma..mujhe marna..cahte hey..."

Then came the doctor's voice "aap ka naam..aap..apna naam batiye.."

"mein..Lalita..Verma...mein..help..mein.."

The recording stopped..

The doctor informed "iske bad isne dam tor diya...hume to inki gherwalo ka bhi kuch nahi pata aur nahi..inki bareme..yea char log inhe yeahi laye they.."

He said introducing them to both the couples

After interrogating them our police comes to know that thi woman now we can call her Lolita is found by them at the roadside near the Star restaurant...she was badly injured and they thought its best to take her to hospital..no purse or anything is found near her...

After taking their details they let them go...and they moved to the morgue..

On the way constable said "sir yea case thora ajeeb nahi hey?"

Inspector Gaurav gave her a questioning glance

"sir khoon hone wala kaun hey kaun hey hume pata hey,khooni bhi pata hey pr itni bari seher mey najane kitni Atul Verma Lolita Verma honge..hum.."

Inspector nodded and after checking the body moved out ordering "laash ko police morgue vejo aur har akhbar aur news channel mey iski photo vejo kisi ke pass kuch bhi info ho to wo hume call kare..."

...

Here another man Roshan Cauhan was at police station...he is claiming the body to be his wife's..Anita Cauhan's..

After listening to him carefully inspector Gaurav asked "aap ke pass koi sabut ki wo body Anita jee ki hey?"

"apni biwi ko mein pehchan nahi paunga.."

Inspector teased "to kya last waqt mey apki biwi ne khud ko nahi pehchana jo dying statement my koi aur naam record kerwaya?"

"koi aur naam?"

Inspector nodded "je Lolita Verma..wife of Atul Verma"

"per yea kase.."

Inspector Gaurav signaled him to stop with "aap ki patni ki koi tasveer to hoga aapke pass?"

The man nodded "ha mere mobile.."

He touched his pockets "mera mobile kaha gaya...sayed gher mey hi..aaplog mere gher chaliye..."

Gaurav nodded and signaled one of his men to accompany him with another question to Roshan as "aap logo ki koi aur relative?"

"jee nahi..meri wife ki mummy ki last year death ho chuki hey..aur mein anath hu..to koi aur.."

"dost wagera?"

"hum ek hi mahine hue yeahi shift hue aur neighbors se bhi thik se jaan pehchan nahi hui.."

He nodded and signaled them to move..he was in thinking when the phone rang, a man named Atul Verma has filed a missing complain of his wife Lolita Verma..in some other police station...

he deCIDes to wait fr some more info from Roshan's side..and his man informed him there's no prove found in Roshan's house..neither a photo nor any ID proof...but a prescription from the renowned physicriatist Dr. Abhinash Khanna..

Inspector Gaurav calls in Atul Verma and showed him the photo of the dead lady with "ise to jante hi honge?"

Atul looked at the photo keenly "jee nahi per yea kaun hey aur aap log mujhse kiu puch rahe hey?"

"to yea Mrs. Lolita Verma nahi lagti aapko.."

"arey bilkul nahi..Lolita aur yea.."

Inspector Gaurav looked deep in his eyes "are you sure?"

"mein apni biwi ko nahi pehchanunga?"

Inspector Gaurav took a deep breath.. if he is telling a lie he must be a master of expression..and if telling truth then it's a problematic case fr them..

Inspector praised the confidence in Atul and asked as "aapki pass Lolita jee ki koi photo to hoga hi?"

"jee actually humare bas ek mahine hue shaadi ko to koi photo hey nahi...bas shaadi ki tasveere.."

"wo hum dekh skte hey?"

"wo to gher ki computer mey..."

"koi baat nahi hum gher chal ke dekh lenge..waise aapke gher wale?"

"jee meri ma hey..aur papa ki kuch hi din pehle acCIDent mey death ho gayi.."

"to aaapki ma bahu ko pehchanti.."

"jee uss acCIDent mey ma ki ankho ki roshni chali gayi.."

"hmm I see aur apke sasural wale?"

"jee Lolita ki papa ko cancer tha..unhone shaadi jaldbaji mey kerwa hi isliye..shadi ki der hafte bad wo chal base..uski ma nahi thi..wo bachpan mey hi.."

"hmm acha chaliye aapke gher se shaadi ki tasvver a dekh ate hey..waise aapne missing complain mey serf description diya hey unka.."

