Story : Abhijeet Ke Ateet Ka (Asli) Raaz

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

The 'My' part...😆

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monaya88forever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: visrom
The 'My' part...😆

But i noticed that most ppl here do say "my" 😳 sorry if i sounded ridiculous

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: monaya88forever

But i noticed that most ppl here do say "my" 😳 sorry if i sounded ridiculous

No no...that's ok. You are welcome to...😆

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Vizwhiz here i am!!!! U already know my feedbk!! Read ure story again!!! Loved it!!! The details toh tum
Pehle se jaante ho!! And thanks for the credit- u r warm welcome! ⭐️

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: suhani.cipamisa
Vizwhiz here i am!!!! U already know my feedbk!! Read ure story again!!! Loved it!!! The details toh tum
Pehle se jaante ho!! And thanks for the credit- u r warm welcome! ⭐️

Pushing up 😉

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

I saw that. One liner se kaam nahi chalega.

I am as it is disappointed...😔

Edited by visrom - 10 years ago

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: monaya88forever

But i noticed that most ppl here do say "my" 😳 sorry if i sounded ridiculous

It's ok...Me too say "My Abhijeet"😳

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Viz why so low yaar!

Ok am taking my time to write this, cant remember the exact private reviews i had sent u word by word but here goes-
The duo scenes were absolutely the normal muskaan era, non-ott, non-melo friendship that we miss today.
The flashback scenes were fabulous, given the context and conditions those days. U have kept in mind what that era had, u remembered how 90s used to be.
Acp had less scenes, but thats ok!
I liked the way u hv incorporated some of fw's akakr series scenes, and twisted them in much better style. Glad there was no maya bakwas. You hv made some issues logical and sensible, this proving you have the writing calibre akin to golden era writers. Now dont blush and say there are other IF writers better than u- they all have unique skills and calibre too.
I agree with this monaya88forever- viz do apply for a writer job wt fw and rescue cid's image!
I loved abhijeet's pangs, anger, emotions, mixed feelings!

Once again thanks for the credits and thanks for a very nice story!
Amd o yes, i liked how u rounded up the timeline, ending it with abhi's memory loss (am talking abt the flashbacks)

The murderer turning out to b an officer and dilip being dead due to self defence of the undrcover cop were the biggest twists ever!! Felt very sorry for both of them and dilip's family too... Sime cops make mistakes like this, hiding their mistakes... Well ure human touches were very nice angles here- the emotions of each and every character- from abhi to victim's dad to the killer.

Kudos and keep it up boss!!!

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Read your story...

Its wonderful...

I could never think for such a link between so many episodes shown on screen...and all that was done perfectly...u even covered the loopholes that the show had created...I don't mind Dilip being killed by u as u did it for the betterment of the story...the dialogues of every character were so good...the small mistake done by Abhijeet when he told his real name gave a realistic touch and was very good to read...😊

Reminded me of the good old days that I wish I could get back...