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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rosepink.

haan toh hum kisi nhi h na,hum toh guy h na,rosepink h..aur hum toh IF pe visit b nhi krte k hume pata chale abt new PH,toh hume toh inform krna chahye tha na..
khair welcum welcum😊


arry Boss, chor na Plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: misha.as

Many many congratulation ⭐️ GD ⭐️ for the new production house 🥳
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One of the best thread of this forum.🤗 🤗


I Always love to read the stories..⭐️ 👏 👏
Never want to miss anyone...😊
Ur story have always a big DUO scens which we all love..👏 ⭐️ 👏

Good luck for the next 👍🏼😊
keep writing...👍🏼
And thank u so much for give us a cuite, sweet smiles...👏 😊

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awww...😳😳
itni Saari tareefein, Praise, wishes, Dua...😳😳
baccha aap bhi buht Achy ho...😳😳
balkay Meray saaray readers Buht Achy hain...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
A heartiest biggest congratulations to u Gd 🤗

ur stories are precious for me...its realy i mean 😳
as i said many times that if m here the 1 of the reason behind dis is you nd your stories 😊...yes Gd its ur very own kallam 🤗
nd wnever i feel alone dn i read ur stories again n again 😃
nd these r like my buddies 😳

I was nt here from long time with u bt nw i will always with u
ab mujse chah kr bhi peecha ni chuda paogi😃
nd i promise u wn u need me m always with u dear...dnt forget dis
🤗 🤗
Wish u do write like dis with full josh...with full on bang 😊
God bless u with lots of happiness nd love 🤗
Ur love Anjali 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gd ke 3rd PH ki celebration pe Meetha to bnta h
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

A heartiest biggest congratulations to u Gd 🤗

ur stories are precious for me...its realy i mean 😳
as i said many times that if m here the 1 of the reason behind dis is you nd your stories 😊...yes Gd its ur very own kallam 🤗
nd wnever i feel alone dn i read ur stories again n again 😃
nd these r like my buddies 😳

I was nt here from long time with u bt nw i will always with u
ab mujse chah kr bhi peecha ni chuda paogi😃
nd i promise u wn u need me m always with u dear...dnt forget dis
🤗 🤗
Wish u do write like dis with full josh...with full on bang 😊
God bless u with lots of happiness nd love 🤗
Ur love Anjali 😳


awww... ANJI...😳😳😳
kitni Saari MUHABBATEIN bhar dii hain Tum nay GDPH mein...😉😉
bilkul Usi tarah jesay RAAJ ARYAN nay MUHABBATEIN mein GURUKUL mein Bhar di theen...😆😆
Yaar, Hum kaun sa aap say Peecha churayein gay as U know Jahan ANJILI, wahein RAHUL always with YES BOSS...😉🤗
buht buht buht Saar SHUKRIYA...😳😃
Thank You so much ANJI...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

Gd ke 3rd PH ki celebration pe Meetha to bnta h


Choti sii, Meethi sii Ye KHUSHI...😛😛😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am Really Thank Ful to All the Members of IF either Active to Static... Viewbie to Newbie... Veteran to Starters fotr their Dua, Support, Help, Applause, Appreciate, Praise, Claps, Hugs, thumbs Up, Criticism, Suggestions, Information, Entertainment, Feedback, Advice, Anger, Tears, Smile, Laugh, Fights...🤗
I m really Heartly Congrtas to YOU ALL as U all are the Backbone of This Thread...👏👏
Without YOU ALL, GD is Nothing...😃
GD Personally Thanks to ALL OF YOU including FW, ACP Sir, Baray Bhai, Bhai, FREDDIE Sir, VIVEK, VINEET, RAJAT, NIKHIL, PANKAJ, SHERYA, SACHIN, KAJAL, SALUNKHY Sir, Dr, TAREEKA, Dr, SONALI and All Cast and Crew of CID...🤗


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18 July 2013...!

DUO at residence, DAYA who was working on a File, standup and looking at Calendar and trying to marking something on it with the Cello Pen which is on his fingers' ABHIJEET who sat at Floor Cushion, look at Him and say in naughty tone'

ABHIJEET (naughty): DAYA, 21 July aany wala hay'

DAYA (innocently): tou 21 July ko kya hay.?

ABHIJEET threw a Cushion which fell after hitting Him, ABHIJEET standup with...

ABHIJEET: kya Gift do gay is baar.?

DAYA (naughty): TAREEKA Jee...

ABHIJEET clutched His Neck who was Laughing Loudly, ABHIJEET in Shy Smile again as...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, is baar Main koi Mobile Set ya TITEN ki Watch Nahi lun ga... Samjhy.. (leaving DAYA with) is baar Mujhy koi Yaadgaar Gift dena...

DAYA Smiles on His Cute Request and Jerk Head and both engaged in their Previous work...


19 July 2013...!

Bureau got a Call about a Murder in JUHU, CID team rushed there busy in Investigation where the Culprit was Missing after Killing a Big Businessman named RISHI's Wife MONIKA, they Interrogated Servants, Security Staff, Driver including Her Husband, All denied about their Involvement, just. Passing the Statement that their MAAM was not Waking Up at Morning till the Breakfast time so the Servant went to Her Room and found Her Stabbed, although Her Husband just coming after the Servants found the body from MALAYSIA...

Team taken out all Evidences as Finger Prints from Her room, Foot Prints from Her room, Statements of All members (family as well staff), their Finger Prints, Address, Phone number, Sealed Victim room and after Dispatching the Body to Forensic which DAYA did earlier before ABHIJEET arrival with FREDDIE who went to somewhere else before the Spot not to Waste time, Ordered all not to leave city and moved to Bureau again...

The Case little Stuck and Frustrated Team as the Businessman now showing His Approach and so many Media Channels covering this News by Follow ups...

ABHIJEET feeling Angry as he wanted to take out at least a Lead or Clue so they moved ahead but all going in Vein... here SALUNKHY Sir also presented His Reports with Assumption as...

