Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 84

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Hey GD... 🤗

I read the story...

Loved it!!

You touch my heart through every story GD...!!!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story... the bond, the emotions... everything awesome as always!!

Lovely story!!! 👏

You describe emotions so well GD... I must have said this thousand times, but you make me say it again!! And I must say you designed "Chandrakant Shetty" very well!!!

First I thought, kahin yeh story ka villian toh nahi... but loved the way he accepted the fact!!

Tumne mujhe phir se "Staying Place" ki yaad dila di...

Ab main aur kya kahun...

Thank you so very much GD for giving us such beautiful stuff to read...!!!

Love you and God bless you 🤗

And yes, I agree with Soni... Abhijeet should not have taken such a step...!! But koi baat nahi... tum ne uska thought bhi explain karne ki koshish ki...!! 😊

Originally posted by: gadhadada

so Bara Gudda in Fire...😉😆

Yaar, Yes I love Mr CHANDERKANT SHETTY character alot...😳😳

might be Bhai kay father Sach mein aisy hee hun...😳😃

khair, Yes cz Yaar Age, Experience, Practicality, Observation sub count krta hay...😊

He watches Bhai Healthy hain, ek Achi Post pr Good Respectable job kay sath hy, Ek aisay Bandy kay sath rehta hay jo Us ka Dihaan wesa hee rakhta hay jo Wo kartay...😳😳 Very well thought!!!

about SONI and URS point...😊

Yaar, aisa Mut kaho, koi bhi wahan hota tou Yehi Decision leta...

haan Tareeka thora Odd tha, wo bhi Bhai kay liyey...

warna Baray Bhai yehi kartay,...

Hr aadmi chahyey kisi ko kitna kuch day day, wo Dukh Hamesha Us kay Dil kay ander rehta hay kay Hum BLOOD RELATED nahi...

Ye Cheez chahyey Umer kay kisi bhi Hissy pr chaly jao, Rehti hay...

aur Bhai kay Father khud bhi Achi aur Baray Bhai say Better Position pr thy na...

Un ka Perspective bhi Theek hee tha Yaar...

Chalo main Baray Bhai say aur Baray Bhai kay saaray Fans say mazrat kr leta hun...

Theek hay Boss...👍🏼

Arey nahi nahi yaar... main tareeke ki hi baat kar rahi thi... wohi toh kaha maine ki unka thought tum ne explain kiya hai... aur baad mein unhein pachtawa bhi hua na... so koi baat nahi...

Lekin buss unhein zara dheeraj se kaam lena chahiye tha... it is not about you as a writer... It is more about he character of Abhi...

Buht Buht Shukriya Bara Gudda...🤗🤗

Most Awaited Feedback for Me...😳😳

Awww...

May we all get to read many many more stories from you...!!!

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Originally posted by: gadhadada

POPAT ki TRP barh rahi hay...😆😆

Usy bhi koi Reality Show join kr na paray ga...😉😈

Originally posted by: snehal.

Hmmm..

I liked this story in bits and pieces. Some points i don't quite agree. But yaha list karungi toh shayad villain of the forum ka award mile mujhe 😆

Anyways, Nice non investigative story with lots of emotions!

Originally posted by: snehal.

Hmmm..

Ok i will PM you soon. 😊

Originally posted by: snehal.

Leave it GD. It's ok. It's just a story.