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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Amazing Reshu, both the style and description are flawless and vivid. I like how you delicately portrayed Purvi and duo relationship.But I felt if they did fight, they still wouldnt let it come inn way of duty.Anyway that spiced up the story for us ;)...Lovely and do write more😃👏

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Read it 😃

Just loved the way u portrayed duo & their friendship 👏
I love the concern of ACP sir & Purvi 👏

Sometime best friend also can quarrel & its also possible that we sometime say some words in anger which we don't want to utter or we don't mean that...it happens...very usual...😛
In college life i also experienced such thing 😆

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pappais

@pappais

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

awesome story reshma

loved duo friendship bond and purvis sisterly approach

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ice-cold

@ice-cold

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Very nice story yaar⭐️⭐️
Duo friendship and Purvi..wah!😳👏
Purvi can become a senior cop. wat do u say?😃

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Jackles

@Jackles

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Read it at long last😛

Well, imposing portrayal of Duo tie-up👏

Tough the scenes where they had a falling out was a tearjerker, still up to the mark i.e not like wonted scenes by FW as in Giraftaar series😉👍🏼

Was really taken away with impressive roles of Purvi mam and Acp sir👏

Love the fact that how they both picked out the truth in duo eyes immediately😛

Smitten with the small convo between Abhi sir and Purvi mam😳

The last hug scene is breathtaking...It sketched their bonding in true sense...

In short; ZABARDAST👏!!!!

Lekin Daya sir ko kuch zyada he rula diya app nai😭😆

Thanks bunny ji🤗

Edited by saman0 - 11 years ago

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saba yaqoob

@duoa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

loved this story really glad to read it thanks for writing such a nice a story

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Binod Uprety

@binod.abhijeet

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Finally i completed reading story, i m really saying u that the story brought tear in my heart...powerful attempt reshma...it's awesome..perfect discription of title"ristey".

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Brilliant story Reshma.. I loved it very much.. True sometimes quarrel strengthens friendship between two best friends..and a single word from our most loved ones hurts us the most.. Liked how Daya sir repents for his mistake..and Purvi mam what to say.. She did the true job of a sister.. Seriously Reshma from now I have more and more expectations from your future noninvestigative stories.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: Reshma.
This just a short non-investigative story that I wanted to badly write after having a personal experience like this.

Finished reading this story Reshma. It was lovely and touching. Of course I am not one who likes to see duo fighting or Daya saying whatever he said to Abhijeet. (Of course FW will definitely show this and make it a YSPT) I even don't like to see duo in tears.

But I must admit that this happened to me just last week. I had a big time fight with one friend...a very bad misunderstanding...and was so damn upset...I even came to duo thread to look at some caps... the discussion was all about vanished duo and no duo moments now. I felt even more miserable.

On a normal day I may not have appreciated this story as much as I am doing it today..this story has actually lessened my own anger at my friend. Till an hour ago my ego was stopping me from contacting her again. Seriously!!! Thanks a lot for this.🤗

Edited by visrom - 11 years ago

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: kkkloveu
Loved the whole story Reshma..
I like those fights, the reason was natural but yet i wanted you to explain the circumstances a bit more as all of it started so quickly that i missed smoothness in those scenes...sorry dear it's just my personal perspective, i am sorry if you hurt with it..😊
Hmmm...that's quite true, some harsh words from your loved ones hurt more than thousands of those from the outsiders..
Rest your writing style is really awesome, i liked it a lot, waiting for more from you..thank you for this.😳

Thanks a lott for the review, Riya 😃

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