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THRILL

DUO at RESIDANCE… DAYA laid at SOFA whereas ABHIJEET doing sum work in FILE and LAPTOP… his LAPTOP was on his LAP… DAYA saw him and said…

DAYA: ABHI…..

ABHIJEET: hmmm….

DAYA (again): ABHIII…

ABHIJEET: haan…

DAYA (replicate): ABHIII…

ABHIJEET (throw the cushion): abay aagay bhi tou bol… kub say ABHI ABHI karay ja raha hay….😡

DAYA (naughty tone😉): ABHIII… (ABHIJEET gives an anger look) arry yaar main bore ho raha hun.. kuch baat tou karo… ker kya rahay ho tum???

ABHIJEET: CASE 145 ki DETAIL REPORT bana raha hun… kal Sir ko dikhani hay…

DAYA: kya life hay boss humari bhi… koi ENTERTAINMENT, koi EXCITEMENT, koi THRILL… kuch nahi…

ABHIJEET: kiya baat hay… subah bhi THRILL hee per baat ker rahay thay wahan Bearue mein… theek tou ho… (after a sec) khair phir kya karein… tumharay THRILL kay liyey!!!

DAYA: yaar tum na SHADI ker lo… jub TAREEKA tumhein daantein gi na tou mujhy buht MAZA aayey ga…😉

ABHIJEET: acha tou jub mujahy DAANT paray gi tou tum ko MAZA aayey ga….

DAYA: arry boss!!😉

Suddenly both heard a CAR SCRATCH sound with TWO/THREE GUN SHOT voice… DUO rushed outside with their GUNS… saw a CAR which threw a PERSON and rushed away… ABHIJEET said…

ABHIJEET: DAYA gadi nikaal….

DAYA took out the JEEP… both grabbed the GIRL… placed her in JEEP… moved in rush… ABHIJEET asked…

ABHIJEET: pata nahi kaun hay??? tu nay gadi dekhi thi???

DAYA: ESTEEM thi shayed… per boss NUMBER PLATE nahi thi….

DUO reached at HOSPITAL… ABHIJEET called to ACP Sir.. DR treated her and after half an hour called them inside the ROOM… GIRL came on CONCIOUS…

DR: kuch nahi… bus STRESS ki wajah say BEHOSH thi…

GIRL: chalo DAYA… mujahy GHAR lay chalo…😉

DAYA totally SHOCKED😲… ABHIJEET looked him in CONFUSION….😕

ABHIJEET: kya aap DAYA ko jaanti hain???

GIRL: kya ho gaya hay ABHIJEET… kesi baatein ker rahay ho???😆

ABHIJEET also SHOCKED😲…. nobody knew wat was going on… DUO really on TROUBLE😕… ACP Sir entered… DAYA instantly said…

DAYA: Sir ye…

ACP (to GIRL): haan KIRAN… kya hua???

DUO: Sir aap in ko jaantay hain???

ACP (confuse look😕): tum dono ka DIMAGH tou theek hay na… (to DAYA) hain DAYA!!! kya tum apni BIWI ko nahi pehchan pa rahay… aur (to ABHIJEET) tum bhi… haan!!

DUO (scream): BIWI!!!😲😲

ACP: chalo khair… GHAR chalo ab…😊

DUO with ACP and KIRAN moved to DUO RESIDANCE… DUO really CONFUSED… both QUIET… KIRAN initiated…

KIRAN: DAYA tumhari QUILLAS kahan hay???

DAYA (in low voice): GHAR per….

All reached at home… all entered… KIREN moved to DAYA room… DUO completely STUNNED… DAYA told in LOW voice to ABHIJEET….