SALUNKHY: dekho ABHIJEET, kuch Khas Nahi mila hay, Chakoo Yaqeenun Neend mein Aurat kay Pait mein ghusaya gaya hay, is liyey Hatha Pai kay Chances buht Kum huay... Aurat kay Nails Katay huay hain tou Qatil kay Chehray ya Gardan ya Hathon pr Kharonch ka milna Mushkil hay... haan Aurat nay Sleeping Pills lii thi, magar Tum log wo Pills ki bottle Evidence mein laayey ho...

DAYA: jee Sir, Us kay Husband aur Naukarun ka kehna hy kay wo INSOMENIA ki Mareez thi tou Sleeping Pills DR ki Prescription pr leti thi...

TAREEKA: haan DAYA, Blood mein Pills kay itnay Traces Nahi milay hain, is ka matlab 1 ya 2 pills lii hon gi...

ABHIJEET: Mera shak Husband pr hay, magar Flight Inquiry as ye Confirm ho gaya hay kay wo usi waqt wapis hua hoga, kyunky Flight ka Landing time Subah ka hee hay, Us ka Passport bhi Visa ki itni Duration hee bata raha hay, yani 10 din... (suspicious tone) ya tou 10 din mein kuch hua hay ya phir Us kay Husband ny hee koi Chakker chala ya hay...

DAYA: Boss, is ki 10 din ki Kundli nikaltay hain, Phone Records, Milna Julna, sub...

ABHIJEET: haan DAYA, (to SACHIN) SACHIN, zara is MONIKA madam aur in kay Husband RISHI kay 3 months kay Call Record nikalo aur haan is kay Driver ko (to FREDDIE and VIVEK) VIVEK aur FREDDIE, Tum dono sanbhalo, pata karo, kahan jaati thi, kahan aati thi... kis waqt ya Jagah khud drive kr kay jaati thi... yaad rakkho, (determined tone) Mujhy ye Case 21 tareekh say Pehlay Solve chahyey...

DAYA (comes near and smiles): Oye hoye, Birthday Boy ko apni Birthday pr koi Case Nahi chahyey...

ABHIJEET (punch on his arm with): Bilkul Nahi...

DAYA really trying Best to finishes the Case, He really Leaded all as He knew that ABHIJEET had lots of Plans about this 21st July as from few years, that day always moved with just Wishing with Gifts, even only Wishing and Gifts showing the Importance rather mostly the day ruined up in busy Skedules...

Sometimes ABHIJEET Thanked that DUO lived Together and DAYA is such a Person who tried best at least done Cake cutting ceremony either in Residence, Bureau or middle of Road by anything available, sometime Bread, Burger, Pastry or just with a chocolate playing the role of Cake either the whole Team be there or they enjoyed it in each one company...

On early basis they checked the Call records of RISHI and MONIKA but not get found any Suspicious... No New entry in these 10 days... Nothing coming to their Hands which Irritated the Birthday Boy a lot...


20 July 2013'.!

ABHIJEET at Peak of Irritation and DAYA at every moments just to Relax His Buddy, gives him Hope about so many Hours still there to Windup the Case at any Cost and nabbed the Culprit'

Again they keeps check and Interrogated the Staff and RISHI after calling them at Bureau but the same situation prevails without any Solid End'

ABHIJEET anger raises with the passage of time as Media creating lots of Clutter about this Case as they Point out so many Questions on Handling the Clues Improperly as they Unnecessarily Harass the Victims family and Staff'

Here VIVEK checked MONIKA Laptop which was there when they all collecting Evidences from Her room' He did not find much things just Some Casual Folders, the History was washed Out meant Killer did that or might be Victim too as sometimes ppl don't want to keep History and Wiped out it on Regular basis'

VINEET got a Clue when checking Call records of All Staff on ABHIJEET Order after finding RISHI and MONIKA Call Records Cleared' VINEET checked it and find a Very Unexpected match, He headed to DUO where DAYA still Relaxing ABHIJEET and Cooling Him'

VINEET: Sir Mil gaya..?

DAYA (turn): kya.?

VINEET: Sir, MONIKA kay call records mein ek Number hay jo Murder kay Din kay baad Flash Nahi hua hay'

ABHIJEET: tou.?

VINEET: Sir, wo Number SURAJ ka hay, MONIKA ka Driver'

DAYA: arry VINEET, wo MONIKA ka Driver hay, tou MONIKA kay Cell pr Us ka Number tou hoga na'

ABHIJEET: ek minute DAYA, Tumhara matlab wo Number RISHI kay Cell pr Nahi hay aur Tum ko kesay malum, wo SURAJ ka hee Number hay..

VINEET: Sir, kyunky ye Dono Numbers aik hee Basti kay Different Chawl say liyey gayey hain'

DUO checked the Call Records and the Confirmation Papers, the Chawl numbers were Different but the Basti was Same and before Three Months the Second SIM was Purchased which was Switched Off after the Murder day... this Number only Flashed on MONIKA Cell not the RISHI Cell'

DAYA: Boss, isy gheertay hain, Main SACHIN aur VINEET kay sath niklta hun, isy Utha kr laata hun (look at His watch with) abhi Shaam kay 7 bajy hain, abhi 5 ghantay Baaqi hain, Befikr raho, ye Case Main (wink) 21 tareekh shroo honay say pehlay Nimta dun ga' Pakka'

ABHIJEET Smiles on DAYA Assurance and they Headed to that Basti where SURAJ would be Living'

Here VIVEK took out Some Information from IP Address and ABHIJEET joint in that Investigation'!

Time passing and now Worrying ABHIJEET, VIVEK, FREDDIE and Other, ABHIJEET tried a lot but No Ones picking Up the Call, He was Really in Tension even Mobile Company can't give the Locations as the Cell was Switched Off'.

