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Promo is really very interesting 👏
excited to read 😃
do post it ASAP !
Sorry for being late guys... I was to complete this story quite a while age but due to some personal problems I am not able to post it altogether so posting in parts. Hope you like it
The Case of Kidnapped Girl
Scene 1
Its late night. Daya is driving the car on the way he halts at the corner of the road where Abhijeet is waiting. His car broke down mid way. Abhijeet immediately notices Daya and gets into his car.
Daya: Dekha, bigad gayi naa beech raaste? Main keh raha tha tumse Servicing ke liye de do... Par tum manoge nahi...
Abhijeet: Sorry yaar... Main sochta tha ki de du par koi na koi kaam nikal aata tha aur bas
Daya: Bas ab tension mat lo maine aapne Garage wale ko bata diya hain woh aa kar le jayega...(Abhijeet Smiles and Daya smiles as well)
Abhijeet: Chalo Daya aaj kahin bahar khate hain.. Waise bhi abhi ghar jaa kar khana pakane ka mera koi mood nahi hain...
While Abhijeet is talking to Daya, Daya is staring at the car which is a bit ahead of their car
Abhijeet: (almost shouting) Daya,
Daya: (suddenly responds) haan... kuch kaha tumne?
Abhijeet: Maine toh bahut kuch kaha yaar, par pehle tum batao dhyaan kahan hain tumhara aur uss gaadi ko aise ghoor kyun rahe ho?
Daya: Abhijeet, uss gaadi mein ek ladki hain aur mujhe aisa laga jaise woh madad maang rahi hain...
Abhijeet: tumne usse Dekha?
Daya: Clearly toh nahi bas thoda bahut... Par uske hothon ke movement se laga jaise woh keh rahi ho help...
Abhijeet: Theek hain toh chalo dekhte hain... Overtake karo uss car ko..
Daya immediately speeds up and tries to overtake the vehicle, when the vehicles are moving along side. Abhijeet and Daya repetitively ask them to stop the vehicle but they don't so Daya overtakes it and parks his car across their car. They have to stop their car however instead of coming out of the car they start firing at Duo. Duo take cover behind the car..
Daya: Pagal ho gaye hain kya yeh log? Goliyaan kyun chala rahe hain?
Abhijeet: Koi toh gadbad hain Daya...
One bullet almost moves near Abhijeet ear he is startled Daya goes angry
Daya: (taking out his gun) Inko toh main abhi dekhta hoon...
Abhijeet: (putting Daya's gun down) naa Nahi Daya, agar uss gaadi mein ladki hain toh humari goli usse bhi lag sakti hain... (Daya nods) Main piche se uss ladki ko nikalne ki koshish karta hoon tum inn logon se baat karne ki koshish karo Shayad iss se inka dhyaan bat jayee...
Daya: okay par Abhijeet Sambhal ke yaar
Abhijeet Nods and smiles he swiftly goes through a trees on the corner of the road. trying to move behind the goon's car
Daya: Chahate kya ho tum log goliyaan kyun chala rahe ho?
A man: humare raaste se haat jaa warna gaadi tujh par chada denge..
By the time Abhijeet has reached end of the car, he notices a girl semi-conscious on the passengers back seat... He very slowly opens car door and takes the girl out without making a single noise.. The goons siting ahead have their attention focused on Daya
Daya: Dekho, hum baat kar sakte hain... mujhe bas aap logon se kuch maddat chahiye...
Meanwhile one man notices Abhijeet Moving away with the girl He is shoots at Abhijeet but he bends and misses the bullet... In no time Abhijeet takes his gun down and shoots at goons hand, his gun falls down. Seeing this, the one sitting at the driver's seat starts the vehicle he bumps against Daya's car. Daya is thrown some distance away and the goons car speed up to some limit and vanishes in darkness
Abhijeet: Daya...
He rushes towards Daya and finds him injured and semi conscious. He scans through the road its quite deserted. Its hard for a vehicle to come through this way He has to take the girl and Daya both to the hospital and that too as soon as possible. He calls Control room for help. He reports about the car and its number and description of the goons. He also requests them to send help to their location so that the two semi conscious people could be taken to the hospital. He later informs ACP sir about the entire incident. He notices the gun of the goon he has shot on hand he picks it up.
