Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 109

Another fantastic story. Wah Kya Baat Ha. Neeme and GD i am seriously addicted to your stories this one is the best so far really nice. What a lovely story. I am just totally in love with your stories the suspense and the investigation in the story is really good and dialogues that Daya said were so good. You portrayed Duo friendship in a really good way. I enjoyed the story very much and I really like the way you involved Rahul problem and they way Daya handled it was very good. Now challo enough of my bak bak jaldi update karo tum dona.

well this forum has got a charm when it comes to giving buddy writers and it has happened again . neeme , your plots are very catchy ...thats the skill to know what your readers want . hi-fi for u then coming to my kiddo GD, ...i always told you that you had everything it takes to be a good writer ...have a good imagination and thats all that matters . believe me when i say u r good 'cause i've seen ur entry into writing cid fiction here in IF and in fanfiction. u 've come a good long way .little sis

So sorry for laty comments!!!

First for VM-
A Very lovely but confusing VM..😕😆
Ab main SRK ki Awaaaz par concentrate kru❤️❤️..ya Daya sir par concentrate kru..☺️☺️...
Then finally i decided ki jiska bday hai uspar concentrate krna better rhega😉😆

Superb VM..sooo cutie...

Belated HBD Daya sir..🤗🤗

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

So sorry for laty comments!!!

First for VM-
A Very lovely but confusing VM..😕😆
Ab main SRK ki Awaaaz par concentrate kru❤️❤️..ya Daya sir par concentrate kru..☺️☺️...
Then finally i decided ki jiska bday hai uspar concentrate krna better rhega😉😆

Superb VM..sooo cutie...

Belated HBD Daya sir..🤗🤗

For story-

One more good shot😉

Lovved duo moments❤️❤️..n hated SAMI😡😡

I wish i too get a Hairy bear like that..😳😳

Superb story..keep going⭐️⭐️

LOVVVED ITTT🤗🤗

Originally posted by: awesum_life

I read the story
n waiting to know who screamed so louder ki awaaz yaha tak aa rahi h... 😆
NEEME DII n DADA
as always duo scenes r fab.. n daya sir's dialogue "Problem ne humari problem sun li hay.."
I m getting how he must have reacted if it happens.. chalo jaldi update karo.. 😊

Thanks sakshi..

Originally posted by: Forfriend

hmmm so here is my comment

WOW Great work GD & Neeme 🤣

not usual one right 😉

jokes apart

here I go...

Nice start... Daya Abhijeet bond... what to say you are my inspiration and there so many who says that I am best in DUO writing so you must be bestest or more that it...

and Daya lying with Abhijeet for promise... so bad... but its need to be same as Story best on it...

and the wasy you plot each and every thing...was just wow... its good that Team not directly concluded Daya as killer... very nice...

Abhijeet investigating alone is just wow... but in end... Oh god... Abhijeet must be safe...

Very nice plot Neeme... and Very nice witting Dada

waiting for next chapter

Thank you Thank you...😆 Arre iss promise ko hum na kasa kasa set kyea hai yah hum he janta han...🤣 but after reading ur comments... now its proved ka hum na promise set up kar he lyea hai... tell u one secret... we changed this promise scene in the last moment as well😉.. will update soon for sure...

Originally posted by: Soni.

Another fantastic story. Wah Kya Baat Ha. Neeme and GD i am seriously addicted to your stories this one is the best so far really nice. What a lovely story. I am just totally in love with your stories the suspense and the investigation in the story is really good and dialogues that Daya said were so good. You portrayed Duo friendship in a really good way. I enjoyed the story very much and I really like the way you involved Rahul problem and they way Daya handled it was very good. Now challo enough of my bak bak jaldi update karo tum dona.

Thank you so much dear for so much praise...😃 It was Just abt DUO... 😉 hope u will like further... But one thng its really difficult to convince GD to write somthng on DUO... she is showing too much nakaras😡😡 aik aik scene per arr he jati hai... tell her that still u guys like to read more n more emo stuff of DUO...😛 so that nxt time she will write without any nakaras...😆😆