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Veena.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Wow riya its really beautiful and sweet one 😊
The surprise was awesome πŸ‘πŸΌ
Daya and abhi super cute 😳
Well done riya, superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Amazing story Riya. So sweet of u. Driver and teams's surprise r awesome. Great work. Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Wooowww...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
i was already speechless with the first partπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ and
spell bound with the second part... πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘
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you are an amazing⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ writer sis...
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
i am again impressed and touched with your writing skills...πŸ€—πŸ‘
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i loved
❀️❀️❀️ the story and the siggy...😎😎😎😎
Superb fabulous creation...πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ‘πŸ‘
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very unique nice sweet lovely story... ⭐️⭐️
haye kitna pyara story hai...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—πŸ€—
πŸ‘

the convo between Abhi sir with others was wonderful and amazing...😊😊😊😊😊
i could feel and imagine all those excitement and emotions...😊😊😊😊😊
thank you very much for creating those feelings...😊😊😊😊.

you clearly depicted the thoughts running in Abhi sir's mind when he didn't find anyone to wish, 😊😊😊😊
his happiness to see his beloved officers...
😊😊😊
idea of party in the basement was unique and interesting...πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
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overall an enchanting, fascinating beautiful memorable fantastic incredible birthday story for our beloved Adi sir...β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

i enjoyed reading both your stories😊😊😊😊
but the first story is very special
to me which i can never forget... πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

please write more stories like this sis...😊😊😊😊
i am waiting for more
stories from you...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



Edited by LavenderBloom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Thank you so much Veena di, Nishi and LAVY sis..πŸ€—πŸ˜³
Edited by kkkloveu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Well it's really awkward for me to post this silly thing here, but i wrote it and it's first time that i actually tried my hand in poetry after the one in hindi for adi sir, so i just wanted to share this with all of you as all your comments, suggestions, complimentsπŸ˜› matter allot to me.
You may or will find the poem silly, awkward and may be like it makes no sense but just read for once..please..😳

Are you my friend?

"Are you my friend?" I asked the girl who walked beside me.

She left me near the gate, from where the world looked darker a bit.

I looked at her leave.

But the hope in my heart never did retreat.

A boy came to me.

He also walked the path alone and now needed a friend to believe.

The light emerged illuminating the path,

Our eyes gleaming in pleasure

Walking aside we crossed the path.

I asked him near the end, the end of his journey but the beginning of mine

Are you my friend?

He gazed at the darkness that enveloped the world ahead

He looked at me and asked a question

"Can't you come with me?"

I gazed down my path, the path that looked dark.

I knew I could say "yes"

But as stubborn as I, what I managed was a Bye.

Pitch black was the darkness that followed

Colorless were the words those flowed

Though I felt a shiver

A cold sensation did ran down my spine

But there was something that helped me to be fine

Sweet, caring, helpful, humorous that's how they defined a friend

But I never found the one behind a "friend"

The girl was sweet, she helped me down the road and we laughed together

But she left my side when the world became darker

The boy was cute, his words moving, his face always smiling

But what did he do after offering?

Unaware, unconcerned I fell

A rock was the hurdle that I couldn't tell?

The girl and the boy never came

The path became densely black ahead

Fear and pain now made me sweat

I heard a laughter, from somewhere near it came

Managing my sinus, lifting up the last bit of faith

I faced the person who was laughing at me

Looking at him I felt angry but my lips gave a smile instead

Unknowingly tears came in my eyes

The person fell silent as the first tear slipped by

A palm caught the second tear, as it was as precious as a diamond

The third never got the chance to slip

Grabbing that palm I stood up

Listened and heard but didn't attend

Smile crossed my lips as I let the words slipped

It was my time to go now, follow the path and follow the dreams

It was again my time to ask the same question

But I restrained and never did uttered a word

I walked down the road alone once again

There was no fear, no tear this time

I felt a presence as strong as mine

Though there was no one there but a grip was there all around

I turned and saw him

Walking beside me with a smile

It was then that I knew

You need not ask a friend

"Are you my friend?"

Because they also said about a friend

"the one who will never leave your side, no matter what it be"

"the one you needn't ask to be with but the one who was always there"

"the one whom you met and you still are meeting"

"the one whose presence you felt when you walked the dark path of your dreams"

Do give your valuable feedback..😳😳




Edited by kkkloveu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Well expressed Riya.Lovely poem. πŸ‘ ⭐️
The last four lines portray the true essence of friendship.

Thankyou so much. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Sweet and lovely poem riyu.. Dnt knw the abc of poems.. So cant help u out.. But i feel those words...
ya u showed so beautifuly that.. A true Friend is always there.. Circumstances doent matters...
love u
thank u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Amazing Riya..you're a powerhouse of talent..the last four lines are truly hearttouching..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
nice one Riya...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Š
really heart touching..i love these kinds of poems...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Riya, you sure it's your first poem?
You're so good and it's an excellent one keeping in mind that you have just kicked off with your journey.! Looking forward to more. God bless you 😊

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