Scene 2
Abhijeet is standing at hospital. A patrolling vehicle helped them reach the hospital, Daya and the girl are being treated Abhijeet is standing outside their ward. Meanwhile ACP sir arrives
ACP: Abhijeet, Daya kaisa hain aur tum theek ho naa?
Abhijeet: Daya aur uss ladki ka treatment chal raha hain sir, Main bilkul theek hoon... Mujhe andaza nahi tha sir, ke woh log Daya par gaadi chada denge...
Doctor comes out
ACP: yes doctor!
Doctor: ghabrane ki baat nahi hain... Aapke officer ko thodi chot sir mein aayi hain aur thodi pair mein... Unhe hosh bhi aa gaya hain.. You can take him home...
Abhijeet: Thank God... aur woh ladki,
Doctor: usse chloroform diya gaya hain hosh aane mein waqt lage ga
ACP: okay Thank you doctor. Humare do constables uss ladki ki security ke liye yahin rahenge..
Doctor nods and Abhijeet and ACP move to Daya's room.
ACP: kaise ho Daya..
Daya: theek hoon sir... main sahi waqt pe hat gaya warna aaj toh mera tata bye bye ho jata... (laughs then notices Abhijeet looks gloomy) Woh ladki theek hain naa Abhijeet?
Abhijeet: haan theek hain yaar bas behosh hain.
Daya: Toh tumhara chehara kyun utra huva hain?
Abhijeet: Daya, sorry yaar mujhe andaza nahi tha ki woh log tum par gaadi chada denge...
Daya: Main theek hoon yaar... I am fine.. don't worry...
Duo smile looking at eachother
ACP: woh gaadi uska kuch pata chala Abhijeet?
Abhijeet: Nahi sir abhi tak kuch nahi... Par unn logon ko maine dekha hain sir... Unka sketch banwa kar humare database se match kar sakte hain..
ACP: Great chalo...
Daya: haan chalo..
ACP: kya chalo? tum ghar jaa rahe ho Daya...
Daya: Sir, aapko kya lagta hain ghar jaa ke mujhe chain ki neend aayegi?
Abhijeet: Par Daya, tumhe chot lagi hain...
Abhijeet: Itni bhi chot nahi lagi hain yaar ki ghar baith jao
Abhijeet: (smiling towards ACP) yeh manega nahi sir...
ACP (smiles) Chalo fir..
Scene 3
Trio are seen in the bureau
Daya moving towards computer
Daya: Main computer shuru karta hoon Abhijeet tab tak
Abhijeet: ek min Daya.. Ek aur cheez hain jo humare kaam aa sakti hain
Daya: kya?
Abhijeet: (taking out from the pocket) yeh gun... yeh un logon ki gun hain sir... Iss par se hume fingerprints aur iska serial number mil sakta hain... Kuch aur nahi toh yeh pata toh chal hi sakta hain ki yeh kiske naam par hain..
ACP: Good job Abhijeet...Daya is gun ka serial number check karo aur tum Abhijeet un logon ke sketches banao tab tak Main Salunkhe ko bula kar Fingerprints check karva ta hoon...
Daya gets busy with finding the serial number of the gun through website,, while Abhijeet is busy making sketch on computer
Daya: Poori koshish ki hain isse mitane ki but I think I can manage. (he scribbles through the number. The number is partially visible.. The number shows 321... A smile establishes on his face albeit the pain in his leg and head..
Abhijeet: Number mil gaya kya?
Daya: Tumhe kya lagta hain?
Abhijeet: Mil hi gaya hoga warna iss muskaan ki koi aur wajah nazar toh nahi aa rahi.. (Smiles)
Daya: Number partially mila hain 312... ek number missing hain.. Par German Flare Gun jiske shurvat ke 3 number hain aakhri number dhoondna kitna mushkil hoga! (Duo smile)
Abhijeet: aahaan.. Yeh sketches bhi ban gaye...
ACP: (enters) Abhijeet, Daya... Salunkhe aa gaya hain chalo...
Trio leaves for the lab
Scene 4
Trio Enter
Salunkhe: Tum dono ko raat ko bhi chain nahi hain kya? (notices Daya limping) Ab iss bechare pair ke saath kya kiya tumne?