DAYA: boss… isay tou ROOM ka bhi pata hay…

ACP: acha chalo tum log so jao… aur (to DAYA) DAYA ab koi JHAGRA nahi ok… main DO din kay liyey PUNE ja raha hun… mujhy koi wahan DISTRUB na karay… understand… (DUO moved head in YES in confusion) (ACP again) chalo GOOD NITE…

ACP moved out completely whereas DUO completely stand still… DAYA moved outside… after a while ABHIJEET also moved outside… saw him sat at chair… he also sat beside him… both looked at each other and QUIET… they spent the whole NIGHT there… at MORNING both awakened with DAYA WIFE voice… bit shocked but instantly get up… DAYA did not moved to his room… he jus sprinkled sum water splash from ABHIJEET room and both moved out without any word and also did not give a look on BREAKFAST… on Quillas….

ABHIJEET: DAYA!!!

DAYA: boss… mujh say kuch mut kaho🤢… DIMAGH hee band ho gaya hay.. (himself) pata nahi kahan say… kaun aa gayii hay😡… (to ABHIJEET) yaar usay tou sub pata hay… kay meray pass Quillas hay??? even mera ROOM kaun sa hay???😕

ABHIJEET: aur usay ACP Sir bhi jaantay hain!!!😕

DAYA: mujhy tou lug raha hay main PAGAL ho gaya hun… kaun sii shadi… kahan ki biwi… boss!!! (after few sec) VALET hay tumharay pass???

ABHIJEET: haan kyun???

DAYA: BREAKFAST nahi karna… itni BHOOk lagi hay… 😛

He stopped Quillas at DHABA… moved behind in JEEP BACK SEAT… pulled BOTH DISGUISE BAG… grabbed a BRUSH n PASTE and stepped down while moving…

DAYA: tum ORDER karo main aata hun…

ABHIJEET gave ORDERS… DAYA came back… both started EATING and DISCUSSING as well…

ABHIJEET: yaar mujahy ACP Sir ki samjh nahi aa rahi… wo kesay us ko jaantay hain??? aur yahein say meray dimagh mein GHANTI bajj rahi hay…😉

DAYA: chalo kuch tou bajj raha hay… apna dimagh tou boss KHALI ho gaya hay…

He takes a SIP of TEA and suddenly his CELL ringing… he saw the NUMBER was NEW… he picked it up…

DAYA: DAYA here….

KIRAN: DAYA BREAKFAST kiyey bina kyun chalay gayey???

DAYA's face expression told ABHIJEET abt the IRRITATIVE caller from the other side… he takes it… DAYA took his VALET and moved to COUNTER for payment while he engaged the CALL…

ABHIJEET: main ABHIJEET bol raha hun… wo darasal ek SITE per jaldi pohanchana tha… is liyey… bye…

Both moved to Bearue totally QUIET… here RAHUL moved to DAYA house… he knew that yesterday night DAYA told him that he will move to Bearue late… so… he rang the BELL… a GIRL came out… initially RAHUL thought she was BAI cz DUO told him that they were searching a BAI few days back… he asked…

RAHUL: DAYA hay GHAR per???

GIRL: nahi DAYA tou nahi hay… aap ko koi kaam tha kiya???

RAHUL thought for a minute after looking the GIRL… she does not giving the look of BAI as also she did not say SAHAB aur DAYA SAHAB… only said DAYA very casually but he copes up with his CONFUSION in a minute… so added…

RAHUL: haan kaam tou tha… acha khair main khud baat ker lunga…

GIRL: nahi aap mujhay bata saktay hain… main un ki MRS hun…

RAHUL (scream😲): kiya… (after a sec) nahi mera matlab kiya kaha aap nay???

GIRL: main nay kaha main MRS DAYA hun…

RAHUL trying to check the house… he thought may be he was on WRONG ADDRESS…. GIRL in RASH…😡

GIRL: ye kiya aap TAANK JHAANK ker rahay hain???

RAHUL: nahi… theek hay… thanx….

He moved aside and dialed DAYA CELL number instantly…. Wen he picked up… he said…

RAHUL (in laugh😆): kya SERVICE hay DAYA tumhari… kal tak koi khaber nahi… aaj ghar kay bahar khara hun tou tumhari MRS bhi aa gayii…😉

DAYA (anger): chup ho ja RAHUL….😡

RAHUL: DAYA kiya sach mein SHADI ker li!!!

