ahhh... Finally, I read it...😆
Tough task as Every time I saved it and when Log Out from IF, the Story automatically Finished...
OK, so SHERYU, This time I did not take Any Permission from U to give a Extreme Critical Review as U Understand My Points without any Hurt...😳😉
First, I think as being a Writer, U Personally Realized that its the Weakest One in Ur NAKUL SERIES...
I really did not Find that NAKUL and SEHER KAPOOR, U already Build Up in Ur Story Series...😭😭
Same with CID Team and Cops as I found them Not Prepare which I found in Previous Two...😭😭
SHERYU, First the Plan Pages sending to Bureau was a Mind blowing Idea as now I Loved NS GANG coming Openly...👏👏👏
I Loved the way U attached that TIME-FRAME of PLAN and MAP OF ANDHERI is Absolute Fantastic...⭐️⭐️⭐️
The Distribution of Duties regarding RIA and AMAR KAPOOR (Probably Hostages) are again a Fabulous Job with backgrounds of National Database from Govt as well Phone Directory...⭐️⭐️⭐️
BTW, How One Name, Team found in Directory and Not in Official Database...😕😕
Now that Plan, hmmm Somehow, these all Plans are Totally Waste Yaar...
why CID Team does not Realize that by these Plans (where any Jagran, CID and Police Team), They Aware the Culprits and Make the Life of RIA and AMAR, More Difficult...😕😕
Khair, why not CID Team keep Eyes on Another Suspects either find about Rahul Kidnapping or Missing... Yes those Secretive Siblings...?😉😉
Yes, I knew U told that after getting RIA Footage in CID Bureau, They Confirmed that RIA is Hostage.. But They must Think that Its Battle with NS Gang na...😃😃
then, Abhijeet Sir Inclusion... Much Filmy but Like it...😆😆
Basically, its Totally Unexpected that Team Helped Him as Presented themselves as Goons...👏👏
Like Real Wound to Capture More Trust of Hostages...⭐️⭐️
Somehow that Maafi mangna of Goons from RIA is a Laughing Blaster...😆😆😆
I m Surprised that how CID Team Not Scanned the whole House either about Bugs/Cameras too even Abhijeet Sir never asked RIA that Why She was in Complete Tension, was there any Surveillance around Her in House... 😲😕😕
Abhijeet Sir Rudeness, Drama and Clicking all Caps and Sending too Team was Lovely Attempt...😳👏👏
Daya Sir and Freddie Sir went Rahul School but after Knowing about MEENAL Missing Phone, does not Make a Plan to One Stayed at Office/School and another Moved to MEENAL House to Check Her either She was also Helping hand of Culprits or might be in Danger after taking Her Home Address from School Bus Coordinator...👎🏼👎🏼
why after talking to MEENAL, Cops Verified Her to Showed Her Rahul Mother, RIA Picture from Cell...👎🏼👎🏼
Now, from Where RIA got that Bomb jacket (I mean was it come there by Post, handed Her through anyone)...😕😕😕
then, Train Case...🥱🥱
Honestly, U Dragged it SHERYU...
I m so Shocked that why Cops Not Checking First Those Areas where Mostly Expected of Any Goon Hiding Like Washrooms etc...😲
NAKUL Call was Unexpected and His Caught by Abhijeet Sir too...⭐️⭐️⭐️
its again Amazing that after getting Wound, Freddie Sir Never checking That Dining Car where Abhijeet Sir and RIA Stayed...😲😕😕
Somehow, The Scene where in Pantry U showed that Fight was Awesomely Amazing...⭐️⭐️⭐️
Yes, the Way U Portrayed Every Chop, Every Trip was outstanding...⭐️⭐️⭐️
Regarding Team another Bhagam Bhaag... 😆😆
Hmmm, OK Not much Nice...😊😊
why Team did not Inquire More to Dhaby wala that Who the Person takes Foods and All so They easily Got even Make Sketches too...😕😕
The All Three Places Raid was Quick and Nicely Shown...😳👏👏
Honestly, Unexpected was not RIA Involved with NAKUL but that Entry of Freddie Sir and Nikhil in Pantry...⭐️⭐️⭐️
its Extremely Wonderful...⭐️
Then, Daya Sir and Salunkhy Sir Concern for Abhijeet Sir Cutely Portrayed especially Daya Sir Gussa...😳👏👏
The Call of ACP Sir that still Seher must do Some to Release Nakul was another Classy Effort...⭐️⭐️⭐️
the Last Plan was Failed...😉😆😆
Nakul Challenge to His Dad was really Brilliant...⭐️⭐️⭐️
I know that right now U started to Write another Bang of Nakul as Blast from Past but plz Make it More Thrilling...😉😎😈
In this Part, I felt that Cops from strat, already thought They will Not Win the Game so Prepare with Low Mood...
I m Extremely Sorry Yaar...😳😳
magar Haan, main tareef bhi krta hun tou Criticize bhi krna as being Reader Mera Right hy...😃😃😃
Hope U can Understand it...😛😛😛
Thank You so very much...😳
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