At 11: 35 PM, SACHIN and VINEET entered in a Cab and with a Bad Health Condition with Dust and Blood in their Torn Outfits with so many Wounds in their Faces and Body' they Breath Improperly and what they said about the Man headed them totally Froze all'

SACHIN: Sir, Hum Chawl tak pohanchnay waly thy, pr raasty mein Humein Kuch Ghundun nay Gheer liya, Un mein shayed SURAJ bhi tha' Unhun nay Fight tou ki hee, sath Goliyaan bhi chalai, Hum Backup kay liyey Call bhi Nahi kr saky kyunkay Un logun nay Humaray Cell Tour diyey, Hum pr Buri tarah Hamla kr kay'

ABHIJEET: Tum Teenun kuch bhi Nahi kr paayey aur Cell kesay Tour diyey' Haan aur DAYA kahan hay.?

VINEET (breath heavily): Sir, Un logun nay Hum pr Red Chilli ka Powder Sprinkle kr diya tha' Hum tou samjhein Andhy hee ho gayey thy' isi karan ye sub kuch'

ABHIJEET (shout): main pooch raha hun DAYA kahan hay.?

SACHIN (whispering): Humein nahi malum Sir, Hum nay buht Dhoonda pr DAYA Sir Humein milein nahi'.

ABHIJEET puts His Head on His palm, His Watch Buzzed as its 21 July Started and He reminds His Bhai Assurence which brought so many tears on His eyes as Befikr raho, ye Case Main (wink) 21 tareekh shroo honay say pehlay Nimta dun ga' Pakka'

21 July 2013'.!

01: 00 AM

ABHIJEET moved Downstairs at Bureau, opened His Jeep Driving Door after Wiping His Tears, sat on it and feeling Weird'




A JOKER Stuff was there, which have a Rope rounded its Neck, He instantly trying to Grab but Stopped as Now His Seven Sense Activated, He was taken out His Gloves and checked the JOKER and that Rope, He moved out and rushed to Security who after saying that there was no One except the members coming, He rushed Outside and Collided with a Aged Man of Short Height who just Whispered in Weird Tone'

Aged Man: isy sanbhal kay rakkho, Kaam aayey ga' (below whisper) bachana hay na Usy'

ABHIJEET Stunned, before He grabbed that man, He rushed after Ducking His Head and Lost in dark as the Pole Light completely Switched Off'

ABHIJEET backed to Bureau where FREDDIE, VIVEK and NIKHIL giving First Aid to SACHIN and VINEET, ABHIJEET rushed to Recording room and checked the main Door CCTV Footages, the last Footage was SACHIN and VINEET Entry either ABHIJEET thoroughly checked it from Morning but did not get anything Suspicious'

Now He was much Alert, He did not have anything about DAYA Mysterious Missing except a JOKER Stuff with a Hanging Rope' He reminds the Sentence of that Aged man as'

Aged Man: isy sanbhal kay rakkho, Kaam aayey ga' (below whisper) bachana hay na Usy'

ABHIJEET coming Out from the Recording Room with a Murmur as'

ABHIJEET (murmur): matlab Un ki Nazar hay, yahan pr, hum pr aur Mujh pr' magar is ka matlab ye bhi hay kay Jo bhi karna hay, Mujhy hee karna hay' Buht Shatir Aadmi hay' Kacchi Goliyaan nahi khelein hain' tabhi tou Us Buddhy ko Mujh say Bhirwaya tha wahan'pr (look at that Stuff with) ye Kesay kaam aayey ga'.?

He Jerking His Head, when coming Out, all who was Looking at Him in rush few minutes back tense and their Queries gives One Voice of FREDDIE as'

FREDDIE: kya hua ABHIJEET Sir..? aur ye Aap kay hath mein'?

ABHIJEET (jerking all with): Kuch nahi FREDDIE, DAYA kay Phone pr say Tracking hatwa lo, Us ka Phone bhi toot gaya hoga aur Is SURAJ ko Kal Subah Uthao'

After that He moved Out Complete leaving Stunned the Others' He again sat on His Jeep with that Stuff placing it on passenger Seat and speeds up without any Destination'


03:00 PM

ABHIJEET moved Slowly and Sadly and suddenly heard a Chuckling tone which Jerk Him and His foot pressed on Accelerator in Palpitation as the Voice coming Out from that Stuff'

Voice: ABHiii''''''

ABHIJEET heart Beat at Full Speed even His body was wrapped in Sweat in just the Echoing of this ABHIii and in this the fast Paced Jeep Left Front Wheel coming Out, ABHIJEET pressed the Brake which initiating a Big Scratch but the Jeep was out of Control and Hit the Side walls of a Bridge of road where He was Travelling and Hanging there'

The Door Opened and ABHIJEET was about to Fall as in Tension He forgot to Wears Seat Belts and for Protecting Himself from Falling His hands searching something and got the JOKER Stuff which grabbed by His hand'

His fully loaded Gun from His Jeans Backside swiftly Slipped, while His Cell and Valet from His Coat Pocket One by One falling with the Struggling which He was doing to Save himself from Falling as He was Helpless on that as the Vehicle pushed its weight on Forward Direction too'

The Darkness really Scares Him as now stones of Side wall of Road falling One by One in that dark and the Hand of ABHIJEET which gripped the Door start Slipping from the door as the Vehicle move Forward and in that panic ABHIJEET trying to taken out that Rope from His Left hand with Difficulty, tried, tried and in that trying Lost the JOKER stuff which was Completely Vanish in that dark'

He threw that Rope to an Iron fens at side of Roadside walls and at the last moment when the Vehicle was about to fall, He left the Door handle and swing Himself around that rope and move Upward with complete Wet either in Fear, Sweat or Tension'

He sat on Roadside, manages His Sinus, little Sooth Himself after coming Out from Death Mouth few minutes earlier, the Rope still on His hand and Some Line with Weird tone from an Oldie voice hammering on His head as''

isy sanbhal kay rakkho, Kaam aayey ga'

isy sanbhal kay rakkho, Kaam aayey ga'

isy sanbhal kay rakkho, Kaam aayey ga'

He standup at His feet as Lost everything so moved to Residence direction' the pain of that ABHIII still Scratching His Heart ' He did not know What was happening but this happening really Worrying Him'