Duo laughs
Abhijeet: humne socha ki hum duty kar rahe hain aur Salunkhe Saab sote rahe yeh toh naa insaafi hain naa?
Daya gives gun to Salunkhe while Abhijeet brings in Chair and pushes Daya's shoulder gently signaling him to sit.. Daya knew there is no point in arguing as Abhijeet wouldn't listen so he sits down quietly without any debate.
Salunkhe quickly takes the fingerprints from the gun and matches it with the database.
Salunkhe: Eureka! Boss
ACP: match ho gaye?
Salunkhe: haan yeh dekho, Jagga ke fingerprints hain...
Daya: Superb! Agar yeh humare database mein hain toh dusra bhi zarur hoga Abhijeet...
ACP: zara iski details dikhana Salunkhe... (Looking at the computer screen) Naam Jagdish Kamat urf Jagga... Choti moti Choriyaan Karte huve pakda gaya hain...
Abhijeet: (having a look at the computer) yeah dekhiyee sir, yeh aksar apne saathi Tejinder Singh urf Teja ke saat hi choriyaan karta hain.. Aur iska saathi hain... Umm... (Clicking on his companions name) Aree Sir yeh toh vohi hain jo drive kar raha tha...Aur yeh raha inke ghar ka patta...
ACP: (phone rings) Hello... Haan Dr. saab... Kya hosh aa gaya... Hum log Abhi aate hain... (to team) Uss ladki ko Hosh aa gaya hain.. chalo usse milne chalte hain...
Daya: Sir, aap aur Abhijeet hospital jayiyee.. Main in ke ghar ko check karta hoon.
ACP: Nahi! tum mere saath hospital chalo.. Unn logon ke ghar Abhijeet aur Rajat chale jayenge,,,
Daya: Okay sir... (checks the clock its 3.00 a.m.)
Scene 5
Abhijeet reaches at Jagga's place on Daya's bike while Rajat Arrives on his bike.
Abhijeet: Rajat, yahan... Yehi ghar hain
Rajat: (monitoring the house) Ghar band lag raha hain.. (moving towards the house)
Abhijeet: (Also moving ahead) zara sambhal ke Rajat, yeh log thode sirfire hain
Rajat nods.. They move towards the house monitor it from outside and feel no one must be in, yet to be sure Abhijeet opens the locked door of the house with his pen knife. Two officers move in with swiftly and carefully. They notice the house dusty
Rajat: Sir, lagta hain yaahan pichle kai dinonse koi aaya hi nahi... Yeh Jagga kahi aur reh raha hoga...
Abhijeet: Shayad Teja ke ghar... Ek baar wahan bhi check kar lete hain... Ek kaam karo Rajat headquarters mein phone kar ke do constables ki duty yahan aur do constables Teja ke ghar ke bahar taynaat kar do.. Umeed kum hain unki yahan aane ki magar fir bhi...
Rajat: okay sir...
Scene 6
Daya and ACP reach hospital. They directly enter the ward. The girl is sitting on the bed while She sees ACP and Daya enter.
GIrl: Thank you so much... Mujhe Doctors se pata chala ke Aaj aap logon ki vajah se main zinda hoo
Daya: (smiles) that's our job ma'am. Waise aap hain kaun aur inn logon ke chungal main kaise phas gayi?
Girl: Mera naam Preeti hain sir, main ek investigative journalist hoon. Crime Week magazine ke liye kaam karti hoon. Main beggar mafia pe kaam kar rahi thi sir.. Yeh ek bahut bada racket hota hain sir. Hindustan ke bade bade sheheron se bacchon ko kidnap kiya jata hain aur fir unke haath paaon tod kar kabhi aankhein phod kar bheek magvayi jaati hain... Mumbai mein chal rahe is beggar mafia ke mastermind tak main pohochna chahti thi... Issi silsile mein maine kahi bar kai bacchon se baat ki... par jaise hi main un se unki chot ko lekar ya unke thikane ko lekar unse baat karne ki koshish karti thi woh log bhaag jaate the... Iss liye aaj raat maine Andheri link road signal wale bacchon ka piccha kiya aur main lag bhag unke theekane tak pahuch hi gayi ke achanak kisi ne mere mooh pe rumaal jaisa kuch rakha aur main behosh ho gayi... halka sa yaad hain hain sir ki shayad main kisi gaadi mein thi par theek se kuch yaad nahi... Fir mujhe yahan hospital mein hosh aaya sir.