DAYA angerly dropped the call.. RAHUL in laugh dialed ABHIJEET number… ABHIJEET picked it…

RAHUL: yaar tumharay BHAI nay SHADI ker li… bataya bhi nahi…

ABHIJEET (smile😊): haan dekho… mujahy bhi nahi bataya… (DAYA gives an ANGER look) (ABHIJEET asked) kahan ho tum???

RAHUL: tumharay GHAR kay bahar….

ABHIJEET: SUN SHINE RESTURENT pohancho… hum aatay hain….

RAHUL: DAYA say kehna METHAI bhi leta hua aayey…

ABHIJEET dropped the call in smile… clutched DAYA's hand and both moved to SUN SHINE RESTURENT… reached there… met with RAHUL….

RAHUL (funny tone😉): arry DAYA raatun raat SHADI ker li… yaar PARTY na denay ka acha bahana hay….

DAYA (anger😡): RAHUL main MAAR dunga ab tumhein…

RAHUL: acha batao… hua kiya???

ABHIJEET told the whole… RAHUL was also in CONFUSE phase… he asked…

RAHUL: tum logun nay ACP Sir say nahi poocha???

ABHIJEET: strict orders hain kay koi un ko wahan DISTRUB na karay…

RAHUL (after few sec): khair kuch bhi ho… mujhay tou METHAI khila do…

DAYA really trying HARD not to PUNCH him… he moved towards JEEP…

ABHIJEET (saw DAYA and said in smile): RAHUL sach mein PIT jao gay tum ab… khair dekho kuch karaty hain….

RAHUL moved while DUO moved to Bearue again… here ABHIJEET dropped DAYA and moved with VIVEK and SACHIN to MURDER spot… after few time.. wen he get back and asked abt FREDDIE to DAYA… he said..

ABHIJEET: DAYA FREDDIE kahan hay… abhi kaha tha kay zara NET per search karay kay…

DAYA (interrupts): yaar main nay usay GHAR bheja hay… wo LAPTOP bhool aaya tha na… tou kaha hay kay GHAR…

ABHIJEET placed his hand on DAYA shoulder… DAYA stopped… look at him and SHOCKED…. he understand wat ABHIJEET wanted to say to him… ABHIJEET after seeing him jus picked out his CELL and dialing FREDDIE number but before connecting the call both heard FREDDIE EXCITED voice from corridor and took a DEEP breath… FREDDIE entered with total EXCITEMENT…

FREDDIE (to DAYA): DAYA Sir aap nay bataya nahi… kisi ko bhi…

VIVEK: kiya hua FREDDIE Sir???

FREDDIE (happy voice): tujhay malum hay VIVEK…. DAYA Sir nay SHADI ker li hay….

ALL (shock): kiya!!!

FREDDIE: aur kiya… main abhi DAYA Sir ki WIFE say mil ker aa raha hun… unhun nay mujahy NASHTA bhi karaya … (to DAYA) DAYA Sir aap nay humein bataya kyun nahi….

VIVEK: Sir PARTY tou deni thi na!!!

KAJAL (to ABHIJEET): Sir aap ko tou bulaya hoga???

SACHIN (interrupts): haan Sir aap hee humein bata detay…

DAYA (rash): FREDDIE chup ho jao…. her waqt BOLNA zaruri hay kiya….

Total SILENCE… ABHIJEET saw his IRRITATION… while FREDDIE felt complete INSULT.… and ALL really SHOCKED… FREDDIE left the place… VIVEK behind him and DAYA also behind them… but FREDDIE moved fast ahead… he placed his head on his palm and sat on Bearue stairs…. ABHIJEET did not back to him… he knew DAYA is so CLOSE to FREDDIE… DAYA waited there for almost TWO hours at the SAME position… ABHIJEET saw him from Window pan at regular intervals…. After TWO hours… FREDDIE n VIVEK come back… on vehicle…

FREDDIE (to VIVEK): VIVEK tu DAYA Sir ko ja kay bata day….

