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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Soonaali

Hey DADA

sorry for no pic and late reply
Storr is mind blowing
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I saw a large omprovement inrespect of detection
Gr8 combination of detection and emmotions
I am so happy that after a long time atrue GD story is here😳😳
me too much happy😊
just feel end part is rushy
for ur story
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THanks a LOT



hey LII...
XCILLENT FEEDBACK...👏
👏basically as bein a GOOD STORY WRITEr HERSELF SHREELA⭐️ n U⭐️ read it with complete WRITING way as well... so loop holes did not skip from ur n her HAWK eYE...😉
😆yaar its not my COMFORT ZONE... n also my WRITING way... haan kuch CHUNCKS thay jin ko main nay PLOT ki shakel di... but i m NOT MARKUP the CRITERIA...
yup the LAST PART was RUSHY... cz of that... kyunkay mujahy samjh hee nahi aa raha tha kay FINISHING NOTE kiya dun... magar shayed wo GHADA bhi DAYA Sir ka BHAI hay wali LINE kuch ODD ho gayii hay... cz wahan main nay apni PERSONAL FEELIN add ker di jo GHALAT hay😭🤢... khair i'll DELETE it... wen will have any BETTER FINISHING NOTE...

thanx alot... and yaar its NOT GD type STORY... if U want to saw GD... GAME OVER SERIES was the BEST EXAMPLE😈...


THANK ALOT LII!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

After Long Time U r here wth Story..Nice Story GD...Investigation was Gud...Bt Tarika Dose Was there..Means Duo Personal Conversation was based On that Issue..Well No Problem With That..Basically, This is speciality of Ur Story That Duo personal matter/ Conversation always present in Ur story.😛..I like That 😊

In centric stage Investigation was so gud..Bt Then Story Achanak sa Khatam ho Gae😕..Well Its okay..it was Nice Story..😊
And, Thanks. U cleared In the end that u typed wrong C-language Codes with intentions..Otherwise, i was Going to ask u..Where these Codes U forund..i never ever Learnt abt that 😆😆😆.
Anyways, Gud Attempt
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey,again a nice story. I like the whole story. Waiting for your next one😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayan11

Hey,again a nice story. I like the whole story. Waiting for your next one😛



Hey, again a NICE FEEDBACK... I like the WHOLE FEEDBACK... Waiting for YOUR NEXT one😛😉😆

THANK YOU
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neeme

After Long Time U r here wth Story..Nice Story GD...Investigation was Gud...Bt Tarika Dose Was there..Means Duo Personal Conversation was based On that Issue..Well No Problem With That..Basically, This is speciality of Ur Story That Duo personal matter/ Conversation always present in Ur story.😛..I like That 😊

In centric stage Investigation was so gud..Bt Then Story Achanak sa Khatam ho Gae😕..Well Its okay..it was Nice Story..😊
And, Thanks. U cleared In the end that u typed wrong C-language Codes with intentions..Otherwise, i was Going to ask u..Where these Codes U forund..i never ever Learnt abt that 😆😆😆.
Anyways, Gud Attempt



after a long time... hmmm... jee DII aap hee logun ka israar tha... TAREEKA JEE dose😉... kiya karein DII... ab thora tou BARAY BHAI ko SUPPORT karna paray ga na... DIL DA MAMLA jo hay😉😆... abt the INVESTIGATION... its OK... darasal kuch CHUNCKS thay meray MUNNY say BHEJAY mein tou un ko PLOT ki shakal day dii...😆😆
DII... i have sum knowledge how to makre CODE of VIRUS in C-LANG but only at sum xtenet... thatswhy i CHANGED the CODES by myself... agar kisi nay COPY kar kay bhej diya tou apna tou END...🤢🤢
khair U like iit... its really my PLEASURE...😳


THANK YOU DII!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTEPAD... NIMI... POLLY... SAADI and POOJA


tons of THANK YOU!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


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Soonaali thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dada will see it in evening and comment on it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dada..
Your Song is...





About Pic selection




Ultimately Your whole VM is..



I like so much... but you really make it very Saddy..
Please don't do that..
Make Vm like Happy... not saddy...

Edited by Chints09 - 14 years ago
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