ACP: Koi baat nahi Preeti, tumhara adhoora kaam ab hum poora karenge... Tumhe yaad tum exactly behosh kaha hui thi?
Preeti: theek se yaad nahi sir par Andheri link road ke paas kahin par...
ACP: Theek hain koi baat nahi hum pata laga lenge.. Tumhari security ke liye bahar do constables toh hain hi...Saath hi tumhe koi aur madad ki zarurat ho yeh mera number hain kabhi bhi call kar lena...
Preeti: Thank you sir...
ACP and Daya moves out
ACP: Daya baki sab ko abhi bureau bula lo
Daya nods.
Scene 7
In the bureau, entire team present
ACP: Haan Abhijeet kya pata chala..
Abhijeet: Unka ghar dekh ke toh lagta hain sir ke woh log pichle kai dinon se apne ghar aaye hi nahi...Do havaldaar humne unke ghar par laga diye hain...Uss ladki ne kya bataya sir?
Daya explains the entire story...
Freddy: Lekin sir yeh dono... mera matlab hain yeh Jagga aur Teja toh choote mote chor hain fir yeh beggar mafia case mein kaise involve ho gaye?
Daya: Choote mote gunde hain Freddy, Paise mil gaye toh maan gaye...
Abhijeet: Iss waqt humare liye woh racket expose karna aur unn bachon ko chudana zyada zarururi hain..
Poorvi: par sir, ek baar hum un dono tak pahunch gaye toh shayad woh shayad iss racket ko expose karne mein maddad mil jaye...
ACP: Aisa karo Nikhil aur Pankaj.. Tum dono Jagga aur Teja ka follow up karo.. Sachin aur Freddy tum dono uss pistol pe follow up karo... Aur beggar bacchon ke liye mere pass ek plan hai... Abhijeet zara Mumbai ka map open karo aur unn areas ko circle karo jahan slums hain... Aur aisi jagah mark karo jahan yeh chote bacche normally beekh mangte hain...
Abhijeet spreads Mumbai Map on the table and marks the slum areas with red pen and beggers zone (areas like signals, temples etc) with blue pen..
Daya: sir.. yeh dekha aapne? lag bhag har slum area ke pass ek beggar zone hain...
ACP: Iska matlab samaj rahe ho?
Purvi: haan sir, ho naa ho yeh bikhari bacche yahin aas pass ki basti mein rehte honge...
Abhijeet: haan aur woh log bhi jo inn bacchon se bheek mangvate hain...
ACP: bilkul sahi... Toh Abhijeet ab inn saare slums mein humare undercover officers bhejo... Main kal hi commissioner sir se baat karta hoo aur kal hi kuch officers bhijwane ko kehta hoo..
Abhijeet: Right sir,
ACP moves towards his cabin while all the officers help Abhijeet strategizing the areas for their future plan.
Daya: Poore Mumbai mein kuch 17 slums hain..
Shreya: aur Yeh Dharavi ka slum sir, yeh toh bahut bada hain... Hume kaafi officers lagenge sir,
Abhijeet: haan Shreya yeh baat toh hain...ek kaam karte hain kal hum pehle iss saare area ka moaina kar aate hain aur fir apne undercover cops bhehenge...
Daya: Perfect.. par uss se pehle kuch kha lete hain... Bahot bhook lagi hain yaar...
Abhijeet: haan yaar Daya mujhe bhi...
Freddy: par iss waqt aap ko kya milega sir? subah ke sade chaar baj rahe hain...
Purvi: Mere drawer mein biscuits hain... Chai aur biscuits kha lijiye sir...
Duo nod. Purvi brings biscuits while Shreya, Nikhil and Pankaj bring tea for the entire team. Team enjoys tea and biscuits.
Meanwhile Rajat's phone rings...
Rajat: Sr. Insp Rajat here... haan bolo... Kahan par? accha hum aate hain.. (to Duo) sir woh Police ko Dahisar check naka ke pass woh gaadi mili hain jisse aap logon ki kal muth bhed hui thi...
ACP: (comes in) Rajat, tum Nikhil aur Pankaj dekh kar aao..
Rajat nods and leaves with other two.
