Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 40

ufff... read it in one go... superb... Just superb...

Just tell me when are you going to update the next part..
It's really good. Liked seeing Daya like this.
Aur ye ACP sahab ko kya ho gaya..😆
Dcp me badal gaye kya..
Badey Bhai ka bachpan wala coat.. hahaha.. loved that.
The ending seems quite shocking.. i mean Daya with wine and that devilish smile... 😈
upload soon.. soon.. sachhiii jaldi se post kariye..
thanks to you Neeme di as well...😊

Believe it or not..last night before visiting IF I was thinking about your combined production😛..and after opening forum I saw the thread title 😛.. Once again the Devils' minds work on same plane 😉 😉.. Once again a tremendous plot by Neeme di ⭐️⭐️ and fantastic presentation by you ⭐️ ⭐️.. Mention of TRUTH BEHIND THE SCENE again..hmm.. Time will tell if it really has connection with recent case..isn't 😉? The reader catching title itself makes the story interesting 😉 ⭐️... Loved ACP sir's reaction to the million dollar question..each bit of it was appropriate👍🏼👍🏼.. His attempt to confront Abhijeet..anger..tension about his sons' career...when needed scold to them..all were shown perfectly ⭐️ ⭐️ .. Both DIG BALDEV and DCP CHITROLE is back😲.. I'm feeling this time DCP will surely give CID a massive strike 😈 .. I am really very angry on him..uttered nonsense about Duo 😡.. Poor Abhijeet sir..had to take off his favourite brown coat 😛 😆. And ofcourse, the way you have shown Daya sir..simply awesome..I love it to the core😳 😳.. Sharp, dangerous, daredevil super cop 😳 ☺️ .. Finally get rid of Daya sir's CID BAHU behaviour 😉 😆. Really liked the secret investigation part.. Daya sir's plan..disguise..alertness..giving instructions to the subordinates..connection with informer..plan to escape Jagya from jail..using liquid fluoride..everything was just brilliant ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. Liked the fact that this time he didn't give any hint to Abhijeet about his work 😎 😎.. And he didn't break down infront of Abhijeet's query and hide seniors' convo ⭐️ ⭐️.. And the last Devilish touch 😈 😈..its the cherry on the cake❤️❤️..loved it the most 😈 😈 😈. Even the begining of the darkest hours are enough to increase pulse and BP due to excitement and thrill 👏 👏 👏. A big round of applause to Ravi bhaiya for such a nice, appropriate siggie 👏 👏.. And for fulfilling my wish so quickly, to both of you a big . @Snehal di : If Dada and Neeme di push you from Waterfall how will you read the story 😉 😉 ? Will you be contented leaving it half-read 😉 ?
@Jerry di : Have patience😉 .. After all sabar ka phal meetha hota hai na 😉 😈 .

Just read 17520 hours...

Completed this too..

@Angel "IF" they really push me then i know they will catch me too and if not then bhoot banke piche pad jaungi to complete this story 😉

very nice and interesting plot
Neeme and Dada
very well written
waiting 4 next