"jee photo nahi tha to..bas.."

"hmm waise description kafi milti julti hey.."

"jee?"

Inspector Gaurav smiled with "nahi chaliye gher chalte hey"

Reaching there they directly made their way to study and Atul turned on the computer..

But the photo is very far thing the computer even didn't detect the hard disk..

Inspector Gaurav himself checked twice but all the memory and the hard disk of the computer is completely missing..inspector Gaurav after giving a meaningful look to Mr. Atul asked "aapke biwi ki kapre saman wagera to hoga na?"

"jee jarur yea computer ka kaise mujhe kuch smjh nahi araha.."

"per mujhe araha..chaliye apke biwi ki saman dikhaiye.."

They moved in the bedroom but the wardrobe and the whole room contains only the things belonging to Atul..

Inspector Gaurav asked "yea sab kab gayeb hua.."

"jee wo mujhe pata nahi..wo actually..mein kal..wo"

"kya kal kya.."

"kal meine bahut jyada drink kr liya tha raat o..fir gher aya to kisi cheez ka hosh hi nahi tha..bas so gaya..subha utha to khyal aya ki Lolita kal raat se gayeb hey to mein tension mey agaya..wo Bangalore ki larki hey yeaha kisiko janti bhi nahi hogi to kaha hogi soch ke darr gaya aur police mey chalaq gaya..yea savb to meine check hi nahi.."

He stopped as the landline rang...and after only one ring it went to voice message mode and the receiver declared as "hii..Verma residence..hum dono filal gher pey nahi hey..ager koi jaruribat ho to please message chor dijiye...hum aapko contact kr lenge.."

The voice...so much similar to the voice of dying statement..without even the procedure of voice analysis anyone can say it's same

Gaurav turned to Atul with "yea aapki biwi ki hi awaj hey na?"

"jee.."

Gaurav pulled out his phone where he had saved a copy of dying statement and let it play

Atul's expression changed to shock then to disbelieve "yea..yea awaj.."

"Lolita jee ki hey na?"

"haa per mein.."

"per aap kya..unhe marte marte aapse badla leni ki suj gayi achanaq.."

"nahi per.."

"shut up..aapne to unki photo bhi pehchan ne se inkaer.."

"per inspector wo photo Lolita ki thi nahi aur yea sab kab hua..kaise.."

"kal raat ko..."

"per kal to mein Star Byte bar mey..."

"time?"

"jee?"

"kab gaye they.."

"8baje..aur lauta kab yaad nahi matlb.."

"tab char jo gayi thi...filal police station chalo.."

"per inspector mey.."

"sidhe tarah chaloge yea.."

Atul sighed..

Both moved out..

Gaurav called owner of his constable and send him to Star Byte to verify..

Soon the constable came back with the news that Atul reached there at 8 and was there still the bar get closed at 1am..

He was literraly thrown out of the bar to close it down..and he didn't left the bar in middle

But the murder or the attack was committed between 10 to 11 maximum 11:30

Then..now...

Yes now the case is really complicated... So now inspector Gaurav thought it's better to inform CID..

...

In CID bureau

Abhijeet and ACP was discussing the case when Freddy came in after meeting Roshan with "sir ager yea aurat iski biwi hey to wo recording.koi shaqs marte waqt bhi aise jhut bolega?aur ager Roshan ki biwi hey nahi to Roshan khud ko phasane kiu chala aya?."

Abhijeet asked "tumne uski gher check ki?"

"Nikhil ko vejdiya..police ne to dekh hi li..fir bhi...aur vivek ko uss dctr se milne ke liye vej diya...aur Tasha gayi hey Salunkhe sir se report lane.."

ACP nodded in approval with "aab dekhte hey laash kya bolti hey Salunkhe ki dukan mey..Abhijeet tum aur Daya jao uss Atul Verma ki gher ki jara darshan ker ayo..fir police station mey usse bhi mil lena"

Abhijeet nodded and left..

...

Duo drove to the given address of Atul Verma on the way Daya formed the query

"boss...ager Atul ne hi Lolita pey humla kiya to yea missing report.."

Abhijeet was also thinking on the same plane nodded with "pata nahi,yea ho sakta hey ki wo apne upar se shaq hatane ke liye...use iss dying statement ka pata nahi.."

