'A day of LUV with DUO's'-----------Story

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Friends 😊😊😊😊
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First of all a sweet and happy valentine day 2 all of uuuuuuu. I give all of u a valentine treat as a story 4m me & my friend..............m only Post dis...... but dis is written by my friend whom is also ur all's friend................m request her 2 written some special on dis lovely day.........but her condition that dis is posted by me.........m very very very thankful 2 her ........she became such a lovely and gud friend of me.....m very thankful & oblige 2 IF Form 2 give me such friend.......

nd all READERS u r requested to recognise the WRITER...........here m give u a hint....... she likes Daya's AWESOME SMILE and always discuss about dis in her stories & aslo bonds emotionally with DAYA and ABHIJEET's relationship..............after read dis story , give ur comments & aslo tell me about WRITER ..........m fill the below blank........

WRITTEN BY:-gadhadada 😊😊😊😊

Once again A happy valentine day 2 all of uuuuuuu. & 2 my lovely friend


A day of LUV with DUO

13 FEB'

When FREDDIE move from the bearue'. DAYA and ABHIJEET talking with each other' ABHIJEET told him about his VALENTINE DAY special program'.

DAYA: boss agar SALUNKHY sahib nay usay rok liya tou!!!

ABHIJEET: DAYA' kyun dara raha hay'. acha acha bol'. (in smile) aur wesay bhi tum kis din kaam aaogay'.

DAYA: haan bhai kay liyey jaan bhi qurbaan hay' magar SALUNKHY say panga' boss'. agar unhun nay mujh per koi test west ker diya' tou!!! main tou bhari jawani main mara jaonga'.

ABHIJEET: haha' bhari jawani'. gud'. kuch nahi hoga'. dekhna'. mera dil keh raha hay'

DAYA laugh a lot' he discussed about the case work and ABHIJEET told him that he will take FREDDIE on the case spot tomorrow' but FREDDIE only heard that he will go with ABHIJEET in his VALENTINE special program'

14 FEB'

FREDDIE and ABHIJEET present in classical suiting' looks so adorable'. ACP after entering saw it in quite confusing way'. Buzzing around the corner where VIVEK' SACHIN and KAJAL talking with each other'. They all know about the background of unusual expressions and outfits of both of them'

ACP: ABHIJEET kya aaj koi khas din hay???

ABHIJEET: nahi Sir' kyun???

ACP: tou phir tum nay itnay achay kapray kyun pehnay huay hain??? Birthday hay kya tumhari???

FREDDIE: Sir aaj na VALENTINE DAY hay???

ACP: acha acha'. Tou ABHIJEET kyun itna tayyar hua hay???

FREDDIE(near to ACP): Sir ABHIJEET Sir na DATE per ja rahy hain' DR.TAREEKA kay sath'.

ACP(furious look): acha'. Aur tum kahan ja rahy ho FREDDIE???

FREDDIE: main bhi un kay sath ja raha hun'.

DAYA enters with laugh' he heard FREDDIE program'

ACP(after seeing DAYA in smile): DAYA ABHIJEET ka khayal rakhna paray ga'.

DAYA(smily tone): lagta tou yehi hay Sir'.

he moves at ABHIJEET side' praise his appearance through whistle and eyes'. ABHIJEET was quite confused' he and everyone thought that FREDDIE is move with his wife thatswhy he came in complete kit but'. due to ACP presence he did not say anything' but after his exit'. He signals DAYA to talk to FREDDIE'

ABHIJEET: FREDDIE' tum say kis nay kaha hay kay tum meray sath ja rahay ho??? Haan???

DAYA(smily tone): arry boss' janay do' FREDDIE experienced hay' tum ko achi tarah guide keray ga'

ABHIJEET saw DAYA in anger' DAYA change his mood and deviate his attention with'.

DAYA: wesay day kya rahay ho???

ABHIJEET: watch li hay' ye dekho' achi hay na'

DAYA: very nice'.

