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twinklesmiles

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

@Rashida - Just continue with your thinking .. but develop your story keeping the main plot in your mind... don't be confused now ..

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

😆 OMG What an effect my twist and plot have on u guys!! And quite a record!! Largest number of pages for a contest thread before the stories are even out!!😆Lolzzz!! 😛 hehehehehhehe😆

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

This is undoubtedly the most fun yet confusing plot in the terms that it's making us think loads !!!! usually when we have to solve a crime ... we get hold of what idea we have .... cid watching experience and write it .... but when they involve our officers ... it becomes tough .... loads of thinking is needed !!! So yeah it's indeed an unforgettable experience already !!! Thanks for this plot Suhaani !!

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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Yah Bhavna this is tough but interesting plot....kidnapped duo & rescue them...& a new officer....I also think that duo is quite intelligent to rescue themselves.....so what's the need of new officer....I think that's the twist of this story....Suhaani...just great.....bahot sochna par raha hai....

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twinklesmiles

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Its not only interesting, but also challenging.. " putting yourself in the shoes of that ' new officer ' " 😎 hmmmm........ that's what made me to give in a try.. though writing is not my cup of tea ,

I liked the plot the most 😛

Edited by twinklelovesCID - 14 years ago

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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Bhavanab
Look ... you needn't make the new cop save duo !!! She has just come to inform ACP sir about a huge plotting which is connected with duo's kidnapping ... that's it !!!

😲Haila .... i got them kidnapped and no one came to know how and why they got kidnapped.. other than the kidnappers....

what shuld i do now..... Daya ki shaadhi style...make a kidnapper police office🤢

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

I hope everyone remembered this also! -----

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The CID Team has just finished a case, and Abhijeet and Daya are returning home from the bureau. Daya took Abhijeet in his car. The last person to see them was Freddy, whom Daya dropped at Freddy's house, which was on the way to Abhijeet's house.

The next day, the duo didnt arrive and the team tried to contact them but to no avail. Acp sends Vivek, Freddy, Kajal, Sachin and Tasha to investigate. But the duo have vanished, They never reached Abhijeet's home.

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I mean some of u are confused so i thought perhaps its best to see why. This is the way they disappear. The question is why and how. Not necessarily kidnapped. The new officer can appear later also. The team is the main focus actually. The intelligence officer is not any member and he/she is not part of their team, just an officer who has come regarding a related case.

and yes why i said its 'u' as the officer is because i wanted u guys to imagine yourself as that officer. can also b male officer.

Anything else to be clarified?😊😊

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

U shud allow some deviation. My head is already in a spin. I hv to rewrite everything now.

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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Thanx Suhaani for the clarification & for PM....I think all of us understand it....but u first said to kidnap duo & then change it ....but I feel previous one is more challenging & interesting.....so I stick to it & manage to kidnap & rescue them though I dnt know whether readers like it or not.....& I really love the plot so much that's why I write the story....I never write a story before & I have not much time to write but I manage to do it....
One thing I want to know that can I change something about new officer...if she/he is given some importance then it is ok or not

Edited by debasree04 - 14 years ago