"fir news mey wo photo dekh k wo kiu nahi aya?uss photo mey na to naam mention kiya gaya hey na kuch serf yea ki yea laash mili hey hume jankari cahiye fir?aur aya to bhi wo admi?"

Abhijeet shook his head disapproving "yea case kjitna easy lag raha dikhta hey utna hey nahi..."

"kya boss utna easy hota to police walo ko humari yaad ati..chalo pahuch gaye.."

They both moved down and Abhijeet looked around with "ek kaam karo yea photo le jake asss pass hora dekho..koi identify kerta hey yea nahi..kare to info nikalo..."

And he handed over the dead woman's photo to Daya who moved to neighborhood..

Abhijeet moved forward to Atul Verma's house

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res.😛
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Will read and review after reading the contest stories😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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till now it seems interesting ...
agey agey dekhiye hota hai kia...😊
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Since I am very obedient bacha...😉😛
It's a fantastic daring attempt di...👏
I know its out of your comfort zone but still the suspense is really very well maintained...👏⭐️
Khair abhi toh starting hai...😉
But yes the starting itself is very interesting...⭐️
Hmm...confusion confusion...🤔
Let's see what's is store for us...
All the best di...👍🏼
Thank you so much...😳😃
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Originally posted by: dreamfanatic

Since I am very obedient bacha... 😉😛

It's a fantastic daring attempt di...👏
I know its out of your comfort zone but still the suspense is really very well maintained...👏⭐️
Khair abhi toh starting hai...😉
But yes the starting itself is very interesting...⭐️
Hmm...confusion confusion...🤔
Let's see what's is store for us...
All the best di...👍🏼
Thank you so much...😳😃



Riyu jhoot nahi bolte

and thnk you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aab tak toh very interesting😃
carry on di👏
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Nice story Krittika di.. Waiting for next part..
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Very Intriguing Story till Now...👏👏👏
Loved the Knitting of Both even I say Thrice Cases...👏
Somehow Hospital Recording is Nice Idea even Acceptable too but didn't U think, in now a days, Voice Recording is Not a Solid Source in cases and why DR does Not make a Video either from Cell about this Recording...😉😉
cz, already Nobody had any Evidence about Girl Voice...?😉😉
kisi ko kya malum wo marny wali ki hee Sound hy ya Thi...?😉😉
Video Evidcnce phir bhi kuch Solid hota...😛😛
Nice Idea of Showing Pic in Channel and NP...👏👏
now Roshan coming with Claiming Body of that Woman by naming as LOLITA...😊😊
Loved Insp Gaurav Teasing...😆👏👏
Second Both case comes in similar timings gives a Good Feel...👏👏
BTW, why Police did not verified Roshan Statement about where He was at that time...😕😕
Dr. Abhinash Khanna Presciption... hmmm...🤔
as Atul Verma filing a Case of Missing of Her Wife by same Name of Victim...👏
Here the Case turned when Roshan does not Provide any Proof abt Her Wife...
Atul did not recognized Her Wife in Police Morgue...😲😲
Police did not Bother to Investigate from Neighbors/watchman about any Voice They Heard from Atul House about any robbery...😕😕
Now case really Tangled as Atul Statement was also Verified... 👏👏
Case moved to CID...😃😃
Waiting for Next...😊😊
Somehow Trying to be little Detailed...😛😛
Dunt take Long Break in Update...😉😉
Thank You so much Baccha...😳👏😳
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Dada i was ready fr ur daant..
Bt aapne to tareef kr di..
Oye balle balle oye..
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Although he has his alibi still Atul was still at police station..

entering inside Abhijeet first gave a keen look around the house..

The house is clearly showing its owner is not attached to this structure..signs of carelessness are too evident

he moves forward and started with the wardrobe..

Nothing fruitful..then the chest of drawers then bed and table even kitchen but nothing..

He came back to hall and was last time looking around when a dustbin caught his eyes

nodding to himself he made his way to the dustbin and dropped all of its content on floor..

Abhijeet notice some broken glass pieces, it seems they are part of two or three glass bangles..even few pieces have blood spots on it..picking them in evidence bag Abhijeet started collecting fingerprints from the house

door handle, fridge, gas burner, tap, window, and some common places

gathering all the stuffs he moved out of the house

reaching near his car he noticed Daya too coming with a disappointed face

"kya hua?"

"ajeeb hey kisine iss aurat ko yeaha dekha hi nahi kabhie.."

