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Originally posted by: duoa

eager to know Raaz behind the sweet smile😆

really superb dada as always hats off to u for such nice ideas and execution 😊

waiting for next dhamaka😛

Originally posted by: snehal.

Hey bhagwaan GD n neeme!! ye kya kar diya?? Isse acha toh muze waterfall se dhakka de dete 😆

Kya likha hai boss!! No words to express.. This suspense and this planning is too much.. Iss baar toh Abhijeet ko bhi bahar rakh diya Daya ne.. Aisa nahi hona chahiye tha.. Dono saath hote hai toh kuch bhi kar le hume pata hota hai thik hi hoga iss sab ka end.. But now..

And i am chilled to core with smile but the devilish sentence..

Superb work.. Bus story khatam karte karte muze heart attack mat dilwa dena 😈

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Arre GD aur Neeme tum dono toh hungama kar dete ho. 😆

Maza aa gaya, lekin please story ko jaldi khatam karna.

Originally posted by: Forfriend

ufff... read it in one go... superb... Just superb...

Showing Your Bhai is dare devil... wow ekdum mast... I wanted to see Daya like this since long... bohot jada roh liya an thoda Tashan Dikhane ka time aa gaya hai...

hehehe... very nice and interesting plot Neeme and very well written BH 🤗

But wine can in the end ufff... beyond expectation... but ya would love to read more...😉

and About that Bachapan wala cout 😆

yaar just super want to mention each and every part but fir aap ki story puri wapas paste karni padegi...👏

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Just tell me when are you going to update the next part..
It's really good. Liked seeing Daya like this.
Aur ye ACP sahab ko kya ho gaya..😆
Dcp me badal gaye kya..
Badey Bhai ka bachpan wala coat.. hahaha.. loved that.
The ending seems quite shocking.. i mean Daya with wine and that devilish smile... 😈
upload soon.. soon.. sachhiii jaldi se post kariye..
thanks to you Neeme di as well...😊

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Believe it or not..last night before visiting IF I was thinking about your combined production😛..and after opening forum I saw the thread title 😛.. Once again the Devils' minds work on same plane 😉 😉.. Once again a tremendous plot by Neeme di ⭐️⭐️ and fantastic presentation by you ⭐️ ⭐️.. Mention of TRUTH BEHIND THE SCENE again..hmm.. Time will tell if it really has connection with recent case..isn't 😉? The reader catching title itself makes the story interesting 😉 ⭐️... Loved ACP sir's reaction to the million dollar question..each bit of it was appropriate👍🏼👍🏼.. His attempt to confront Abhijeet..anger..tension about his sons' career...when needed scold to them..all were shown perfectly ⭐️ ⭐️ .. Both DIG BALDEV and DCP CHITROLE is back😲.. I'm feeling this time DCP will surely give CID a massive strike 😈 .. I am really very angry on him..uttered nonsense about Duo 😡.. Poor Abhijeet sir..had to take off his favourite brown coat 😛 😆. And ofcourse, the way you have shown Daya sir..simply awesome..I love it to the core😳 😳.. Sharp, dangerous, daredevil super cop 😳 ☺️ .. Finally get rid of Daya sir's CID BAHU behaviour 😉 😆. Really liked the secret investigation part.. Daya sir's plan..disguise..alertness..giving instructions to the subordinates..connection with informer..plan to escape Jagya from jail..using liquid fluoride..everything was just brilliant ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. Liked the fact that this time he didn't give any hint to Abhijeet about his work 😎 😎.. And he didn't break down infront of Abhijeet's query and hide seniors' convo ⭐️ ⭐️.. And the last Devilish touch 😈 😈..its the cherry on the cake❤️❤️..loved it the most 😈 😈 😈. Even the begining of the darkest hours are enough to increase pulse and BP due to excitement and thrill 👏 👏 👏. A big round of applause to Ravi bhaiya for such a nice, appropriate siggie 👏 👏.. And for fulfilling my wish so quickly, to both of you a big . @Snehal di : If Dada and Neeme di push you from Waterfall how will you read the story 😉 😉 ? Will you be contented leaving it half-read 😉 ?
@Jerry di : Have patience😉 .. After all sabar ka phal meetha hota hai na 😉 😈 .

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet

Just read 17520 hours...

Really too good..!! 👏 Loved it GD.👏

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet

Completed this too..

Suspense well maintained... Great job GD and neeme..😊

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

very nice and interesting plot
Neeme and Dada
very well written
waiting 4 next