VIVEK saw him and moved towards DAYA side… whereas FREDDIE stepped out and stand there…. VIVEK came and before he said anything to DAYA… DAYA asked…

DAYA: VIVEK FREDDIE kahan hay???

VIVEK: Sir wahan GADI kay pass…

DAYA moved FAST… called FREDDIE … he moved but then again turned back his NECK… DAYA moved forward and jus HUGGED him and say…

DAYA (in hugging): so SORRY FREDDIE…. aainda aisa nahi hoga…😳

ABHIJEET moved there at mean time… FREDDIE really HAPPY😃 after that UNEXPECTED HUG from his SENIOR… he said in PROUD to VIVEK…

FREDDIE: dekha VIVEK… DAYA Sir kabhi bhi MUJHY, ABHIJEET Sir aur ACP Sir ko bina batayey koi kaam nahi ker saktay… (to DAYA) hain na Sir!!!👍🏼

DAYA: bilkul FREDDIE…. darasal wo LARKI… (ABHIJEET interrupts) ek CID OFFICER hay… UNDERCOVER MISSION per hay… aur dekho ye baat bahar na niklay… SACHIN aur KAJAL ko bhi bata dena…😊

FREDDIE n VIVEK moved their HEADS and moved for further purpose… whereas ABHIJEET clutched DAYA arm… take HIM towards Bearue… sat him at chair… DAYA said…

DAYA: tum nay ye kyun kaha kay wo ek CID OFFICER hay…😊

ABHIJEET (irritative tone): tou kiya kehta kay sahib ki BIWI hay😡… khair ye lo….

He gave him AIR PHONE and signaled to fix it on the specific space… after DAYA did… he PLAYED sumthin… DAYA's FACE really changes lots of XPRESSIONS and after completing the RECORDING… he said…

DAYA (shock tone): ye kiya tha boss???😲

ABHIJEET: yehi dhondna hay….

DAYA: matlab… GHANTI kaam ker gayii hay😃…. (after few sec) ab kahan chalna hay???

ABHIJEET: GHAR…

DAYA: magar yaar!!!😡

ABHIJEET: agar magar kuch nahi DAYA… is ko sunnay kay baad bhi tum ye keh rahay ho… aur tum meray ROOM mein SO gayey… phir kiya masla hay… chalo…

DAYA moved either he is NOT accepted but he did not ARGUE ABHIJEET mostly… at House… they saw KIRAN set the DINNING table after seeing them… both think for a while…

ABHIJEET (thinking): baad mein dekhein gay… kis ki BIWI aur kaun sii BIWI!!!😉

DAYA (think): boss BIWI asli hay ya naqli… pehlay KHANA kha letay hain…😉

Both minds CLICKED at same minute😈… smiled and sat at DINNING CHAIR and engaged in eating… after that DUO moved to ABHIJEET room… at Night DAYA told ABHIJEET that he will move LATE cz he will have sum work with RAHUL so ABHIJEET will take his JEEP… so at Morning ABHIJEET moved earlier while wen DAYA moved… due to ABHIJEET absence he did not take interest in BREAKFAST… the GIRL come across and said…

KIRAN: wo DAYA tum say ek baat karni thi… (DAYA in Question) (she forward sumthin) ye tumharay liyey!!!

DAYA (rash😡): main sirf ABHIJEET say hee GIFT leta hun aur usay hee deta hun… aaur aainda is tarah

He try really hard NOT to continue his sentence and moved RASHLY from house…. ABHIJEET saw the REACTION of DAYA…. he was there for sum work but after hearing all… hide himself… DAYA did not watch him… ACP sir backed to Bearue at Next Morning… he saw KIRAN also with him and now he opened the SECRET in presence of DAYA, KIRAN n ACP….

ABHIJEET: Sir hum log KIRAN ki asliyet jaan gayey hain….

ACP n KIRAN SHOCKED😲…. ACP surprisingly asked…

ACP: tum logun ko pata kesay chala…. haan???😕

DUO looked each other and smiled😃… while ABHIJEET initiated…

ABHIJEET: Sir hum logun nay aap kay PHONE TRACK karnay start ker diyey thay….

