Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48) - Page 13

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

I had read it on FF before😳

Loved it very much ❤️

Originally posted by: 23Diya

I know about ur experience...

its only u who kept me reminding abt this 2 yrs old stry...😆

btw, thanks 😳

how???😲😕

Finally... done with the story... 😛
yaar itna lamba hai... socha tha long review dungi.. but sab kuch bhul gayi😛
pure 4 days lage khatam karne main😆
coming to the story... it's a very nice story... from starting to the end everything was so nicely described...
Daya's actions were very shocking at 1st... but I knew that daya did all these thing unwillingly...
I really loved the fact the Abhi trust him till the end😃
the flashbacks were very nice & cute... there was a broad smile while reading FBs😃
I really loved the way Tarika support Abhi😊
I really loved their teasing & khatti mithi nokh jhok...
loved the way Abhi handled the whole case...😊
& that dhamkiyaan...OMG🤣
really daya k naam ka accha faida uthaya sabne😆
liked the way Freddy supported Abhi 😊
ending was also nice..
Really its a very nice story... I enjoyed it a lot😊
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btw tum apne baki stories v post karna IF pe😊

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

how???😲😕

Originally posted by: ...bluefairy...

Finally... done with the story... 😛
yaar itna lamba hai... socha tha long review dungi.. but sab kuch bhul gayi😛
pure 4 days lage khatam karne main😆
coming to the story... it's a very nice story... from starting to the end everything was so nicely described...
Daya's actions were very shocking at 1st... but I knew that daya did all these thing unwillingly...
I really loved the fact the Abhi trust him till the end😃
the flashbacks were very nice & cute... there was a broad smile while reading FBs😃
I really loved the way Tarika support Abhi😊
I really loved their teasing & khatti mithi nokh jhok...
loved the way Abhi handled the whole case...😊
& that dhamkiyaan...OMG🤣
really daya k naam ka accha faida uthaya sabne😆
liked the way Freddy supported Abhi 😊
ending was also nice..
Really its a very nice story... I enjoyed it a lot😊
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.
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btw tum apne baki stories v post karna IF pe😊

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Because u always mention this stry...😃

becoz i love this story ❤️

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

becoz i love this story ❤️

After a long time I finished reading your story 'Long Lost'. It was sooo sweet. 😳


I love that moment where Daya saw Abhijeet lost in thought and decided to give him his space. That's what I like the most. Real friends don't impose themselves on the other.

Another moment was when Abhi said that Daya never tried to find him of the past... These are little sweet things which even I try to include in my story. many things sort of coincide with my own 'Flashback' story I wrote long back.


if you have more please post. 😃 (but excuse me,... Don't ask me to read stories where duo shoot each other, I can't bear that)

@Diya & Bunny; when will Rony come out from the jail?😈

Originally posted by: visrom

After a long time I finished reading your story 'Long Lost'. It was sooo sweet. 😳


I love that moment where Daya saw Abhijeet lost in thought and decided to give him his space. That's what I like the most. Real friends don't impose themselves on the other.

Another moment was when Abhi said that Daya never tried to find him of the past... These are little sweet things which even I try to include in my story. many things sort of coincide with my own 'Flashback' story I wrote long back.


if you have more please post. 😃 (but excuse me,... Don't ask me to read stories where duo shoot each other, I can't bear that)