"hmm Lolita ko to dekha hey..uska sketch.."

"nahi sbka kehna hey Lolita bas ek adh bar hi gher se bahar gayi..baki sare bahar ka kaam Atul hi dekhta hey aur sayed Atul nahi cahta Lolita kisi se mil jul rakhe..logone unka jhagra suna hey.."

"abhie ek hi to mahine hue shadi ki abhie se yea.."

"hmm aspas ki dukano se bhi pucho kisiko Lolita ki cehra utna gaur se yaad nahi..per yea aurat nahi..kiuki sbka kehna hey Lolita kaafi lambi thi..atul ki height ki hi aspass..per yea aurat to maximum 5'2" hogi..aur Atul 5'8" - 5'9" to Lolita ko 5'6" to hona cahiye"

"hmm..fir usne dying statement..acha chalo bureau chlte hey..dekhte hey doctor saab ne kya khbr di"

and both sat inside the car and drove off

In Bureau

entering inside Abhijeet looked fr ACP sir who was away fr some other case so he moved to Tasha with "kya kaha doctor saab ne"

"sir Salunkhe sir ka kehna hey ki iss aurat ki sarr ki ghaw kuch jack rod type hatiyar se kiya gaya hey wo jo tire badalne mey use hota hey..aur isse skull fracture hua aur internal bleeding..hspital walo ne internal bleeding rok di per wo surgery mey survive nahi kr payi.."

"hmm.."

"aur sir iss aurat ki pet mey Italian foods mile hey undigested..mtlb marne ki turant pehle isne italian food khai thi..aur voice analysis se bhi yea clear hey ki wo voice message ka awaj aur dying statement ka awaj same hey"

"haan wo to pata tha..italian food..yea aurat jaha mili thi wo Atul aur Roshan dono ki gher se kaafi dur hey..mtlb iska kam chnce hey ki usne gher se khana kha ke gayi..to ho skta hey woha ki koi Italian retro mey..Freddy Tasha tum dono ek kaam kro jo do couples ko yea mili thi unse ek bar fir milo..unhono kuch dekha ho..yea gari mey ate waqt yea kuch barbarayi ho..yea aspas koi jack wagera ka kuch dekha ho..pata karo.."

both nodded and moved out.. Abhijeet pulled out the evidence bag and the finger prints "yea Salunkhe saab ko dete hey..dekhe yea khoon Atul se yea lash se match hoti yea nahi..aur yea finger prints mey inn dono ki alawa koi aur finger print hey kya.." he was about to move but Vivek came in

"haan Vivek"

"sir dr. Abhinash ki hisab se Mr. Roshan is a kind of psychopath..jinmey bahut jyada aggressive tendency hey aur wo apni biwi pey shaq krte hey..ki uski koi affair hey..wo kayi bar apne biwi per stalk kr chuki hey per aj taq saboot nahi mila..unki ek dost hey jo ki NRI hey America mey rehta hey..last month aya tha to usine jbrdsti Roshan ko dr khanna ki pass le gaya aur jab se wo dost wapas gaya Roshan fir check up ke liye nahi gaya..per dr ka kehna hey wo itna bhi beemar nahi ki apni biwi ko na pehchan paye"

Daya asked "dr khanna ne Anita ko dekha hey?"

"nahi sir..ek bar dr ne kaha tha ki unhe Anita se milna hey to Roshan ne unki character per hi sawal.."

"mtlb acha khasa pagal hey"

Vivek smiled..Abhijeet shook his head and handed Vivek the evidences with "ise ek bar lab le jao.." he explained what to do and Vivek too left..

Abhijeet turned to Daya who was sipping water at his desk "chal Daya hum Italian khana dhundte hey.."

"chalo iss bahane kha bhi lenge.."

and they moved to the spot where the lady was found

on the way Nikhil called Daya as "sir meine Roshan ki gher check kiya kuch nahi hey..aur sir Roshan ki parosiyo ka kehna hey wo bahut hi ajeeb kisam ke admi hey..naye aye hey dekh parosiyo mey kuch log unse milne gaye to darwaje se hi vaga diya..na khud kisise milta hey na biwi ko milne deta hey..aur logo ne kayi bar use dopeher ko subha ajeeb ajeeb aur alag alag waqt mey gher ate dekha..ata hey 10-15 min bad firse chala jata hey.."

"mtlb?"

