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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Fir se suspense abb intzaar nahi hota by the way story is going to good and hope u are fine now
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
when will you back????
we are waiting yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please please complete this soon it is so good im very excited. btw i think ajay is abhi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wait a min didnt you post the next part somewhere else like where ajay gets gurt and he doesnt care about like abhijeet and then daya forcibily make ajay wear a bandaid???? or did i dream that i cant remember i was a long time ago :$
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can the owner of this thread edit the subject and make it easy to understand what this thread is all about?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 143CID-Abhi

wait a min didnt you post the next part somewhere else like where ajay gets gurt and he doesnt care about like abhijeet and then daya forcibily make ajay wear a bandaid???? or did i dream that i cant remember i was a long time ago :$



No , it wasn't posted by her.
It was another story posted by another member. But he left it incomplete.
It was a little similar to this one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: GIRL_SHERLOCK



No , it wasn't posted by her.
It was another story posted by another member. But he left it incomplete.
It was a little similar to this one.



oh ok thanks :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
It was story:BETWEEN THE LINES by max3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ufff please update kaaro cant wait any longer 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
srry again for late update.
continued...
IN BEUREU
everyone feel themselves near to tears including ACP sir...
AJAY again breaking the silence...
AJAY-sir ek baar ABHIJEET sir ke ghar jaa ker dekhlete hai ho sakta hai wahan se koi suraag mil jaye
ACP-thik hai,abhijeet ke ghar se hi suruwat karte hain,daya tum ajay,freddy aur sachin abhijeet ke ghar jaao.humlo ek bar phir wo areas check kar lete hain.
DAYA-yes sir.
(here daya with his team goes to abhijeet's house nd ACP nd his team leaves for their destination.)
ABHIJEET"S HOUSE-
daya nd others reach abhijeet's house.it was locked.daya takes out keys from his pocket while ajay too takes out keys nd opens the door daya sees him with questioning looks.
AJAY(seeing daya replies quickly)-sir mujhe abhijeet sir ne ye chabi di thi.
DAYA only nodes nd all of them moves inside.
every starts searching the house.DAYA moves inside abhijeet's room while ajay moves to his study room.
DAYA in abhijeet's room finds a photo of his nd abhijeet.
he looks at that photo nd some tears come in his eyes.
he spreads his hands on that photo nd feels something fishy.
he takes out the photo from inside the frame.he finds a paper in the frame nd calls every one.
everyone comes inside the room...
DAYA shows them the paper he found.
AT that time his phone rings.he picks up the call it was from ACP sir.
DAYA-yes sir
ACP-daya tum logo ko wahan kuch mila
DAYA-yes sir.sir hume ek kagaz mila hai sir shayad ispe kuch likha tha sir per ab saaf nahi hai.
ACP-thik hai daya.TUM log ek kaam karo forensic lab chale jaao.ho sakta salunkhe isme se kuch nikal le.
DAYA-sir aapko wahan se kuch mila.
ACP-nahi daya yahan to kuch bhi nahi hai...daya filhaal hum log uss hospital ke ass pass ka area check karne jaa rahe hain.
DAYA-thik hai sir.
(the call ends)
SACHIN-sir ACP sir ko kuch mila wahase.
DAYA-nahi.hume filhaal forensic lab jana chahiye dekh te hai salunkhe sir isme se kuch nikalde to.
(daya nd his team head towards the forensic lab.)
dAYA nd others reach forensic lab.
(in forensic lab salunkhe was trying to console tarika.she was still weaping.)
DAYA enters the forensic lab he sees tarika weeping nd feels bad but he controls himself.
he enters the lab nd calls dr.salunkhe...
DR.salunkhe-haan daya batao kuch pata chala...
daya-sir hum abhijeet ke ghar gaye the wahan se hume ye kgaz mila per kuch saaf nahi hai shayad kuch gir gaya hai ispe...
DR.-laao mujhe dikhao.
he takes the paper from daya's hand nd sees it.then he dips it into some chemicals then he keeps it on the table nd calls daya.
DAYA nd others surround the table...daya notices ajay looking tareeka in regular intervals.
DAYA-kya dekh rahe ho ajay.
AJAY(shivers for a moment nd then smiles)-SIR wo tareeka hai na..
DAYA-haan lekin kyun...
AJAY-sir wo abhijeet sir bahut bate karte the inke bare mein.
DAYA smiles nd now focuses everyone's attention again on that paper.
FREDDY-sir ye to kahi ka address lagta hai.
SACHIN-haan sir ye to kahi ka address hi hai par sir abhijeet sir ne ye address aise kyun rakha hoga
AJAY-sir ho sakta hai ki abhijeet sir ne us kidnapper ke bare mein kuch pata kia ho.
DAYA-haan ho sakta zaroor iss address ka ya yahan rehne wale ka iss kidnapping se koi connection ho.chalo chal ker hi dekhte hai.
(daya calls acp sir nd tells him about the adress he tells daya to go there nd tells him that they had found some blood in the nearby jungle.)
DAYA nd others leaves the fornsic lab,at that time ajay receives a mesage he reads it nd asks daya ...
AJAY-sir mujhe kahi jana hai main aap ko baadme join karta hoon.
DAYA-AJAY kahan jana hai tumhe..
AJAY-sir wo bus sir aise hi kahi jana hai...nd he leaves the beureu without answering further(daya eyes him suspeciuosly but doesn't say anything.nd leaves for their destination with others.
NEAR THE HOSPITAL-
ACP nd others where still searching the area.they had just found some blood traces nd nothing else.
VIVEK-sir yahan aur kuch bhi nahi hai...
KAJAL-yes sir.sir hum log pura area chaan chuke hai...
PURVI-sir ab hume yahan se chalna chahiya...
ACP-hmmm thik hai chalte haivivek wo khoon ka sample le liya
VIVEK-yes sir...
ACP-good chalo
just then they were leaving ACP receive a call...it was from one of it's informers...he picked up the call nd aftersometime he dropped the call nd said to others...ACP-mujhe mere informer ne bulaya hai mujhe jana hoga tum log beureu jao...
VIVEK-sir main chalu aap ke saath...
ACP-nahi vivek main akele chala jaunga tum gadi leke jao...
main cab se chala jaunga...
VIVEK-yes sir...
OTHERS leave for beureu...
here acp sir was waiting for a cab...
ACP sir after finding a cab leave from their to his destination...
he arrived in a very silent place...
he get down the cab nd pays the money...he then waits for someone...a man comes ACP starts talking to him...suddenly he feels a blow in his head his vision blur nd then tatal blackout...the last thing he saw was that one van came towards him nd four fivr men came towards him...















Edited by ramarathore - 13 years ago

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