Originally posted by: Soonaali
Hey DADA
sorry for no pic and late replyStorr is mind blowing👏👏👏👏I saw a large omprovement inrespect of detectionGr8 combination of detection and emmotionsI am so happy that after a long time atrue GD story is here😳😳me too much happy😊just feel end part is rushyfor ur story⭐️THanks a LOT
hey LII...
XCILLENT FEEDBACK...👏
👏basically as bein a GOOD STORY WRITEr HERSELF SHREELA⭐️ n U⭐️ read it with complete WRITING way as well... so loop holes did not skip from ur n her HAWK eYE...😉
😆yaar its not my COMFORT ZONE... n also my WRITING way... haan kuch CHUNCKS thay jin ko main nay PLOT ki shakel di... but i m NOT MARKUP the CRITERIA...
yup the LAST PART was RUSHY... cz of that... kyunkay mujahy samjh hee nahi aa raha tha kay FINISHING NOTE kiya dun... magar shayed wo GHADA bhi DAYA Sir ka BHAI hay wali LINE kuch ODD ho gayii hay... cz wahan main nay apni PERSONAL FEELIN add ker di jo GHALAT hay😭🤢... khair i'll DELETE it... wen will have any BETTER FINISHING NOTE...
thanx alot... and yaar its NOT GD type STORY... if U want to saw GD... GAME OVER SERIES was the BEST EXAMPLE😈...
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