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Jackles

@Jackles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: Sonali.
Since Election is approaching, I scribbled this...

Chunaav

Aaya Aaya Chunav Ka Daur Aaya
Aam Aadmi Bhi Ab Khas Kehlaya
Bade Bade Netaon Ne Chuna Apna Manch
Vaado Aur Aashwasano ka fir Shuru huva Prapanch
Jinhe Dekha Bhi Naa Tha 5 Sallon Mein Woh Achanak Huve Prakat
Baatein Aise Karte Jaise Humari Har Samasya Se Hai Nikat
Achanak Milne Wali Ehmiyat Ko Kya Hum Nahi Jaante?
Ye Vaade Hai Bas Pralobhan Kya Hum Nahi Pehchaante?
Achanak Humari Choti Choti Samasyaon Ke Milte Hai Hal
Par Jaante Hai Chunaav Ke Baad Ka Kal Hoga Vaisa Hi Jaisa Tha Beeta Huva Kal
Hume Khush Karne Ke Liye Diye Jaate Hai Aneko Pralobhan
Aur Jab Satta Milti Hai Unhe Toh Hota Hai Humara Shoshan
Magar Aise Mein Matadaan Hi Naa Karna Kya Hai Sahi Oopay?
Shayaad Aisi Hi Soch Iss Desh Ko Aur Kamzoor Banayee
Matdaan Kar Ke Ekdum Sahi Umeedwar Shayad Hum Naa Chun Payee
Par Hume Haq Hai, Hum Desh Tak Apni Aawaz Pahunchayee
Badlaav Laane Ka Zimma Agar Hum Khud Uthayee...
Toh Shayad Badlaav Ki Shurvaat Aaj Hi Se Ho Jaayee...

A whip smart portraying of mental picture👏

Though i am bit confused by the bold words😳

Edited by saman0 - 11 years ago

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#662

Thanks Sanam... Well the meaning of the words you asked are mentioned below...

Aashwasano - Promises

Prapanch - Fabrication

Pralobhan - Lure

Shoshan - Exploitation

Matdaan - Voting

Hope all your doubts are cleared...

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misha.as

@misha.as

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Wow di its awesome Sonali Di...

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: misha.as
Wow di its awesome Sonali Di...

Thanks Misha... 😃

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Jackles

@Jackles

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: Sonali.
Thanks Sanam... Well the meaning of the words you asked are mentioned below...

Aashwasano - Promises
Prapanch - Fabrication
Pralobhan - Lure
Shoshan - Exploitation
Matdaan - Voting

Hope all your doubts are cleared...

Thanks for erasing my doubts🤗

High Moral poem👏

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: saman0

Thanks for erasing my doubts🤗
High Moral poem👏

Thanks a ton Sanam... 😃

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ice-cold

@ice-cold

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#667

Nice poem😃👏
Suits the election season. good one👏⭐️
Sory for being late

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: -Souj-
Nice poem😃👏
Suits the election season. good one👏⭐️
Sory for being late

Thanks sweetie and no issues for being late its okay...

By the way of you have time read the story too its on page 79

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#669

Wonderful story Sonali di..

A short, crisp, funny and a very innovative story, really loved the whole..👏

I really found a new aura in this story, the way you showed team there was really good, a nice surprise indeed..

Little funny moments were very good, i really liked Daya and Abhijeet of this story..perfect super cops and Duo of the CID that we saw in the golden era..⭐️

The way they made her confess was really very good, the execution of whole was excellent..👏

The explanation of the whole case in the form of a game termed as "court room" was very well shown, a very creative and brilliant piece of work Di..

Thanks a lot for this story Sonali Di..