05:00 PM

Undoubtedly Two Hours His Feet took to take Him to Residence, where First He changed after taking Shower and Saving that Rope which He took from that Place'

Then He was Shuffling so many Files from His and DAYA Laptop just to spinning His Memory about any Culprit Flashed on His Mind which would Do it as He already Deleted SURAJ perspective from that Mysterious Missing of DAYA'

He understands well that any Other Party took the Advantage of that Moment and done their Work which is DAYA Kidnapping but His Mind now moving on Some Unknown Track which Shuddered Him a lot'


08:00 PM

He was completely Shattered so after Dumping all, moved to Open main Door and found an Elongated Brown Envelope with Newspaper bundle at His Door Step' He instantly opened it after coming inside and wearing His Gloves to Not to Lose any Loopholes and found a Plastic Instrument'




He checked it in Great Detail and confirmed that it's a Car Door Glass Handle' He tried to Call to Bureau but Landline was Not Working, He was taken out His old Mobile Set and using a Different SIM but Lost so many DATA on that Cell which He Lost Last Night little Scary Accident or said attempt to Murder, He used another Valet but lost His DEBT card on the Previous One so only some Notes fillup the mouth of valet'

After getting Ready He Smoothly placed that Brown Envelope inside His Coat Pocket and Left the Residence after Locking it' Heavy Rain Pouring Mumbai so getting any Vehicle was Difficult as Quillas was already Missing and Jeep was at that Bridge, He wanted to take ride from KARTIK but His Vehicle was at garadge and RAHUL and AMAN at DELHI now'.

He stand at a Shade to protect from heavy rain and also thinking for the Another Weird attempt comes on His way as He can't Understand that Why the Culprit wanted to Kill Him if He wanted to that He went to go and Save DAYA'

Suddenly His Thoughts completely Washed Out with a Noise of a cab stopped in front of Him, He immediately hopped inside the Cab and order ANDHERI EAST , the cab moving in Speed while the Driver added CID Bureau, ABHIJEET little Alert as He only gave the Area not the Accurate Destination' He grabbed the Neck of Driver who started to Laugh with'

Driver: Mujhy Maar do gay tou Us tak kesay pohancho gay'

ABHIJEET hands Automatically pulled back, He can't understand What to React, He look at around and feeling the cab moving to Some other place not to ANDHERI EAST so asked in rash as'

ABHIJEET: kahan lay kay ja rahy ho' haan.?

Driver (humming): Wahein jahan koi aata jata nahi'

The Driver look at Him in view Mirror, Smiles Teasingly, opened His Driving Door and Jumped out after Pushing the Door to Close again, Before ABHIJEET speaks in Loud Shock on Driver attempt which was just for a Micro Second as the Cab flew in Air as it Jumped from the Barrier to some extent and landed on a Dark but Weavy floor of a Big Bath tab contained Only water'.

ABHIJEET completely Panic, the Cab drowning Downward, the whole Security system totally Locked all doors, He was moving here and there, the air inside was much Less to gives him Good Support for Breathing so He started Gasping after moving inside the Small Compartments here and there'

During this Tense situation His hand touched His Coat pocket, taken out that Car Door Glass Handle, pushed it on Right place after rubbing His hand on Door, moving down the Car Window Glass, the water Splash comes inside in Speed but ABHIJEET Swum out like a Bullet in Outward direction'

He swum and reached at Upward bed of that water Bowl, having grasp much Air from Fresh Sky and then move to Bank with a Smooth Speed, He completely moving out from that Big Bath tab with Glimpse of Scare, this time manages Himself with much amount of Time, He again gain Courage and Standup either feeling Tired, Heavy Rain still Falling so He was not Answerable about the Wet Cloths and move to another side just to Call His Team or taken Help from them Now'


12:30 PM

Now ABHIJEET Minds striked that He again come to that Sound Route as found so many Quest and Puzzle with Clues which saved Him in Last moment of that Stage where He was about to Lost and Death gripped Him'.

He was searching a Telephone Booth in that Heavy rain, but can't find so entered inside an Under-Construction Building just to Protect Himself from Rain, A Person stopped Him and asked after Spreading His palm in front of Him as'

Person: Ye Sikka Phone mein daaly ga.?



ABHIJEET trying to Disperse His palm in Irritation but what He said freezed Him for some minutes as'

Person: kyun Us say baat nahi karo gay'?

ABHIJEET shocked, grabbed His Collar, who started Laughing Madly which Scares Him Little so trying to take a Coin from His palm but the Person closed His Palm, ABHIJEET in Anger trying to Open His Palm and the Person Backing His Fist' In that Fight a Coin fell and the Person Collar slipped from ABHIJEET Wet Fingers'.

ABHIJEET Jerked His Head after Picking the Coin and Leaving the Person, the Lift stopped at Front and Opened, ABHIJEET look at Outside which was Invisible due to Rain so entered in that Lift, Lift started its Journey as ABHIJEET mind as now His Mind moving on that Plane with much Alertness'

He felt that at One Point the Lift stopped but the door was Not Opened, He tried but Failed, the Lift Light now playing Hide and seek, the suffocation started with Fear Deep down, is this Cubical would be His Coffin???, Query hammering on ABHIJEET mind with Force'

He rubbed His palm and pressing so many Buttons in that Light and dark Game and suddenly his Hand hit with Something and His Fingers feels that it's a Spiral wire attached with a Thing Familiar from His Birth, PHONE'.

He instantly dumped that Coin which fell on His Foot and He grabbed it like a Diamond few minutes earlier, the Coin Strucked and the Lift light completely Vanish and Lift moving in high Speed Downward either ABHIJEET sat on Lift as He felt that might be the Speed and Sound Crushed Him at any second'

The Lift stopped with Jerk and the Door Opened, a Western, tall, Rough Girl stand there, ABHIJEET rushed out in in Hurry and suddenly Firing started, the Girl Clutched ABHIJEET Palm and started Running Outside the Lift but on Left direction, ABHIJEET feels the Bullets coming from Opposite side but can't get the Figures, His words struck inside His Mouth, might be He was just Obeying as right now He was really with Empty mind'

Both Stopped at a Small Wooden Door, Girl look at ABHIJEET, who just broke the door and Both entered with'

ABHIJEET: Tum kaun ho aur..?