ACP: kiya???? kesay!!!😕

ABHIJEET: wo Sir …. bus aisay hee…😊

ACP: phir tum logun nay kaha kyun nahi???

ABHIJEET: Sir pehlay tou bari herut hui kay KIRAN sub kuch aap say kyun poch rahi hay??? DAYA ki AADATEIN… etc… phir kyunkay AAP thay tou hum samjh nahi payey…

DAYA: Sir humara khayal tha kay shayed KIRAN ki jaan khatray mein hay… ya ye koi PLAN hay… darasal samjh kuch nahi aa raha tha aur poori baat janay bina hum aap say poochna nahi chatay thay…

ACP: haan darasal KIRAN ek FOREIGN OFFICER ki BETI hay… kisii CASE mein wo EYE WITNESS bhi hay… FOREIGN OFFICE ko musalsal KIRAN kay liyey DHAMKIYAAN mil rahi theen… usay kisi SAFE jagah rakhnay ka masla tha… kyunkay CASE abhi ADAALAT mein hay tou wo bahar apnay DESH bhi nahi ja sakti thi… jub mujhay DCP sahib nay kaha tou mujahy TUM dono ka hee khayal aaya… mujahy malum tha koi bhi nahi soch payey ga kay tumharay GHAR per koi WITNESS hum nay chupa kay rakkha hay… wesay wahan SECURITY thi… (ACP smiled and continued) phir socha kay TUM DONO ko bina batayey isay kesay tum dono kay yahan rakkha jayey… kyunkay ye khabar kisi tarah bhi LEAK nahi honi thi…

ABHIJEET (interrupts): tou aap nay usay DAYA ki BIWI bana diya…

ACP (laugh😆): haan… us waqt koi aur IDEA mila bhi nahi…

KIRAN: wesay so SORRY Sir… mujhay aap logun say aisa nahi karna tha… magar bus… jo in logun nay kaha main nay wohi kiya…!!!

DAYA: aap yahan kub tak rahein gi ???

KIRAN: nahi main kal PUNE ja rahi hun aur wahein say meri ENGLAND ki FLIGHT hay……

DAYA (murmer): SHUKER hay…😳

His REALAXED BREATH really playing difficult for ABHIJEET to break his LAUGH rite now😆… KIRAN left while DAYA cell ringing… he moved out…

ACP (to ABHIJEET): bus tumhein kiya isi baat say SHAK hua tha???😕

ABHIJEET: nahi Sir… aik tou jub wo HOSPITAL mein thi… tou main nay aap ko FONE kiya tha… aap kehtay kay acha dekho… magar aap khud aa gayey… phir humaray sath GHAR bhi chaly gayey… aur shayed wahein aap nay us ko DAYA kay room ki taraf ishara bhi kiya tha… (ACP smiled😊) ( ABHIJEET continued) wesay Sir humein pata tou tha… magar shayed main thora aur rukta magar parsun jub us LARKI nay DAYA ko GIFT denay ki koshish ki aur DAYA nay buhat RASH REACTION diya tou mujhy laga kay ab wo sirf CONFUSE aur IRRITATED nahi ho raha… HURT bhi ho raha hay… is liyey!!!😊

ACP: haan wo us ka apna IDEA tha… shayed apni ACTING SKILLS dikhanay kay liyey… (after a sec) ya phir DAYA usay acha lagnay laga ho…😳

ABHIJEET trying hard to HIDE his BIG laugh😆…. ACP saw his HIDING LAUGH and asked…

ACP: kyun kiya aisa nahi ho sakta???😕

ABHIJEET: Sir KIRAN ki taraf say tou ho sakta hay magar DAYA ki taraf say main pakka hun kay aisa nahi hay….😊