Scene 8
Sachin and Freddy finally manage to find the pistol number. Freddy comes up with the idea he enter the number 321 and German Flare Gun in police database and find out a missing report with number 3214.
Sachin: Awesome idea Freddy...
Freddy: sir yeh gun kisi tarang talwar ki hain... yeh rahi missing report.
Sachin: Fir bhi kal hume baki 9 logon se bhi baat karni chahiyee. Ho sakta hain iss ka gun ka number 3214 naa ho..
Freddy nods...
Scene 9
Rajat, Pankaj and Nikhil are monitoring the car..
Pankaj: (near the front passenger seat)Sir yahan dekhiyee khoon hain (collecting the samples)
Nikhil: (at the back seat) Yeh uss Jagga ka khoon hoga sir, Abhijeet sir ne uske haath par goli chaliyi thi... Yaahan kuch baal hain sir, shayad uss ladki Preeti ke honge (Collects them in evidence bag)
Rajat (examining the engine number) Hadd hain in logon ne car ka numberplate bhi nahi badla...Pankaj dikkie kholna zara... (Pankaj unlocks the dikkie... He moves behind and opens the dikkie) kamaal hain baal toh yahan bhi hai... (collects them in evidence bag..) Nikhil Dikkie se bhi fingerprints uthanaa...
Scene 10
In bureau..
Purvi: (on call) haan Neha, Sorry yaar itni subah subah disturb kar rahi hoo... (Laughing) haan kaam tha... Woh tu Crime Week mein hain naa? Mujhe teri ek colleague ke baare mein kuch information chahiyee thi.. Haan Preeti naam hain uska... Kya? Kya baat kar rahi hain are you sure? Dekh woh investigative journalist hain.. shayad freelancer... kya? are you sure? theek hain...Main baad mein baat karti hoon.
Trio are in the cabin, Purvi rushes in..
Purvi: excuse me sir, Sorry to disturb you... Lekin maine app se bina puche apne ek poorani dost ko phone kiya tha.. Woh Crime week mein Administration department mein hain... Woh bata rahi thi ki wahan Preeti naam ki koi investigative journalist nahi hain... Freelancer bhi nahi hain sir...
Abhijeet: iska matlab Preeti ne humse jhoot bola?
Daya: Par kyun?
ACP: Wohi toh Daya, Wohi toh kyun bola hoga usne yeh jhoot abhi patta karte hain...Poorvi tum aur Shreya Hospital jao aur Preeti se baat karo...
Poorvi nods and leaves
Scene 11
In the hospital
Poorvi and Shreya come near Preeti's ward where they find lot of nurses and ward boys with doctor around.
Shreya: Itni bheed kyun hai yahan? Kahin iss Preeti ko kuch ho toh nai gaya?
Purvi: Chal jaldi dekhte hain...
Cutting the crowd lady officer enter the ward flashing their ID cards.. They find the room empty...
Purvi: yeh ho kya raha hain? Preeti kahan hain?
Nurse: Maam usne humse glucose ka drip nikalwaya.. keh rahi thi bathroom jaana hain.. Woh bathroom gayi par kafi waqt tak wapas aayi hi nahi... Jab humne knock kiya toh koi reply aaya hi nahi.. fir humne ne yeh darwanza toda toh pata chala woh khidki ke raaste se bhaag gayi hain!
Shreya: Tumhara matlab Preeti bhaag gayi? Aaap logon ne ACP saab ko inform kyun nahi kiya?
Doctor: Yeh sab kuch abhi huva hain 15 minute pehle isse pehle hum kuch samaj paate aap log aa gaye...
Purvi: (to Shreya) Pehle woh Crime Week wala jhooth aur ab yeh hospital se bhaag jaana woh bhi 1st floor ki khidki se... Iss Preeti ke dimaag main chal kya raha hain Shreya??
End of Part 1
Wow Sonali Di!
Really wonderful part!It seems so realistic and I loved the beautiful duo, trio and whole team moments.Extremely well written and natural dialogues!⭐️
Originally posted by: neha_dna
Will read soon Sonali...
Sorry... have to read your previous stories too...!
Aww thanks sweetie I am glad you liked it so much 😃
Arree My stories are here itself Neha... Kabhi bhi padh lo whenever you have time 😃But awaiting you FB haan
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