Suddenly bearue gets a call about the kidnapping of a college girl'. All reached there' on way'

ABHIJEET: lo ho gaya saara program barbaad' (bit anger) is larki ko bhi aaj hee aghwa hona tha'

DAYA(relax him): chalo kabhi aur chalay jana TAREEKA kay sath'.

ABHIJEET(in rash): nahi DAYA aaj tou kuch bhi ho jayey' main zarur jaonga' bhalay koi aghwa hota hay ya qatal'.

DAYA: hmmmm' iitna gussa' chalo relax ho jao' hum sub poori koshish karein gay kay aaghwa hui larki tumhari DATE TIME say pehlay mil jayey'.

All grab traces of the case' take snap shots'. Investigate to everyone around'. ABHIJEET watch the time in every few seconds'

DAYA: kya ker rahy ho ABHI' ACP sahib kya sochein gay' FREDDIE ko dekho kitnay sakun say khara hay'

ABHIJEET: DAYA mera mustaqbil ( future ) hee aaj ki DATE per base karta hay' (naughty voice) tum kya chahtay ho tumharay bhai ka ghar kabhi aabaad na ho'..

DAYA try really hard to control his laugh'. He pats on ABHIJEET shoulder and move to the spot once again'. They really try extreme hard to finish the work'.. and successful as well'

At night

ABHIJJET: DAYA yaar kuch ker na' FREDDIE ko sanbhal lay'

DAYA(careless tone): lay jao boss' bechara itna tayyar ho ker aaya hay'. itna smart lug raha hay'.

ABHIJEET(bit anger): acha' phir tum chalay jao us kay sath' main nahi jata'

DAYA(in smile): kiya' main FREDDIE kay sath DATE per chala jaon' kya ho gaya hay tum ko ABHI' (bit laugh) kya sochay gi TAREEKA'.

ABHIJEET(in soft tone): DAYA' tu acha baccha hay na' mera chota sa bhai' please na'

DAYA: hmmmm'. aur mujhay kya milay ga!!!

ABHIJEET: jo tum kaho'.

DAYA: aik achi mazay wali DINE INN' beach per'.

ABHIJEET: done' jub tum kaho'.

DAYA engaged FREDDIE in sum other work' he promised to take FREDDIE with him on DATE in future when he finds a GIRL FRND for himself' DAYA moves with ABHIJEET to drop him at restaurant' when he step down from quallis' DAYA also did that'. He moves with ABHIJEET'.

ABHIJEET(grab his wrist): hain'.. ye tum kahan ja rahy ho DAYA??/

DAYA: tumharay sath'.

ABHIJEET(shocked): kiya'. (anger) Kyun!!!

DAYA(in smile): boss'. ACP Sir nay kaha hay kay main tumhara khayal rakkhun'.

ABHIJEET(in anger): DAYA'. jao'

DAYA: acha chalo main us wali table (pointing towards the table) per beth jata hun'. Boss' nazar rakkun ga (with himself) tum per'.

ABHIJEET(soft n confuse tone): DAYA dekh na' tu mujh per nazar rakkhy ga tou main NERVOUS ho jaonga na'.

DAYA burst out his laugh and after few seconds'. He postponed to tease ABHIJEET for more minutes'

DAYA: acha jao' nahi jata main tumharay sath'. aur Mr.ROMEO aaj keh dena zarur' (with himself) tum say achi tou MONA hay kum say kum apnay Mr. ROMEO say dil ki baat tou keh deti hay'

DAYA: arry ye tou lay jao'.

He gives him his gift packet'. Because of bit nervousness and in hurry as well ABHIJEET did not give attention on the size of a packet'. DAYA also gives him a fresh RED ROSE' ABHIJEET say thanx from his shy smile'. DAYA gives a cute smile in reply' and signals him to move cz its bit late '. ABHIJEET meet with TAREEKA at candle light dinner'. He says..

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA tum buhat achi lug rahi ho'

TAREEKA(bit irritate): ABHIJEET tum ye baat 10 baar keh chukay ho'

ABHIJEET with smile gives her a wrapped gift' she opened it in good mood and with beautiful smile' but after watching it' she placed it hardly on table' her smiles changes into anger'.