ACP (in smile😊): wesay main usay tumhari BIWI hee banata.. (ABHIJEET shocked😲) magar DAYA kuch din pehlay keh raha tha na kay us ki life mein THRILL nahi hay… tou is liyey😉… (DAYA back) (ACP continued) khair mujahy KHUSHI hay kay meray dono CHIRANJEEVE nay is CASE ko bhi apni ZAHANUT say hal ker liya….👏

After that he moved to his cabin… DAYA sat on chair whereas ABHIJEET teased him with…

ABHIJEET: chalo DAYA tumahari LIFE mein THRILL ka shauq tou poora ho gaya… kya THRILL tha… (laugh a lot🤣) BIWI!!! wesay dekha… tujhay kuch KHARCHA bhi nahi karna para… na KAPRAY… na GEHNAY… yahan tak kay koi PARTY bhi na….😆

DAYA obviously SMILE in EMBARRASSING😳.. ABHIJEET included….

ABHIJEET: wesay teri FAKE BIWI ka ek faida tou hua… (DAYA look at him) (ABHIJEET in laugh😆) TEEN din ACHA KHANA khanay ko mil gaya… hain na!!

DAYA smiles😃… stand from his CHAIR… trying to clear his DESK with…😉

DAYA: kal meri TAREEKA say baat hui… main nay usay bataya kay ABHIJEET ki ek DOST NAUKRI kay silsilay mein aayii hui hay… (ABHIJEET standstill😲) ABHIJEET nay usay GHAR per rehnay ki ijazat dii hay… us kay liyey KHANAY bhi bana raha hay… usay SHOPPING per bhi lay jana chah raha hay… dono kuch hee dino mein buhat ACHY DOST ban gayey hain….😉

ABHIJEET (in anger): DAYA kay bacchay….😡

ABHIJEET jus trying to grab him but DAYA obviously RUSHED with LAUGH and its IMPOSSIBLE for ABHIJEET to grab him while he was running ahead…😃


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OMG!!!! I just finished Dada's funny story "MIS-UNDERSTANDING'!!!"...
Outstanding work Dada..👏👏👏👏
Girl called CID to find "DOG"..🤣🤣
and this line is hillarious "nahi tum usay CID ka number day dena' Number tum ko her gali, har bazar, shehr say mil jayey ga'😉😆"🤣🤣 and this one "Aap Sr Ins ABHIJEET hain na' dekhyey (signalled infront) wo ek BILLI ja rahi hay' foran usay Goli maar dein' OMG...I'm rofling...🤣🤣
Dada, you are brilliant...This is masterpiece work by you Dada...👏👏⭐️⭐️
Note: will read remaining stories once I get time and will comment.😛
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What a TRILLED Story DADA...
This on eis for ur Chashama...


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GD, OMG.

I can't stop laughing!!!!
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😆🤣 Really funny story dada Great Work 👏👏👏
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amaging THRILL dada
daya sir ki band bja di😈
🤣😆



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🤣 Day sir ki tho wah bhi wah. Unka top floor hi empty kardi. 😆 😉 🤣 .
He would have certainly got thrilled of life time...
I like this funny side of you too ...👏
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del😆
Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago
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😕😕😕
already READ it in PAST
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Originally posted by: aditya_crazy

OMG!!!! I just finished Dada's funny story "MIS-UNDERSTANDING'!!!"...

Outstanding work Dada..👏
Girl called CID to find "DOG"..🤣🤣
and this line is hillarious "nahi tum usay CID ka number day dena' Number tum ko her gali, har bazar, shehr say mil jayey ga'😉😆"🤣🤣 and this one "Aap Sr Ins ABHIJEET hain na' dekhyey (signalled infront) wo ek BILLI ja rahi hay' foran usay Goli maar dein' OMG...I'm rofling...🤣🤣
Dada, you are brilliant...This is masterpiece work by you Dada...⭐️
Note: will read remaining stories once I get time and will comment.😛


THANK U LUCKY... 😳😳
bus pata nahi raat kay 3 bajay Bheja Click hua kay I wrote that one...😆😆
wesay kabhi aisa EPI banay tou... 😉😉

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