Story 1 is a very good one👍🏼. Starting was really interesting and good to see how things proceed further. Abhijeet sir so intelligent, smart, sharp minded (oops diverted sorry 😆) han toh abhijeet sir was too good, his instincts are amazing😳 and purvi also really good never loses hope 😃 really good gight by her at the patking lot, and really good effort to keep other officers onto the screen 👍🏼 but I really liked that at the end it was daya sir and freddy sir who reached there to find and help abhi sir👏. Culprit is so very bad use kya laga jo chaye CID se krwa le ga, ediot😛 Good fighting sequence 😉 but culprit 😲 really unexpected for me 😛 khoob maro isse 😆 I really liked the last scene and convo between duo😳 but kya sach me hi nai pata chala k purvi k father ki khabar kese pata chali 😲 😛
Very well done, good job 👍🏼
I'll give it a 8.5/10
This second story is also a very good one, starting was good and intresting but tori difficult thi but I like that dart hamla 😉 a different one. Bureau starting scene really nice and a casual one👏. Case is intresting or mje toh pehle hi shaq tha k in sab me se hi koi black sheep ho ga😈 😆 everything was good, team and their work and investigation 👍🏼 so that was a fake news for purvi to trap her uff her neighbor but never mind its not his fault, and purvi should confirm the news first na but its ok we can understand how anyone can be in true senses after getting that type of news 😔😭 poor abhijeet and purvi yeh dcp bi na kya karta hai yar😡. Freddy and purvi scene was very good and their fight sequence along with their escape 👍🏼 I liked that u gave atleast an important role to freddy sir 😃 abhijeet and daya fight sequence toh tha hi superb 😃 and and and climax scene with fight was well portrayed 👍🏼 overall story was really good and interesting, very well narated
I'll give it a 8.5/10
Story 3 maze ki thi but a quick one 😉 I liked the starting, the way freddy sir showed his concern for purvi 👍🏼 then duo convo a simple yet adoring one 😃 that jungle scene with those two boys na wahin pe pakar lete na duo in dono ko toh samaj ati nai but pir story kese agey bharti [:p] sory sory now i'm serious, jo starting me wo sach tha bcz I like that part thats very sweet that u showed duo had gone to meet choti shreya that fw ne abi tk nai dhekaya after that dcp team distribution good thi but he didn't allow them to speak so heres his mistake too. I like the way abhi sir was concerned for purvi and make her to go to her father 👍🏼 but after that sab kuch gadbad ho gaya. Investigation part along with salunke sir was good, daya and abhi convo on phone great, the way daya sir said reha karne ki zarurat nai tum sab yahan ah jao wo terrorist pakra jaye ga I really liked it 😃 abhi sir time calculation and doubting about a fake delegation was a good one 👍🏼 oh yes me toh bhool gaye kehna k iss me bi bechare russian delegation ko hi nishana banaya gaya na 😆 yar I think its a good ending that they cannot catch that culprit as its involved higher authority of another country good 👍🏼 but somehow an abrupt one🤔 but i'm happy that they are getting an appreciation letter from the CM [:p] overall I liked the story and its a good one too 😃
I'll give it a 8/10
Really appreciable work by the three writers although I knew them and even I guessed it write before that GD offically announced it [:p] 😆 great work by three of you👏👏👏
And best of luck 👍🏼
Edited by Veena.. - 11 years ago
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