CID/Adaalat Story - Senior Inspector Daya - Page 3

Wonderful story.
Just loved it..!😊
Loved the last part..👏
well written 😃

Finished reading finally.
This one's simply superb !!

I'm waiting for the third crossover to happen 😛

Sorry for late review Shreya di.. Its really a lovely story.. I enjoyed reading it a lot.. A big round of applause for you👏👏👏.. But I had some questions.. If you clarify these I will be obliged..
1. Time interval b/w entry of Duo and Daya sir reach the hotel room is short.. How can in such a short time after noticing Daya sir Vikas reach BB's room and kill him and change his gotup?
2. Does police force keep Dna sample of criminals??
3. Why will a big Hotel allow hair oil salesman there?
4. I am doubtful can Daya sir be officially permitted for investigation after bail?? He must be in suspension na..
5. When they got to know that Vikas is brother of Amin.. Team should have interrogate Amin much before than last moment..
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Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Wonderful story.
Just loved it..!😊
Loved the last part..👏
well written 😃

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Sorry for late review Shreya di.. Its really a lovely story.. I enjoyed reading it a lot.. A big round of applause for you👏👏👏.. But I had some questions.. If you clarify these I will be obliged..
1. Time interval b/w entry of Duo and Daya sir reach the hotel room is short.. How can in such a short time after noticing Daya sir Vikas reach BB's room and kill him and change his gotup?
2. Does police force keep Dna sample of criminals??
3. Why will a big Hotel allow hair oil salesman there?
4. I am doubtful can Daya sir be officially permitted for investigation after bail?? He must be in suspension na..
5. When they got to know that Vikas is brother of Amin.. Team should have interrogate Amin much before than last moment..
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Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">Hello Angeliceyes...thanks! Okay so answers...</font>

1. <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">Well the murderer saw Daya sir in the parking lot so he quickly went upstairs. Daya sir stopped at the reception to find out where BB was staying. And all Vikas did was change his wig. That took him no more than a few seconds.</font>
2. <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">Whenever a criminal is caught their DNA is entered into the system.</font>
3. <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">Hotels do allow that especially if they're getting a commission. I guess I forgot to mention that part.😆</font>
4. <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">Since when could anyone suspend a CID officer?😆Actually I didn't want to show him standing on the side so I did it.</font>
5. <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">Like I mentioned (or maybe I didn't) they forgot to question him in the midst of everything happening. When they did remember they went right away.</font>

<font color="#006666" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hope that helps!😃</font>

Thats so sweet of you Shreya di😳.. Thank you so much 🤗.

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Lakshmi di I try. But how do you want me to be your guide exactly? 😆

it can be tips..FYIs ect..on How to write the "thriller" part of teh story .. i am weak at "thriller" and "romance" part of any story

do find time to go through my FF too chocopie

Shreya i really loved it yaar! All the investigation, disguises, no emotional blackmailing, not much OTTed ness, everything was subtle and gelled in very well ..

just saw th PM Shreya.. wil read it and comment for sure..:)