Daya's B'day Contest 2- 'VM'!!!RESULT DECLARED !!! - Page 2

Wow ... all entries are just superb !!! Great job everyone ... My scores ... It's really tough to score someone because everyone puts in equal effort but it's a contest and one has to wine afterall !!! so here goes ... please take my comments just as an encouragement ... I'm not a VM maker ... and I really can't judge the hardwork you put in ... just reviewing as a viewer

Entry 1 : 7 marks
I loved the whole concept ... there was a certain fun in your presentation ... but above all I loved the song you chose ... it was very much in sync with the whole idea ... it's just that I had to wait and wait to see duo chemistry come up ... you put that a bit in the end ... still when it came ... it was excellent 😊 .. nice choice of scenes and caps 😊 All the best !!! You're a great VM maker !!


Entry 2 : 6 marks
Nice caps ... I loved some of them a lot ...but again ... it was more of a birthday VM than in sync with the theme ... you showed various facets and moments of Daya sir ... but his relation with other cops and all went missing ... nevertheless ... a very well presented one ... I'm sure if the theme was to make a birthday VM for Daya sir ... yours would've been very apt !!! Good work 😊 all the best.

Entry 3 : 8 marks
Firstly the starting song ... very nice choice ,... I loved it 😊 ... now your VM is one in which for the first one minute, one would be left 😍... every single cap of Daya sir is just wow !!! I liked the way you showed a relation like friendship ... and then showed it's various forms with various team mates ... the way he becomes an ideal junior when it's with ACP sir ... a support when with Freddy, a buddy in case of Abhijeet and so on ... this basic idea of interpreting the word 'friendship' in various forms is what I really liked ... and I was all smiles throughout the VM ... it was a visual treat !!
One special mention ... at times pictures indeed speak more than videos ... you depicted more through pics which I personally liked a lot !!! Great job. 😊

Entry 4 : 6 marks
Good job again ... nice intro. when Daya comes into the bar in disguise ...with "arre deewaano mujhe pehchaano" in the background. A really nice job. But you know it had one cap (a recent one) coming a bit too frequently ... I wished you chose some old episodes' disguises too ... nevertheless good job 😊

Entry 5 : 8 marks
Won't back out from saying my favourite one 😃 ... your whole concentration was on the disguises ... and with every clip came a new one ... and each one leaving a smile on the viewers face 😊 ... it's was a visual treat !!! I had a great time watching it ... and can watch it again and again !!! Great job 😊

Entry 6 : 7 marks
Nice song ... I think I've guessed the maker 😛 ... a really really good job ... just wished it went on for more ... it started and by the time I was enjoying it ... it got over ... anyways a very good job !!!


I hope I've not left anyone angry with my scores ... I've tried to be frank ... I loved each and every entry ... everyone has done a really good job !!!

It was indeed a visual treat everyone ..., Enjoyed it to the core !!!

I don't know how to make beautiful creations like this !!!

Wowww😳😳😳... All the Entries are jus MINDBLOWING👏👏Great work guys👏

i m really trying to watch... But My Net Speed is not giving me premission.. And For rating i need to watch all VM's in one Day..

Wpw Lovely VMs by all

My ratings and feedback:

No 1: 6/10. The audio and video were not of very good quality. A couple of scenes were more of Abhijeet-centric. The VM has to be Daya-centric. Also, a genuine Abhijeet-Daya moment was missing. When you have included proper Vivek-Daya and Sachin-Daya scene you should have added a proper duo moment.

No 2: 5/10 There are no scenes in the VM, whereas this was one of the requirement of the contest. Doesn't mean the VM is not good. If it were taken out of the contest, it would be a lovely VM. But it doesn't meet the contest conditions fully. Hence have to reduce marks with a heavy heart.

No 3 : 6/10. The scenes were good, but the place where Daya was checking Freddie's pocket, the audio was not matching the scene. It looked a bit out of place.

No 4 : 5/10. The entry was fantastic!!! But that scene went on for too long. You should have cut it short and focussed on other disguises. You could have added many more disguise scenes. Many shots are showing original Daya and not his disguises. Also, the duration is 7:48 whereas the contest rule says that it has to be less than 6 mins. Hence reducing marks. Doesn't mean VM is not good. As a standalone, it is very good. Just that it violates a rule.

No 5: 8/10. You have used many disguise scenes. This is excellent. Maybe you should have muted the song when the dialogues are important and continued the song when the dialogues are not important.

No 6: 7/10. Short, but you have included many important disguise scenes within the short duration. Maybe you could have made it a bit more long and added a few more shots. The choice of the song is good too.

My ratings