ABHIJEET(in confusion): kya hua??/ acha nahi laga???

TAREEKA(in angery tone): nahi buhat hee acha hay'. tum VALENTINE per mujhay denay kay liyey ye gift layey ho'.

ABHIJEET still in confusion take the gift from the table'. The gift contains TWO books (one is of cooking, while another is of poison kinds) instead of a beautiful watch'. There is a smile comes on ABHIJEET lips after seeing the books titles but he instantly hides it from TAREEKA'.

ABHIJEET: sorry TAREEKA'. Shayed gift parcel dukaan mein change ho gaya'. Mai kal hee change karwa dunga'. Ye tum mujhay day do'

TAREEKA: tumhein aur kuch nahi kehna' mujh say'

ABHIJEET: haan wo'. acha main ek phone ker kay aata hun'.

He moves aside and dials DAYA's cell number' DAYA picks the call in bit anger coz he was watching an interesting cricket match'.

DAYA: hello kya hua ABHI'. yaar tumhein DATE mein bhi sakun nahi hay kya!!!

ABHIJEET: DAYA yaar main kya bolun'.

DAYA: hain' kya bolon??? Kis say???

ABHIJEET: abay TAREEKA mujh say bar bar pooch rahi hay kay main kuch bolun'.

DAYA (loudly laughing): tou bolo na'. kya masla hay bolnay mein'.

ABHIJEET: abay kya bolon??? Yehi tou pooch raha hun'.

DAYA (after few sec): acha tum us kay saamnay beth jao' aur blue tooth on ker lo jo main bolon' boltay jana' jaldi jaldi' ok'

ABHIJEET (in hurry): haan ye acha idea hay'. chalo main nay on ker diya blue tooth' ab'

DAYA: TAREEKA'

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA'

DAYA: TAREEKA main tum ko ek buhat important baat batana chahta hun'.

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA main tum ko ek buhat important baat batana chahta hun'.

DAYA: wo baat ye hay kay DAYA ek buhat acha baccha hay' us kii smile buhat awesome hay' wo mera buhat khayal rakhta hay' main bhi tumhara aisay hee kahyal rakkhun ga'

ABHIJEET: wo baat ye hay kay DAYA ek buhat acha baccha hay' us kii smile buhat awesome hay' wo mera buhat khayal rakhta hay' main bhi tumhara aisay hee kahyal rakkhun ga'

DAYA start laughing' ABHIJEET clearly feels that there was something wrong happens' TAREEKA's face expression easily understands him that DAYA played intelligently with him'. DAYA dropped the call instantly' TAREEKA try to leave the DATE' ABHIJEET at once standup from his seat and gives a fresh ROSE to her' she grabs it from the stem' but only stem fixed on her hold while the fresh ROSE was in ABHIJEET hand'. She really gets angry' left the place' ABHIJEET in anger move at DAYA residence'. He rings the bell'. DAYA opened the door' ABHIJEET instantly grab his neck and start beating him' DAYA laugh a lot' after few minutes'.

ABHIJEET: tu aik intahai ghatya insaan hay'. pata hay meri DATE barbaad ker dii'

DAYA(with smile): boss'. koi doosri dhoond leetay hain tumharay liyey'.

ABHIJEET: abay saari cheezain badal dein'. Gift bhi shayed dukaan (saw DAYA) DAYA kay bacchay wo books bhi tu nay rakkhein theen'. Aur ROSE bhi tu nay hee mujhay diya tha'. abay'. Tu na'. DEVIL hay DEVIL'

DAYA: DEVIL nahi boss'. awesome smile wala DAREDEVIL'.. (again) chalo tumhari DATE ka intaizaam kartay hain'.

ABHIJEET: kahan' nahi mujhay kahein nahi jana'. Khas ker tumharay sath'

DAYA: chal na'. ABHI'.

