My Poetry Collection- HUUUGEE UPDATE @Pg 89! Do read - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

Congratulations reshma..🥳
Sorry for being late yaar..
sara khana bhi kharab hogaya..😛
But i enjoyed the party, thank you dear.


Thanks Riya 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: buublly

Hi Reshu😃

on completing 3 yrs & turning sizzler⭐️👏⭐️
It's so nice to know someone like u on this forum😊
keep rocking dear🤗
thanks 4 d lovely treat😛


Thanks a lot Anu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yummy food! A very big congrats for 3 years Reshma! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Yummy food! A very big congrats for 3 years Reshma! 😃


Thanks Shreyu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Many many congratulation Reshma...
Thanks for the party...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: misha.as

Many many congratulation Reshma...
Thanks for the party...😊


Thanks Mishu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
OK.. Here it is as promised. I don't know how far it has turned out. But this is kinda from Shreya's view. Her pain, her love for Abhijeet. Will post another poem from Abhijeet's side.
DAD, I LOVE YOU

I saw my mother die before my eyes,
I lost my love, I lost my world.
I curled up in a corner with fear
Long before our beautiful tale unfurled.

You reached out to me like a dad,
Eyes full of love and heart so pure.
Still I was scared as hell, for the pain
Of losing my mother, I couldn't endure.

I sketched it out to you, the truth
You caught the killer and ended the case
But finally we to had to leave each other, yet
With your promise of meeting me all Sundays.

Day by day our bond grew,
So strong, and so unbreakable
I loved you, you loved me,
The fact turned out undeniable

Maybe I was destined to lose another kin
This was right for he had wronged
I was all alone, dejected and crumbling,
For, now, I didn't know to whom I belonged.

Your gentle touch gave me back my life,
I can't hear you speak nor, myself can I,
I turned to look at you, into your eyes
Hoping my eyes asked you the question ''Me why?"

You wiped away my tears and my pain
Your eyes promised me something...
Something that made me feel the luckiest,
And made me feel I was the daughter of a king.

You are going to be, always there for me
A gem as you there are, but a few,
I closed my eyes and ran into your embrace
When, to you, my heart spoke the words, ''Dad, I love you''.


Sorry for making it a bit short. But these words were right from my heart.. Hope you like it.😊
Edited by Reshma. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful poem Reshma. 👏
These lines in particular...😃
Something that made me feel the luckiest,
And made me feel I was the daughter of a king.
I closed my eyes and ran into your embrace
When, to you, my heart spoke the words, ''Dad, I love you''.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely phenomenal Resh.👏👏 I am speechless.
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Posted: 11 years ago
After reading an emotional piece of poetry directly from bottom of your heart, the word that cropped up into my mind is Amazing...👏

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