CID Story: Nakul Returns 3

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 10 years ago

Disclaimer and notes: Okay don't kill me. I just absolutely love writing on Nakul suddenly, especially since I introduced Sehar. Now, first things first, a big thank you to Vis di, Angel, Sree, and GD for helping me decide which way I should take this story. I've attempted to incorporate 2 things that Vis di really wanted to see: (a) the brotherly affection Abhijeet develops for a lady criminal in a gang, and (b) Abhijeet stabbed in a train. I also really wanted to bring the Nakul and Sehar chapter to a close in a proper way (which is where that help comes in) and hence I decided to bring both things together in Nakul Returns 3. This is all a work of fiction. Researched points and other important points are mentioned at the end.

Edited by CT_Shreya - 10 years ago

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 10 years ago

NOTES

Before you ask why in the first flashback none of the investigation part was shown, it was because I was showing things from Ria's perspective. After all she was the one thinking back and seeing things through her eyes. Then when I showed some of the scenes again, it was from Abhijeet's perspective and this is where you see the investigation part even the parts without Abhijeet.
Abhijeet's undercover role also had the name of Abhijeet. This is why there is no change in names.
As per Wiki and a travel site, the Mumbai Rajdhani takes 16 hours. I just took the liberty of changing the timings.
I'm CP (Crime Patrol) influenced. 😉 Things don't happen immediately. They actually take time. Hence the 1 week time frame for the investigation. And then, once things fall in place, everything happens fast.
The Mumbai Rajdhani typically has 22 cars/coaches. 2 are luggage cars, 2 are pantry cars, and 1 is the engine car. That leaves 17 cars for people to sit in out of which only 1 is 1^st class, 5 are 2^nd class, and the remaining are 3^rd tier or so they are called.

Edited by CT_Shreya - 10 years ago

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

Great 🤗

Thank you so much. I'll read this in a day or 2.

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Amrita

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Posted: 10 years ago

Need some time to read whole story😆

Jitna read kiya it is brilliant

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh Sri , I hope I don't have to start my research mode on 😆.

Will read and comment ASAP.

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dysfunctional-
Oh Sri , I hope I don't have to start my research mode on 😆.

Will read and comment ASAP.

Don't worry. It's just a continuation from the last one I wrote. 😉

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Shreya. finished reading! And I must say this is one of your best.👏👏

The whole story was so well written along with the time and date that reading and grasping the details was absolutely effortless. 😃

I could see everything happening in front of my eyes. The best part was the fight between Nakul and Abhijeet in the pantry car. Everything was playing on TV in front of my eyes. 👏👏👏

Just one thing...was Abhijeet unconscious for 4 hours? 😲 And for 4 hours Freddie and Nik didn't find him? This is a bit difficult to digest. Otherwise everything is perfect. 😊

The only thing that's hurting is that you made the 'sister' lady another criminal. When I told you to write this, I wanted the lady to be a nice lady who wouldn't backstab Abhijeet in the end. That's what was hurting since Mouse Trap and that's why I wanted this track to be written differently. But you made it the same. Thoda bura lag raha hai. 😒 The story is perfect but I wish the lady were good.

Thanks for getting Nakul arrested and making him a Behrupiya. Chalo ACP did shoot his own real son. That was pricking at the back of my mind from the time you started the Nakul series. 😆

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