CID/Adaalat Story - Senior Inspector Daya - Page 4

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0066cc">Check your PM. I've sent you a link to my production house where I have a lot of stories posted.😛</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0066cc">And thanks!😃</font>

saw it... will check out soon:)
ur welcome;)

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

it can be tips..FYIs ect..on How to write the "thriller" part of teh story .. i am weak at "thriller" and "romance" part of any story

do find time to go through my FF too chocopie

Originally posted by: snehal.

Shreya i really loved it yaar! All the investigation, disguises, no emotional blackmailing, not much OTTed ness, everything was subtle and gelled in very well ..

After the Abhijeet crossover episode i would really like to see this one as a episode 😃

Shreya, I didn't get time to read... I was busy with unexpected visitors over the weekend and now some other personal problems...will read soon. Sorry.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SHERYA, I read UR Long Cross Over Yesternight with Breaks...😆

The Story starting was Nice, without any Rona Dhona and all...👏

U really Knitting the Past and Present Nicely...👏👏

Somehow, the Story was Dragged, Confused as well in Hurry...

U really indulged KD much more so the Court Part was Less in whole...

DAYA Sir after getting Bail joint Team Openly was little ODD, ok as U already said that U did not want to stand Him alone, but there was some Arguments about that in Bureau and ABHIJEET Sir suggested that He must be in Disguise...😉

I really enjoyed Minimum Team member😃 either the Investigation was too much so u must be Hired NIKHIL and PUNKAJ as CHOTA's na...😉😆😆

I really like VARUN, His Characterization, Utilization, His Excitment and Involvement with Team was Mindblowing... ⭐️👏⭐️

Yaar kya sach mein VARUN nay ADAALAT chor diya hay, pr why.?😕😕😕

About DUO bonding, the Scene meeting with AMIN VERMA at His Cell was Completely Stole the whole Story, I really Visualize the Back Steps of DAYA Sir even still My ears feeling the Cocking of ABHIJEET Sir Khali Gun...⭐️

U did do Clearify that How and who knew that DUO be at Hotel at that time or I missed it...😕😕😕

I also got Confused as how the Recptionest left Her Desk either without Replacing anyone else in Her Desk as well not Closed or using Passward Protection on Computer (i thing She inspired by FW there😉😆..)

I really Adore that NAMAK KUM scene, so Lively...😳👏👏

DAVE and JAISWAL character was Less and Not upto the Mark...

the Motive was also not Crisp either the VIKRUM Nabbing by CID with that Plan was Excillent...👏👏

VIKAS character was Good but why He changed His Disguise as Old Woman after that Murder in Disguise of Girl, He must change His Gender na...😉😕

The Investigation in Lodges and Hotels by FREDDIE Sir and VARUN was Fabulous...👏👏👏

Yes how do Police got that Cane and from where as DAYA Sir already give it to Old Woman and She grabbed it, is She wore Gloves if Not so there must be Her Finger prints also there...😕😕😕

BABA BHURJI was too Dull as to Dead by Only One hit of Cane without any Struggling...😲😲

After seeing the Messing at Room, why DAYA Sir did not call ABHIJEET Sir, He called Him after finding the Body na...

Somehow the SHERYA Flair was Missing but all and all really Long but Lovely Attempt...👏👏👏

As per Ur Order, No Sorry and Apology this time...😈

Originally posted by: visrom

Shreya, I didn't get time to read... I was busy with unexpected visitors over the weekend and now some other personal problems...will read soon. Sorry.

Finally finished reading the entire story€ Padh ke dil khush ho gaya€ Good to see the 2005-06 team working.. Nice investigation KD and Jaiswal ki baat cheet ke liye full marks

One thig I wanted to say€ Varun ko dekh kar waise bhi mujko Vivek ki yaad aati thi aur yeh story padh kar toh pakka yaad aa gayi€.

Lovely story Shreya Keep it up 👍🏼

Nice crossover story Shreya. Missing Varun so much...😔 this was a nice tribute to him.

There was that interaction between Freddie and Varun to decide who would go left and who would go right...there I was reminded of our Vivek. Another guy I miss a lot.


Hope to see some nice crossovers...something which we can never expect on TV. All they'll show is OTT and 0 investigation.