Girl (shivering tone): wo' wo humein dekh rahy'

ABHIJEET look at Girl who was mostly watching at Roof, He gazed on that Direct and just Recall what the Girl was trying to say and when about to ask KAUN, Everything comes to Dark and in that there Running again started, He lost everything, the Route, direction, Vision, way, Reason and in that Tiring Mode, He doesn't know when He Lost Another Soft Palm and Fell on Floor bed with Ease'.


06:00 PM

His eyes opened with Sun rays feeling Sand on His tongue and eyelids, He jerked and getup in Rush, looking here and there on that Sand bed without any Possibility about Human, Animal or might be Buildings, He felt He was standing in a Deserted part with small Jumps and Cactus, all Alone, He murmur after Jerking His Head and Walking Slowly as'

ABHIJEET: ye kaun sii jagah hay, ab ye kya naya Chakker hay..?

He really losing His Will but just to Search DAYA and finishes all the Stages of that Bullshit Quest gives Him Courage and Support, He heard a Noise, turn His Neck to His Back and Completely Shock to See a Bus Pushing Horn and coming on His way in that Deserted Area'

He gives Hand and the Bus Stopped, He stepped in and found all New Faces with Same Outfit covered with Dust and Dirt' He sat on an Empty Seat, trying to ask people about Area, their Jobs but feeling that They all Talking to Each One in Different Language which ABHIJEET can't able to Understand so Communicating Something to them was Beyond Imagination'

Somehow He felt Some Scare Deep down, so many Scary and Horrible Frames Flashing on His eye Core where Human trapped by Aliens or Zombies or might be Evils, He moves little Far from the GUY sat beside Him Unintentionally'

A Man comes to Him and ask something in Unusual Vacant Tone which little Shivers Him, ABHIJEET look at Him and say in Weird Tone as'

ABHIJEET: ain'?

Man: %^^^^^^^^^^&&&&&&&@@@@@@@

ABHIJEET still look at Him with Asking Shade, the GUY who was Sitting beside Him look at ABHIJEET and taking Out Something and telling Him in Sign Language Mixed with Same Language, ABHIJEET look at that Rectangular Card with Care as his Fingers did not Touch that Scary Figure and found that the Standing Man asking about TICKET'




ABHIJEET: wo tou Meray pass nahi'

Another GUY sitting in front turned his Neck back and ABHIJEET Heart missed a little Beat as His One Eye was Hollow, He really manages not to throw a Scream from His Throat, the GUY searching His Outfits and by this portraying ABHIJEET to Check His Outfit, might be got the Ticket' ABHIJEET mind Spark' He checked and His Fingers got a Rectangular card, taken out that, the standing Man leapt it with a Smile which again Scare ABHIJEET as his Whole mouth was looking a Hollow Pipe having Dark'.

One by One Bus Stopped and everyone moved out, ABHIJEET can't Understand that where they were moving after Stepping Out as till His Vision, He did not find a Village or Town so where they were moving, a Scared Reply comes from His Mind as UNDER DESERT'

Bus stopped and now the Conductor and Driver moving out as the Bus were Empty and only ABHIJEET was there as a Passenger, He rushed behind them and when stopping One after placing His Hand on Shoulder, the Turning can't handle by ABHIJEET as the Most Scattered Face He watched in His Life, He Jerked Back in Complete Fear'

He was a Driver who look at ABHIJEET in Question mode, ABHIJEET after getting some Courage ask'

ABHIJEET: Tum' main kahan'




Driver pulled ABHIJEET Right hand and placing a Key on it and Rushed away, ABHIJEET trying to Run beside Him but can't be Able to get Him either He felt that the Driver was Vanish in Air which covers Him Completely'.

ABHIJEET Mind was Completely Empty, He can't Think Anything, a Mysterious missing of DAYA turning so many Phases as the Missing converted into Kidnapping after found a Silent JOKER with a Hanging Rope at His Jeep, then His Scary Journey begins without giving Him Time to Contact to His Team, make any Plan either take Some Rest especially Mental Rest'.


08:30 PM

His Mind forgets 21St July, the Cherish day of His Life, He completely wipe out all the plans He made to Celebrate this Day, Time passing Slowly, How many time He ate Something, take a drop of water, sat at any Place, only the thing He have is His watch which give him some Emotional feeling at this Planet where Only He and his Memories with Him, a Tear falls from His eye and a Painful Voice Shivers that Deserted area with'

ABHIJEET: DAYAaa'.


09:00 PM

So many Leap and Bounds He covered without any Destination, Road and when move little ahead after a big barrier, found a Silent Standing building in that Quiet Desert looking Complete Horrible'.



ABHIJEET moved there, finding a Key Hole so put the last Clue He got from that Bus Driver, He heard the Click voice and entered inside after Pushing the Door with Loud voice'.

A Welcome Note He heard after His Entrance in the shape of a Loud Clap meant now the Final Stage started at any minute'

ABHIJEET moving as the Ground Floor was Completely Empty, His eyes are Familiar with dark but it's quite weird that there was Nothing, even a Particle of Dust He did not found which was amazing as the Building was in Deserted end'

His Fingers Visualize Him about the things as He was moving using them as His Visionary Stick, He found Stairs so moved up with care, 1, 2, 3 every Step He take some seconds to feel anyone or anything presence by His Senses, completed 17 Stairs with little much time than Regular, Checked that Floor but Same result which He already Dealt with Ground floor'


09:30 PM

Again His Staircase Travelling Moving On Slowly and Smoothly and here He found a Silhouette in a very low but Soften Light , Before He moved to that to make that Shadow into Clear Figure, heard a Praising Sound'

Sound: Sr. Inspector ABHIJEET'

ABHIJEET: DAYA kahan hay.?

