my TIME UP break!!! Sr Ins DAYA... - Page 3

yeah, i think every one of us want it.. especially freddy's promotion (so tht he wont cal tht sachin as 'sir')

hmmmmmmmmmm..... so now ONE VOTE coming for PROMOTION of BOTH.... ab dekhtay hain... aur kaun kaun VOTE karta hay......
thanx yaar... that my STORY bound U....
abt SHRUTI...... na i did not match her.....
i think ABHI Sir n DAYA Sir dono kay liyey mujhya koi PRINCESS banani paray gi.....
JAPAN say😉

Originally posted by: gadhadada

abt SHRUTI...... na i did not match her.....
i think ABHI Sir n DAYA Sir dono kay liyey mujhya koi PRINCESS banani paray gi.....
JAPAN say😉

WOW🤗

thanx a lot.....great duo story.....as ur 1st two stories...
These days we r badly missing our duo ....they only in stories & old classics.....plzzzz keep writing this kind of stories......
I specially like this part-

DAYA: ABHI' acha aik lamhay kay liyey socho'. Agar kal ACP Sir DCP ban jayein aur DELHI chalein jayey' tum un ki jagah ACP ban jao' main tumhari jagah SR.INS DAYA aur FREDDIE meri jagah aa jayey' tou kya hum koi case solve ker payein gay'. Haan!!!

ABHIJEET: nahi' balkay bilkul nahi' hum ACP Sir kay bina ek qadam nahi utha saktay tou case solve karna' aur main ye kabhi pasand nahi karunga kay tum mujhy "Sir" kehnay ki koshish mein pareshan hotay raho' phir mujhay ABHI kaun kahay ga' aur main jhanper kisay maarun ga'. DAYA!!!

I also agree with u.....

hmmmmmmm.... NEHA.... good CHOICE.... chalo DHOONDO.... PIYARI PARYAAN...... so i'll use them in my STORIES.... against DAYA n ABHI Sir's.... pakka😃

and DEBASHREE.... thanx alot... yaar i also need that DUO MOMENTS.... GAME OVER series mein tou meray dimagh ka DAHI bana diya..... is liyey... n phir aaj kal kay EPISODE mein ye PATCH itna MISSING hay... kay sirf DUKH hota hya😭 ..... aur GUSSA aata hay.....😡

sorry... PRINCESS..... i missed UR name.... THANX ALOT BUDDY.....

bhut pyari story hai bilkul tumahri tarah😊
nice cocept .........
auro ka to pta nhi lekin mujhe abhi-tarika ki chamestry bhut pyari lagi infect cid main v mujhe abhi-tarika ki jodhi bhut pasand hai😳😳😳😳
nice of duo's chemistry😊😊😊
overall very naughty story😉😉

😊

THANX BUDDY.....
ya i knew abt UR FAV.... ABHI_TAREEKA.....
so i think its a COMPLETE dose for U....
DUO plus... ABHI n TAREEKA.....
buhat SHUKRIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG..........its for me.........pkdho mujhe m faint😳😳😳😳😳

I'm the last one to comment I guess, but all I'm saying is 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 A very good story indeed... a perfect dose for all of us, since we don't get any nice DUO scene in the recent episodes, and the only source of them now is through your stories!!! And indeed a very good job done, apart from the Abhi-Tarika thing..... but otherwise 😃😃😃😃😃 superb!!!