Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

Love the VM truly wonderful

Wow what an awesome story GD. One of my favorite stories from you. It was a lovely one. You added a mixture of comedy, a bit romance and lots of friendship. The way you described each and every aspect of the story was fabulous. I enjoyed myself a lot while i was reading this one and smiling at every single sentence. Daya and Sami meeting & Abhijeet angry with Daya after meeting Mohit was a very filmy scene but I loved it.

Edited by Soni. - 12 years ago

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

lovely one GD!😃🤗 the duo moments are really cute.👏👏 just one thing, I guess the starting is same with ur another story. I read it somewhere before.

Edited by shreela - 12 years ago

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

Originally posted by: .-VeVaH-.
VM to mast hey Dada
Thankooo 😳 🤗
Story suba khaongi ...😛
i mean suba Readungi 😆

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

Originally posted by: Maxxx
Awesome VM DADA👍🏼
maza agaya😊
sorry DADA story to nahi pad paungi me 😔

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: awesum_life
Dada ur VM is just awesum... 🤗
pics choice bhi kaafi achi thi..
I didn't got daya sir's 'ZULFEIN' according to the song... 🤣
n STORY will read later
kya h na boss bohot badi h... 😉

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

Originally posted by: Forfriend
The story and VM both are awesome DADA

and wish your Beary Heart' BHAI

Happy Birthday

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1067

Originally posted by: neeme
Vm is not showing to me And Abt story... I want to comment again 😉 one of fav story of mine from ur stories..All the time u added duo emotional scenes...but this one really touches my heart in different way... Great work GD...a touchy story...

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1068

Originally posted by: mano86
@GD

ur VM is a

piece of work
⭐️

ll read the story afterwards !

Originally posted by: mano86
@GD

lovely story⭐️
the Prank turns into Trouble 😛
emotional content in the story is so sweet😊

👏

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1069

Originally posted by: Shreya_luvs
VM mast che!

Story kaal parongi after my exam. Exam main rone ke baad I need something to make me smile. 😆

Originally posted by: Shreya_luvs
Loved the story GD. I didn't cry in my exam so I didn't need anything to cheer me up, but your story did. The emotional scenes were so sweet, they just have a different feel to them.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1070

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24
@vm
awesomes vms wid excellent caps👏
sorry i cud nt listen the sound🤢
cz my speakers do not work
bt maust say excellent vm😃

@story
again awsome creation by u👏
bt yaar pta nhi kyun story ki starting se lga ye story pehle v pdhi hui hai😕
mujhe ab tak smjh nhi aa rha ye sb maine pehle kha pdha hai😕
pillow scene se pichls sb khi pdha hai...khi tumari purani story main to nhi hai ye sb😲😕
maine to ek vaar ye soch kr chor v dii bt last pdha to lga new hai😛
thn fir dubara pdhni shuru ki😉😆
excellent managed👏👏
commedy emotions everything perfectly maintained😳
sch khu sb pdh kr dil bagh bagh ho gya😃
simarn n samy ki confusion ne thora out of sence kr dia😆
bt end main sb smjh aa gya
again i dont like orphan part abt daya sir😭😭
ha me wid rahul😉
tum apne BHAIYON ke liye ek RROM hospital main book krva hi do😆🤣

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