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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

OMG dada kya likha hai👏

outstanding, EXTRAORDINARY...

my mind is stuck...sch me words nhi hai😉

dis time I want to RESERV my COMMENT😃

jha sbki SOCH khatam hoti hai vhi se teri shuru hoti hai⭐️⭐️⭐️

wowww pehli vaar aisa KUCH PDHA HAI ,,, SUNA HAI👍🏼

FW vale v ais EPI kbhi nhi de skte..

while reading my brain totlly dead..

thora bhut to pehle hai hi 😉😆

wt explanation... ...fantastic..

FISH, DESERT PLANT...

great research👏

daya n abhi sir's part ...so sweet n nice😃😃

all over

u deserve

standing avation😃⭐️

plssscccsss

complete it ASAP

u knew n...

mere pass paitence naam ki koi cheez nhi hai😉

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Soonaali

@Soonaali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

Dada first sorry late reply kar rahi hue

but u know the reason

hmmm toh story baki hai

but good suspnce build up kiya hai...

chalo Jaldi se tension free karo muse khatam karo story jaldi

or yeh kya DAYA sir ko wapas hospital bheja 😡

hmmm chalo for ur wonderfull story start, good exam result and ur come back

a small gift from me

sorry jada kuch nahi kar pai

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halfbloodprince

@Wistfulness

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#863

Hey Dada, what a brilliant story you wrote 😛
But this suspense has left me even more eager to read the next part 😉 I loved every part of it, Daya sir, duo and the lab scenes were great. I could imagine Salunke and all in the lab sequences 😃
Daya sir's accident part was a major twist and I really appreciate the way it was brought. 👏
My gk and biology knowledge increased 😆 The last line came with a great suspense and I'm waiting for part 2 😛
All I can say is, great story and no words to appreciate. 👏

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: Soonaali

a small gift from me

EXAMS ki saari THAKAN uter gayii😃

THANK U BHAI n LII

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#865

👏

hey DADA kya hay yr COMING soon qun likha???

ab wait to ultimately humein hi krna padega na!!!!😆

aur mujh me patience naam ki koi bhi cheej nai hay...😃

waise yahan tak ki story k bare me mere pass kuch bolne ko hi nai h..

kya INVESTIGATION use ki h...👏

kya dimmag lagaya...👏

pta hay jab RAHUL ka naam aaya na.. meri 6th sense ne kaha DAYA sir ko kuch hone wala hay...😲

aur vahi hua...

me apni studies krne baithi vo bhi forcefully..

par apki story me hi gum ho gyi...😆

hey u just send an E-mail to
CID CREATIVE team n STORY WRITER...

tussi chaaa jaoge...⭐️

n dada plz jaldi story ko finish karo...

mujse WAIT nai ho raha hay...😛

Edited by daya_angel - 13 years ago

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

Incomplete story! Oho!! Complete it please.. I would like to read the whole in one.

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

😃😃😃Wowww dada You are backkk😃😃😃

😳😳😳😳Another Amaging story dada😳😳😳😳

👏👏👏Your story is jus FANTASTIC dada as usual👏👏👏

😭😭😭but I cant see My Daya sir in Hospital bed😭😭😭

⭐️⭐️⭐️Abhi-Daya are jus Wowww⭐️⭐️⭐️

😃😊😊I Like the Concept of the Story😊😊😃

😆But ye comming soon kya hai???😲😆

😊😊😊Dada please continue the story soon😊😊😊

😊😃👏😳I cant wait😳👏😃😊

😃😃😃Dada, Again you done a Superb Job 😃😃😃

😊😊😊I LOVE THE STORY AND I LOVE YOU DADA😊😊😉

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-DreamGirl-

@-DreamGirl-

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

VIEWBIE'S NOTE: THIS COMMENT HURTS THE SENTIMENTS OF OTHERS AND IS CAUSING FIGHTS. HENCE DELETING THE COMMENT.

HENCEFORTH PLEASE POST YOUR OPINIONS IN A MORE POLITE MANNER.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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-DreamGirl-

@-DreamGirl-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

oo please mujhe galat mat samajhna yaar yaha sabko apne apne point of view batane ki aajadi hai mai bhi wahi kar raha tha😊 dont hurt😆

Edited by krishnarock - 13 years ago

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halfbloodprince

@Wistfulness

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#870

Excuse me, whatever or whoever you are, you have no right to use this type of language here in this forum. If you don't like Daya sir or Dada's stories, don't visit this forum. We all like Dada's stories and even if you didn't like, this is not the appropriate language to mention. It will hurt Dada a lot and even us. So please for god sake avoid it.

All have the right to say what they think but this doesn't mean you can use such a language. Also, I remember your first post here and can never forget how bad and offensive the language was.

Never dare to say anything about Dada or any other member here. There was no need to use 😡 emoticons. Dada and we don't need your opinion so stay away from us.

Edited by Shruti_HR - 13 years ago

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