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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi..Appu di..
The third part of the story was nice.😈👏
And the poem😃 and song very nice..
good job👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
P.S This is only for the character not for Adi sir😛

An Ode to trust.

Once loved, glanced forlorn
And now all of a sudden, where have you gone?
Oh trust, you that maketh us all, our love
Where have I erred? And to her you gave a chance now
And yet again , I am lonely
And one had to be an angel , the other a villian

Did all our journey start nowhere?
How could you sing for another when I was there?
My heart flaming as bright as the roses you held
And my fate as twisted as that lady's hair
You sung with a smile as I droned in hope
And a jig you did, for one who did smile?
And what about me...who knew for a while?

Somehow the smile that came when I saw you
dimmed,But when I saw that scene my heart brimmed
Rivers of tears I had to endure,
Believing this is an illusion to this there is more
Hope I lost within minutes, and the calm quivered
Years of trust shattered violently, And yet a sliver of hope
I hope you realise, come back to what you were

And yes you were a puppet for someones gain
And he played the tunes, not so pleasant
Somewhere the night passed in torture
The past wont hurt you, Im worried for your future
And it wasnt just me oh Charmer who holds a complaint
Many did suffer, many did faint

But where could I go when all I knew was you
Were you wiped clean from memories like a
Engraving on sand, Engulfed by violent waves?
I say no, for the heart yearns for you in depth,
For the love and respect is like an ocean
Immeasurable, deep and turbulent
I still do have to in anger vent
And ode to trust I sing for you
And the wound in its core, a storm did brew
But I hope you will come back , I am waiting
Soon you shall realise , that they are baiting
Then my lip quivers, and a tear rolls by
I say " And yet Again, I am Lonely"
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Edited by nsapo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Apo Thanks for this poem.. Totally spoke my heart out...
Somehow the smile that came when I saw you
dimmed,But when I saw that scene my heart brimmed
Rivers of tears I had to endure,
Believing this is an illusion to this there is more

Then my lip quivers, and a tear rolls by
I say " And yet Again, I am Lonely"

These lines made me cry 😭

Very true poem da 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotions poured right from the heart..wow!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely siggy & lovely poem ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reshma.

Apo Thanks for this poem.. Totally spoke my heart out...

Somehow the smile that came when I saw you
dimmed,But when I saw that scene my heart brimmed
Rivers of tears I had to endure,
Believing this is an illusion to this there is more

Then my lip quivers, and a tear rolls by
I say " And yet Again, I am Lonely"

These lines made me cry 😭

Very true poem da 😊


Thanks Reshma..
I felt all this re...all of us did
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shruti

Emotions poured right from the heart..wow!


Thanks Shruti...😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: debasree04

Lovely siggy & lovely poem ⭐️


Thanks Deba di😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nsapo


Thanks Reshma..
I felt all this re...all of us did


Very true..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely siggy appu with awesome poem...😊

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