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pinky118

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

ohh...what to say i really dont know...

ur stories r amazing as always...⭐️

awesome Neeme and Dada and Ravi also 4 the gr8 siggie..👏

the story was full of suspense...also include sme nice emotions..

i really like GHABROJAWAN😆..and at end Daya sir with devil smile😈

superb work👍🏼

waiting for the next Blast...

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: duoa
eager to know Raaz behind the sweet smile😆
really superb dada as always hats off to u for such nice ideas and execution 😊
waiting for next dhamaka😛

I think after the Next part...😉

U still eager to kknow this...😆

Hope that Dhamaka Does Not Hurt U...😈

Thank You DUOA...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: snehal.
Hey bhagwaan GD n neeme!! ye kya kar diya?? Isse acha toh muze waterfall se dhakka de dete 😆
Kya likha hai boss!! No words to express.. This suspense and this planning is too much.. Iss baar toh Abhijeet ko bhi bahar rakh diya Daya ne.. Aisa nahi hona chahiye tha.. Dono saath hote hai toh kuch bhi kar le hume pata hota hai thik hi hoga iss sab ka end.. But now..
And i am chilled to core with smile but the devilish sentence..

Superb work.. Bus story khatam karte karte muze heart attack mat dilwa dena 😈

I think We Lost that Chance...😆

Yup, Tried to taken out that CID BAHU Label from DAYA Sir...😃

its Really Nice to Feel Ur Chilling to Core...😉

Nahi ab Is ka Chance Nahi hay...😊

Thank You so much SNEHAL...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya
Arre GD aur Neeme tum dono toh hungama kar dete ho. 😆

Maza aa gaya, lekin please story ko jaldi khatam karna.

Like that kind of Hangama FB ppl now doing with FW...😉😆😆

ohhh Sure, Next part kay baad Story Khatam...😈

Thank You so much SHERYA...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Forfriend
ufff... read it in one go... superb... Just superb...
Showing Your Bhai is dare devil... wow ekdum mast... I wanted to see Daya like this since long... bohot jada roh liya an thoda Tashan Dikhane ka time aa gaya hai...

hehehe... very nice and interesting plot Neeme and very well written BH 🤗

But wine can in the end ufff... beyond expectation... but ya would love to read more...😉

and About that Bachapan wala cout 😆

yaar just super want to mention each and every part but fir aap ki story puri wapas paste karni padegi...👏

Yes, TASHAN BAY... TASHAN BAY...

Khair NEEME also have a Long Wish to Portray BHAI in that Attire...😳👏

WE Always Comes with BEYOND EXPECTATIONS Stories na...😈

I wanted to Pinch FW about My Anger to Some Extent especially regarding DUO OUTFITS...😡

arry... tou kr detay...😉😆

Thank You so much BH...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: DUOlover123
Just tell me when are you going to update the next part..
It's really good. Liked seeing Daya like this.
Aur ye ACP sahab ko kya ho gaya..😆
Dcp me badal gaye kya..
Badey Bhai ka bachpan wala coat.. hahaha.. loved that.
The ending seems quite shocking.. i mean Daya with wine and that devilish smile... 😈
upload soon.. soon.. sachhiii jaldi se post kariye..
thanks to you Neeme di as well...😊

Good Question...👍🏼

plz Ask the Next One...🤣

No, He was Correct at His path because really there was One Element which was Completelly Missing in CID called DICIPLINE and really it Pinch alot...😡

WOW, Bachpan Coat, Wine can and Devlish Smile...😃

Thank You so much BHALOO...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Believe it or not..last night before visiting IF I was thinking about your combined production😛..and after opening forum I saw the thread title 😛.. Once again the Devils' minds work on same plane 😉 😉.. Once again a tremendous plot by Neeme di ⭐️⭐️ and fantastic presentation by you ⭐️ ⭐️.. Mention of TRUTH BEHIND THE SCENE again..hmm.. Time will tell if it really has connection with recent case..isn't 😉? The reader catching title itself makes the story interesting 😉 ⭐️... Loved ACP sir's reaction to the million dollar question..each bit of it was appropriate👍🏼👍🏼.. His attempt to confront Abhijeet..anger..tension about his sons' career...when needed scold to them..all were shown perfectly ⭐️ ⭐️ .. Both DIG BALDEV and DCP CHITROLE is back😲.. I'm feeling this time DCP will surely give CID a massive strike 😈 .. I am really very angry on him..uttered nonsense about Duo 😡.. Poor Abhijeet sir..had to take off his favourite brown coat 😛 😆. And ofcourse, the way you have shown Daya sir..simply awesome..I love it to the core😳 😳.. Sharp, dangerous, daredevil super cop 😳 ☺️ .. Finally get rid of Daya sir's CID BAHU behaviour 😉 😆. Really liked the secret investigation part.. Daya sir's plan..disguise..alertness..giving instructions to the subordinates..connection with informer..plan to escape Jagya from jail..using liquid fluoride..everything was just brilliant ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. Liked the fact that this time he didn't give any hint to Abhijeet about his work 😎 😎.. And he didn't break down infront of Abhijeet's query and hide seniors' convo ⭐️ ⭐️.. And the last Devilish touch 😈 😈..its the cherry on the cake❤️❤️..loved it the most 😈 😈 😈. Even the begining of the darkest hours are enough to increase pulse and BP due to excitement and thrill 👏 👏 👏. A big round of applause to Ravi bhaiya for such a nice, appropriate siggie 👏 👏.. And for fulfilling my wish so quickly, to both of you a big . @Snehal di : If Dada and Neeme di push you from Waterfall how will you read the story 😉 😉 ? Will you be contented leaving it half-read 😉 ?
@Jerry di : Have patience😉 .. After all sabar ka phal meetha hota hai na 😉 😈 .

ANGEL EYES, Its Lovely to have a Detailed FeedBack...😳👏

Yes when I started to Work on this Awesome Plot⭐️, Me and NEEME had Decided that We tried Not to Feel A TEAR from BHAI eyes this Time😉... so BAHU Image was totally Twisted into KHAROS SAAS one...🤣😈

Yes, ACP Sir really Tension about His Both Sons Career and Its True coz Somehow the DECENT and DECIPLINE Aspects are Lower Down in CID which Pinches...😵

BROWN Coat, ufff How Much I irritated to see that Bown Coat with that Green Shirt and Blue Jeans... Utter Nonsence Combination of Colors...😡😡

NEEME PLOT and GOOGLE really Helped Me for that Brilliance...😳😃

Hope the Begining Thrill and Excitment graded till the END...👍🏼

Thank you so very much ANGEL EYES...😳😳😳