He grabs his hand' seated him in quallis and move' he reached at sea side'. Fresh salty air and cool water changes and refresh the mood of ABHIJEET rapidly'. DAYA gave the order for dinner' both having a very good and cool time with each other company'. At the time of payment'.

DAYA: ABHI' bill tum ko dena hay'.

ABHIJEET: kyun'..

DAYA: promise kiya tha'. tum nay' due dinner hay ye'.

ABHIJEET: aur meri DATE jo kharab ker di' us ka kya'.

DAYA(wink him): tou main hun na' boss' kya tension hay'.

ABHIJEET(standup): dekhna tumhari DATE bhi main isi tarah kharab karun ga'

DAYA(sad tone): ohhhh'. Tum apnay pyaray chotay say bhai ki DATE kharab ker do gay'. (with smile imitate ABHIJEET voice) Kitna zehr bhara hua hay ABHI tumharay dil mein meray liyey'. Kuch tou garbar hay boss'

ABHIJEET saw him and praise his talent with loud laugh' DAYA shares his laugh too and as usual they spent and enjoyed 14 February in each other companionship like they did from 13 golden years'..

Edited by Shivani24 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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well, not bad actually!😆😆 it made me laugh! it's written by GADHADADA, isn't it?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really funny 😆 daya is so naughty 😃😃😃 poor Abhi
wellll, sounds like the writer is Gadhadada
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Posted: 14 years ago
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liked it .........though a bit unlike our duo but still nice.......😆

and no doubt writer is GADHADADA . 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very Nice and cute storry..................
about the story writter..............then i was said to gadadada to write story on this day.......so definatly its gadhadada............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice story
i think that its written by gadhadada😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ppl....


WOW!!! wat a FEEDBACK..... U all are my SINCERE REDERS.... so easily recognize my story.....
ya.... first let me clear ONE thing..... its a SEQUNCE or SUMUP of FEW SCENES.... on my FIRST FRIEND/BUDDY wish..... ya SHIVANI insists me to wrote something on VALENTINE DAY SPECIAL..... hahaha!!!!
and U know all that READER wish is the WRITER command😉
so the over all 90% credit of this goes to SHIVANI(my PAL) and 10% goes to NEEME DII... cz she also pushed me....
i knew that its not up to the MARK.... but!!!
chalein all who READ it.... and GUESS my NAME correctly..... i appreciate U all... and obliged from the core of my heart.....
i m so THANKFUL to all....

BIG BIG THANKS......
so sorry to all who felt a bit bad/sad abt the DUO's or STORY....
its jus SHIVANI who inoculate the eager.... lit the idea... make plot and change it into story... and the POST climax is just due to NEEME DII push... she also support and helped me out to wrote something on that matter..... i also gave the resonsibilty to my pal SHIVANI.... for posting it.... due to sum assignment deadlines as well quiz.... she fulfilled her responsibility with complete care and caution.... and also WROTE a DHAMAKA INTRO abt da story and abt me...😉

thanx again
specially NOTEPAD... NEEME DII... AADRIKA... NIMI697.... SREELA and POOJA83.... and last but not least SHIVANI.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys.......
thaxxx 2 all ............
everyone guessed right...😊
thax 2 gadhadada 4 wrote a cute nd nice story for us.......
@ gadhadada kuch jyada hi meri tarif kr di😆
thaxxxxxxxx
Edited by Shivani24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@gadhadada, just 10%😆.
well thats okay. i m so happy that u fullfill my desire......
So sweet and nice story....And u r always welcomed........
I hope ur next story will come soon good luck.......
@shivani, u also deserve praise..gud luck
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmmm... SORRY NEEME DII... if U hurted....
but i wrote the SEQUENCES earlier...
thats why i gave U VERY LESS %... but... i m SO SORRY....😭😭
really DII....
bus mujhy tou is ki SAZA milni chahyey.....😡
aap batayey meri SAZA kya hogi???❓
i think.... MEET WID DUO"s😉
achi SAZA hay na......👍🏼
but SORRY... DII....😔

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