Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Hmmm.. Difficult to understand the relations you have shown in 2nd part. As friends and families.. yes very well done. but as cid officers.. I doubt..

Anyways by taking away sr. insp. abhijeet and insp. daya from abhijeet and daya, the story is going on awesome!!! Got to know many things about drugs, drug addicts and rehabilitation center!!

Wel done neeme n GD!

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Neeme and GD - I am speechless. I will just give one word for this story which is 'WOW' i cannot think of a better word then this as this was one of the best stories ever that you two have written. It made me really emotional. I know Neeme you said a story is a story so we should not cry about it but you two have written it so wonderfully what shall i do. It was very painful for me to imagine Daya like this and go into the rehabilitation center and the point where Abhijeet slapped him was totally unexpected and but you made me create that scene in my mind which no other writer can do. I am not complaining that u made me emotional, because I was also emotional after reading your last story, Truth Behind The Scene, but this time, I am touched by your story because you added the drug effect in it which can effect anyone even a CID officer. I really loved the last bit trio singing and during that bit i had a smile on my face because you two ended this chapter at the prefect point which no one else can do. GD and Neeme i totally respect you for this. Like Sachin Tendulkar is the god of cricket both of you are the God of stories.You two should go and join the FW team and make better stories for CID as the current team of writers in CID have no logic. Your friendship is great that's why you can make such wonderful stories that touch the readers heart. Neeme you said you wanted us to give you some critics but I cannot give you critics as there is nothing wrong in your stories and you don't have to make any improvements.

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Chintan

@ArRoGaNT-CHINTs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

@ NEEME...
Wonderful UPDATE...👍🏼
Cant' even tell your GRIP in STORY was 2 Good...
the SCENARIO of DRUG ADDICT'S after effect and TREATMENT PROCESS shown very Good.. each and every aspect of that ADDICTION...👏
waiting for NEXT part...

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

@dada n neeme di- read the 2nd part...it was too gud...full of emotions...u shown duo's relationship very beautifully👏...luvd it alot❤️...eagerly waiting for the next part 😃

FOR DADA-

FOR NEEME DI-

😳

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Sheen

@..Princess..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

DADA n Neeme Di well done guy's👏👏

second part is also very Good😊

waiting for the next part

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: ArRoGaNT-CHINTs
@ NEEME...
Wonderful UPDATE...👍🏼
Cant' even tell your GRIP in STORY was 2 Good...
the SCENARIO of DRUG ADDICT'S after effect and TREATMENT PROCESS shown very Good.. each and every aspect of that ADDICTION...👏
waiting for NEXT part...

😲😲😲

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: .YaJuShI.
FOR DADA-

Shuker FLASK nahi hay...😉😉

i m expecting now such Gifts...🤣

thank You😳

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Chintan

@ArRoGaNT-CHINTs

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: gadhadada

😲😲😲

Hehe...
itna SHOCK mat ho yaara...
yeh PART usne UPDATE kiya hai isiliye...😉😉😉
aur haa jaanta hu tumhara bhi kaafi acha SUPPORT hai..
so tumhare liye alag hoga...😉😉
thoda INTTEZAAR karna sikho...😆😆😆