"unki pass wale gher mey Mr. Masir rehte hey unhone pucha tha ki wo koi business krte hey kya jo aise gher ate jate hey to Roshan ne kaha tha gher mey khuli tijori hey check krne ata hey"

"tijori?"

the phone was on hands free so Abhijeet was already listening to all this now made an extreme disappointed face with "acha Roshan ki biwi ke bareme koi kuch bataya?"

"haa sir..Mrs. Masir ka kehna hey do hafte pehle ek cab ake Roshan ki gher ki pass ruki Roshan ki kaam mey niklne ki turant bad aur ek aurat apne chunri se muh dhak ke teen bags ki saath cab mey char k nikal gayi..Mrs. Masir ko laga tha koi sayed ayi thi jo chali gayi per uss din Roshan jab gher aya usne bahut chekha chillaya cheeze a bhi tore.."

"kya chillaya kuch suna unhone?"

"haan..unka kehna hey wo kisiko bewafa dhokebaj kehke dhamki deraha tha ki uski sari arman wo tabah kr dega..next din se Roshan sahi time se office jata hey sahi time pey ata hey"

Abhijeet sighed "yea Mr. and Mrs. Masir Roshan pey detective ki tarah najar rakh rahe they?"

a muffled laugh is heard "sir wo dono bujurg hey..gher mey baki sab kaam mey nikal jate to dono apne balcony aur room mey reh jate hey..aur unki room se Roshan ki main darwaja dikhta hey"

"acha chalo thik hey.."

and they dsconcted the call

Daya looked at Abhijeet with "ager uski biwi do hafte pehle kayi chali gayi to usne pata kiu nahi lagaya..ager pata na lagta to police mey jata"

"do mtlb ho skte hey..ek wo aurat uski biwi thi nahi..dusra use pata tha police mey jayega to use bhi problem hogi.."

"to tumhe lagta hey usne apne biwi ko kuch..fir iss aurat ko kiu biwi kehke dawa kr raha tha?aur iss aurat ne wo statement kiu diya?"

"yea do sawal hi to hey.."

he pulled out his phone and rang inspector Gaurav "ha inspectr Gaurav jaha unn couples ko wo aurat mili thi woha aspas apne chan bin ki to koi rod..jack rod yea uss tarah ka kuch.."

...

"acha kuch nahi tha..uss aurat ki gari thi?"

...

"to kisi cab wagera mey ayi thi..pata kiya?"

...

"cab se nahi ayi thi..to fir?"

...

"rickshaw..to uss driver ne use kaha se liya tha?"

...

"aur chora kaha tha?"

...

"acha theek hey..aap ne woha bhi pata kiya?kisine dekha inhe?"

...

"acha thik hey haan hum dekh lenge"

he dscncted the call and called Nikhil

"haa Nikhil Roshan ki pass gari hey?"

"jee sir.."

"uss gari ko check karo..achese..aur gari ka jack dhundo.."

"jee sir.."

he dscncted the call and turned to Daya

"yea aurat ek rickshaw se gayi thi woha..rickshaw ne ise sakinaka metro station ki bahar se uthaya tab iska cehra chunri se dhaka tha..rickshaw mey isne chunri hatayi..rickshaw wale ki pass ek local train timetable ka booklet tha wo mangi..dekha..fir santacruz mey utar gayi..jaha se 10min ki distance mey wo mili..rickshaw wale ko usne pura kiraya coin mey diya 1 aur 2 rupeye ka coin..issliye rickshaw wale ko uska cehra yaad reh gaya per haan jab wo woha utari tab 9bajne ko they"

"mtlb woha usne kuch time bitaya fir attack hua.."

"hmm..aur woha uski pass bas ek hand purse mila tha jismey bahut hi kam paise they aur ek chewing gum..aur koi ID nahi"

they had already reached santacruz and was about to move when Daya's phone rang again

"ha Freddy.."

"sir inn dono couples ka kehna hey ki wo aurat behosh thi pure raste..aur hospital pahuchne ku badse jab unhe bataya gaya ki yea mar chuki hey tab taq unhone kuch nahi suna..aur woha jab wo log pahuche to wo aurat giri thi..koi aspas nahi tha"

"hmm chalo koi baat nahi.."

he dscncted the call and turned to Abhijeet "aab to Italian khana hi kuch kr skta hey"

Abhijeet smiled and both moved to two different sides to search restaurants serving Italian food

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