Sound: Dhoond lo, pr is baar Without Clue'

ABHIJEET looking that Shadow moving here and there, so trying to grab Him but fell in floor with Hard as He saw the Shadow in Mirror, Ufff'


09:45 PM

He was Angry on Himself, hearing a Lean voice as ABHIII which Flair a Current from His Head to Toe' He was trying to Calm His Mind and in Another minute got a new Clue in shape of GUN at his Foot with'

Sound: Bonus Round' hahahahha'


10:00 PM

ABHIJEET rashly pulled the Trigger after Picking the Gun and Standup and totally Lost every Hope as the CLICK voice raged Him' the GUN was Empty, He used that till the Last Chamber but the Result was Same'

Sound: Alas! U Lost the Quest'.


10:10 PM

ABHIJEET Angered after Hearing Such so throw that Gun with His All Force to that Mirror with Silhouette which Banged a Fire after that Hit and a Scream shiver the whole Building as DAYA hit with that Bullet hide inside that Mirror and on ABHIJEET Throw, the Gun hit the Mirror, Trigger on Hidden Gun pressed and Shot DAYA in a Second'.


10: 18 PM

ABHIJEET look at all with that Broken Mirror, He Rushed to brining DAYA back to life by Grabbing Him as He was Falling from that floor because He was Standing at Roof Corner but ABHIJEET not Only Missed His Chance to Save His BHAI this time but also went with Him to that DEAD end of Life'.


10: 25 PM

The Few minutes which Both Spending with each One in that Airy Travelling was the Last words of them which never Rebounce back and Heard by Anyone, the Tears were Soaked by the Wind and Call of Each One always Prevails in this Windy Circular moments'


10:30 PM

Both fell on Bed and ABHIJEET trying to gives Words to His Last Wish before His Soul left his Body as'

ABHIJEET: DAYA, Main'

DAYA: pehlay Main' Boss' (whisper) Happy Birthday to You' (voice refreshing) Happy Birthday to Dear ABHI.. (standing now with smile) Happy Birthday to You'

A Huge Clapping Sound ABHIJEET hearing telling Him that Something must be Fishy, He saw a Soft Hand Forward to Himself which He grabbed without any Intention which Pulled Him up and He saw He was on a Jumping Bed'.


10: 45 PM

His whole Team rounded that Jumping Bed and Clapping Loudly with Singing the Happy Birthday song and the Gentle Gaint who was still clutching His Palm face and Eyes Sparkling like a Full Moon'

ABHIJEET mind now grasp that everything was a Plan and they all make him fool, He look at DAYA and hit a loud Punch on His face and then starting Beating Him with hard hand but His Punches and Slaps did not stop the Clapping and that Happy Birthday Song which Echoing in His Mind'.

After feeling Tired to Hit His Buddy or his Own Heart, He wrapped that Beary Gaint with so many Tears which Soaked by DAYA Shirt and heard a Lovely Tone as'

ACP: ABHIJEET, pehlay cake kaat lo, ye Maar Pitai baad mein kr lena'

ABHIJEET leave DAYA and still Shocked that the Clapp and Happy Birthday song Continuing and did not stop for a Micro second, DAYA wipe the Blood which came out from His Lips, Eye Corner from His Sleeves'


10:50 PM

ABHIJEET went to that direction which is First floor of Building and that area which was looking dark and without anything some time earlier now presenting a Scene of Classy Decoration with Streamers, Ribbons, Balloons'.

He stand at Middle of table where a Simple Cake waiting for Cutting and His Team rounded the Table, He look at Front and found His Beary Buddy who was Ready to make a Movie with naughty Smiles but Teary eyes, might be Some hard Punches Hurt Him Deep down and felt him embarrass in front of Head to Juniors'

ABHIJEET Forward his hand towards DAYA, who clutched Him and with that force comes to ABHIJEET side after giving the camera to VIVEK and now ABHIJEET and DAYA cuts the cake with so many Dua, Wishes and Excited Voices'

ABHIJEET cut the Piece of cake and before He thinks to Start from where as ACP Sir, SALUNKHY Sir, DAYA and TAREEKA all are there, DAYA stuffed it inside his Big Mouth with'

DAYA: acha hua main nay apna Hissa Kha liya, (wink) agar Tumhari yaaddasht chali jaati tou, apna Hissa tou maara jata na'

ABHIJEET just Jerk His head and moved further, Here Dinner Started and now DAYA reveal the Actor with Characters and introduce them to ABHIJEET with'

DAYA: aao Boss, Tumhein Un Kalakarun say tou Milwaon'

ABHIJEET moved, DAYA stand at SALUNKHY Sir part with'

DAYA: ye yaad hay Boss'?

Before ABHIJEET say NO' SALUNKHY presented His Dialogue as'

isy sanbhal kay rakkho, Kaam aayey ga' (below whisper) bachana hay na Usy'

ABHIJEET mouth Wide Opened with that Dialogue, He remembered that the AGED MAN was Short Heighted but He can't think about SALUNKHY Sir, He said in Shock'

ABHIJEET (shock): SALUNKHY sahib, aap bhi'

SALUNKHY (laughing with): arry main nay socha, koi Dusra Role mil raha hay, foran kr leta hun (all smiles) (SALUNKHY added) wo tou tum Mujhy pakar hee letay magar Andheray ki wajah say Main Nikl gaya aur phir DAYA baccha jo Mujhy Utha kr daura hay, wah wah' ab Us ka Muqabla karna tou ABHIJEET Tumharay liyey Mushkil hee tha'

All start Laughing on his Comments while DAYA Embarrass and moved ahead with ABHIJEET, ABHIJEET look at SACHIN who Stand in Q and asked'

ABHIJEET: haan bhae, Tum bhi thy? Kya thy wesay Tum.?

SACHIN (smile in shy and Humming): Wahein jahan koi aata jata nahi'

ABHIJEET (stunned with): ohhh, tou wo Taxi Driver Tum thy'

SACHIN nodded, DAYA takes him ahead ABHIJEET got FREDDIE and tried to make the situation connected as'

ABHIJEET: acha tou Tum tou wo Coin waly bany ho gay FREDDIE' hain na'

FREDDIE moved Head in Yes and ABHIJEET praised that He really did not Imagine about Him, the Walking till talking Style He changed as'

kyun Us say baat nahi karo gay'?

Suddenly ABHIJEET had a Big Jerk after finding Another Figure, He pat on his Head with'

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA Jee, aap bhi'

TAREEKA nodded with Smile while DAYA started laughing Loudly and teasing ABHIJEET as'

DAYA: kya Boss, TAREEKA ko bhi nahi pechan paayey'

ABHIJEET Punched on His Tummy and got Four Boys lined up and now DAYA asked'

DAYA (naughty): Bojho Boss' Kaun kya kya bana tha'.?

ABHIJEET (touching RAJAT Shoulder with): ye jo Banda bus mein Meray sath betha tha aur Us nay Mujhy Ticket dikhaya tha'

RAJAT (smiles and say): %^^^^^^^^^^&&&&&&&@@@@@@@

ABHIJEET Embarrass while All Smiling' He look at RAJAT and say'

ABHIJEET: RAJAT, Zabardast' (to VINEET) tou Tum thy kya Meray sath.?

VINEET: Nahi Sir'

ABHIJEET moved a Step ahead and tell in Confident Tone after seeing NIKHIL as'

ABHIJEET: phir Tum ho gay NIKHIL (NIKHIL moved head in Yes) (ABHIJEET added after seeing VIVEK as) kyunkay Bus Driver jis nay Mujhy is Building ki Chabi dii thi wo tou Pakka VIVEK tha'

VIVEK Smiles while ABHIJEET asked the Most Important Query to DAYA the Mastermind of that Whole Quest after Seating at Sofa as'

ABHIJEET (turn to DAYA with): tou DAYA, wo Main Mujrim, matlab Sound kis ki thi'?

A Coughing Voice turn ABHIJEET Head as ACP Sir proudly Presenting Himself as the Main Culprit' ABHIJEET really praised as'

ABHIJEET: Sir Aap bhi, Aap nay bhi is Motay (signal to DAYA) ka hee sath diya'

ACP (smiles): bhae, ab ABHIJEET ki Surprise Birthday Party kay Plan pr Hum sath Nahi dein gay tou Kaun day ga' haan'

DAYA sat beside ABHIJEET who was really in a Stunned mode and shocking Phase after Knowing all.. DAYA placed His hand around ABHIJEET Shoulder who Jerk His hand with'

ABHIJEET: Acha Acha Zyada Makkhan lagany ki Zarurat Nahi hay, wahan ja kay Betho... Samjhy' (DAYA makes a sad face and sat on single Sofa)(ABHIJEET added again) agar Main Us Bridge kay ooper say gir jata tou'?

DAYA: Neechy Poora Jaal (net) bicha hua tha, yahan tak kay tumhara Cell, Gun aur Valet bhi Gadi mein Surakshit para hay aur wo JOKER bhi'

ABHIJEET: aur agar doob jat tou.?

DAYA: wahan Divers thy aur hum sub bhi, agar Tum 30 second aur nahi bahar aatay tou hum ander aa jatay'

ABHIJEET: aur jo Lift kay bahar Mujhy Goliyaan lug jaati tou.?

DAYA: sub naqli (fake) Goliyaan theen'

ABHIJEET: aur agar Main Bhook Pyaass say mar jata tou..?

DAYA: jub Tum Us Lift waly room mein Behosh ho gayey thy tou Tum ko Drip carhwa dii gayii thi'

ABHIJEET did not Understand what to say or ask as DAYA made the Safety Values before making the Plan so asked some Rough Queries'

ABHIJEET: Bureau parking ki Footage ka kya.? Aur ye Building kahan say mili.? Aur wo Sehra aur haan itna Daraona makeup karwany ki kya zarurat thi' haan'

DAYA: ta kay Tum Dar jao' hahahah (ABHIJEET Glared so He changes and Replied Quickly as) Footage mein Jub Tumhari Jeep pr wo JOKER rakhna tha aur Tire kay Nut Lose kiyey thy tou Recording Pause kr di thi VIVEK nay' Ye Building nahi hay Rest House hay wo bhi Incomplete' Sehra nahi hay ye, MUMBAI ka kafi Sona Ilaqa hay, koi Abaadi Nahi hay Yahan (little rash) aur bhi kuch poochna hay tou pooch lo'

ABHIJEET (naughty): Shahab ko Is New Head style ka mashwara kis nay diya tha'?

DAYA Glared Him as before 24 hours, ABHIJEET saw DAYA in Hairs and right Now He shaved his Head' Here ABHIJEET started as'

ABHIJEET: Dimgah Kharab kr diya Mera, itni tension tou shayed Zindagi mein Mujhy nahi mili' aik Pangy say abhi Niklo Nahi, Dusra tayyar, Ghan Chakker bana diya'

DAYA (naughty towards FREDDIE): FREDDIE, Achi Movie hay na GHUN CHAKKER, pr Mujhy Us ka End pasand nahi aaya'

ABHIJEET (rash): Chup bay Gunjay'

ACP Sir who was taking Cold Drink really with Difficulty Gallup the sip either its coming out with a Big laugh as in Scolding, ABHIJEET totally Involve and forgets Other presence'

DAYA Embarrass so move to Quiet mood while now Other Beading Good bye to DUO, Juniors setting the Gifts at DAYA Quillas already there, while the Catering Staff Clean the Mess and Decorators wrapping up their Arrangements now'


11:25 PM

ABHIJEET coming back after Leaving all found DAYA Quiet so ask to Him'

ABHIJEET: kya hua Shahab ko.?

DAYA: Main Tum say baat nahi kr raha, Tum nay Mujhy Sub kay saamny Gunja bola na'

ABHIJEET (sparkling eyes): awww' Ghalt bola na' (DAYA nodded) (ABHIJEET adds) chal aainda Takla bolun ga.. bus Khush' (move with tease) wesay Shahab ka Sar tou bara Acha nikla hay Shave kay baad'.

DAYA hides His Smile with Force, ABHIJEET went to Window pan, still raining but with Low Amount' DAYA slowly move and stand behind Him with'

DAYA: Boss'!

ABHIJEET turn and DAYA wraps Him around His Arms, he was asking Forgiveness, telling so many Sorry with salty water as'

DAYA (with tears): ABHI, Mujhy pata nahi tha, Tum itnay pareshan ho jao gay, sach, main nay bus, pata nahi Dimagh mein kya tha aur yaar' Tum nay bola tha na kay koi aisa Gift dena jo Yaadgar ho' bus pata nahi.. main nay aur jub sub say Discuss kiya na tou sub nay bola, haan Theek hay, main bilkul Bhool gaya kay tum ko kitni takleef hogi, kitna Dukh ho' Kitna dard hoga' main nay jaan kr Tumhein itna Dard'

ABHIJEET (leave him and say): DAYA sach kahun tou Jub main nay Tumhein maara, Mujhy tum pr Buht gussa tha, itna kay main bata nahi sakta.. pr ab Main tumhara Shukriya karna chahta hun (grabs His palms with) haan Sach' Zindagyun mein yehi lamhy Jeeny ka Hosla barhatay hain, aagy ki ore mein apni manzil paany ki himmat detay hain, ye 24 Ghantay mano Meri zindagi ka sarmaya (assets) hain jo Mujhy aany wali Muskilun kay liyey itna Energize kr gayey hain na kay kum az kum 20 saal tak tou main aaram say hr Mushkil ka Muqabla kr sakta hun'

Ye Junoon, Tujhy dhoodny ki Koshish, paany ki tamanna, hr pal ye Ihsaas kay koi Mujhy Pukar raha hay, Mery aany ki ass lagayey betha hay' wo Justugu manzil tak pohanchnay ki' wo pagalpan, Thrill, Excitement'

Tu nay Sub kay Chehray dekhy thy, Kitni Khushi thi Un kay chehrun pr kay un ka Plan Kaamyaab ho gaya, Un ki Mehnat zaaya nahi gayii, Mujhy Bewakoof bana kr nahi balkay is wishwas kay sath kay ABHIJEET zarur is Mystery ko solve kr lay ga' wo Trust, Muhabbat, care aur sub say Ihem Tu DAYA' haan Tu' Teri aankhein Heerun ki tarah Jagmaga rahi theen' Tera Chehra Khushi say Roshan aur Khila hua tha kay ABHI nay sar kr liya, pass kr liya' kya ye Khushi Kum hay'.

Tu ye mut Soch balkay Tery is Plan say main kitna Mentally Strong hua hun' Meri Sharpness kutni barhi hy aur barhy gi, main ab zindagi kay Kuch aisay Pehlu pr bhi nazar rakkhun ga jo pehlay shayed Chook jatay thay'

Tu meray liyey LORD ka sub say Best aur Precious Gift hay, aik aisa wardan jis ka badal Kuch nahi'

A Double Grin completely reddish the face of DAYA who was listening all with Opened Mouth and wide eyes' ABHIJEET enjoyed His Grin so tease'

ABHIJEET: wesay DAYA, Mujhy malum nahi tha Tum SHERYA kay Do Mukkun ka saara Gussa apnay Baalun pr Utaro gay' (DAYA Embarrass) (ABHIJEET again) ufff, kya Bhayanak Inteqaam liya hay kay Sahab nay MUNDAN hee kara liya'

DAYA who was taking water, can't handle the Sip which spills out from His Mouth and He was Laughing Madly and Loudly' ABHIJEET Look at His Hopping With laugh so a Big Smiles comes on his Lips too'


11: 45 PM

Both Locked the Building after looking the Complete Work' Quillas moved like a Bullet, ABHIJEET on way...

ABHIJEET: BTW, wo SURAJ tou Nikl hee gaya na...?

DAYA (laughing with): wo Fake case tha Boss... (ABHIJEET shocked) (DAYA added with wink) isi liyey Tum ko Body dekhaii nahi thi, kyunkay thii hee nahi...

ABHIJEET trying to grab His hairs but Failed so asked in Anger..

ABHIJEET: Kyun.?

DAYA: arry Boss, Reality bhi koi Cheez hoti hay...

ABHIJEET (hit light slap on His Head with): in Maalun mein Ye Khali Dabba Khoob chalta hay...

DAYA started laughing while ABHIJEET Slept on way so after Reaching at residence, in Sleeping Mode so call Out Him who wakes up and Order DAYA after Stepping inside'

ABHIJEET: DAYA, Main Help karwata pr Sach buht Neend aa rahi hay' tum kr lo gay na'

DAYA: jao Boss, tum So jao' main kr Lunga'

ABHIJEET: Theek hay' Good Night'

ABHIJEET entered in His Room, take a Quick shower, Changing his Cloths and fell on Bed' but before that peep up and asked...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, koi Help..?

DAYA (taking stuff inside lounge after locking door): arry Tum soyey nahi..?

ABHIJEET: Naha raha tha, bus ab ja raha hun...

DAYA: aik Minute...

DAYA took all inside and placed them at ABHIJEET Room Corner as all are his Birthday gifts giving by His Teammates while ABHIJEET was lay down over His bed and Closed His eyes with...

ABHIJEET: Light Band kr dena DAYA...

DAYA Puts off Light and went Outside after Closing the Door...

00:00 AM

Again enter in His Room, DAYA after placing a Mobile Set and TITEN Watch beside ABHIJEET Bedside with a Fresh Flower from Fridge and a Wishing card after seeing His Bhai in Deep Sleep with a Lovely Smile just tilt Hiis Head towards Him and whisper in Weird voice...

DAYA: Bosss...

ABHIJEET trying to Slap Him but He left the Room in Rush with Big Laugh whereas ABHIJEET went to take a Sound Sleep...!'

Source:

the Whole Plot/Scenes and sequence was taken from a hollywood Movie named GAME starring Micheal Douglous and Shaun penn...

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