Aditya-Dayanand Discussions and Comments -I - Page 108

@ Nandini- Asha was like their sister.. & Tasha was too fascinated with her seniors... She wanted to be like them.

I thought i will not have time for IF this month... But i found 5mins to open the page at office without logging in...Was getting bored in the bus... Remembered the post for poem contest...
But i didnt remember the options... Thought our duo frndship topic will surely b there so wrote my 1st poem... :( came home n checked that on duo the context is diffrent from wat i wrote... So posting it here
Dont have time and patience to write hindi in hindi... Hope u understand my hindi in english :)
This is my 1st attempt... So plz dont laugh if u find it funny or stupid :)

Yoon toh dost dekhe honge kayi
Inka bhi naam suna hoga kahin
Jo darthe nahi maut se kabhie
Unki hi baat maine hai kahi

Gehre Dost bante nahi ek pal mein
bante hai yeh bharose ke bal pe
Taakat bhi milthi is bharose ke bal se
Daulat hai badi yeh kisi aur dhan se

Audhe ka nahin in pe koi zor
Behthi nadhi ke hai yeh do cchorr
Izzat hai is behthi nadhi ki shor
Saalo se yeh khade banke dosti ki dor

Suni sunayi lage yeh daastaan
Kehta hai inka naam, dosti ka har raasta
Kaayam rahe inki dosthi, yehi dua hai humaari
Aur sada bani rahe inke liye, izzat humaari

Words meaning in case of trouble reading it
Bal - strength
Audha - job post
Nadhi - river

Lovley and of course we understand hindi Keep it up😊

Aditya sir is feeling lonely!!!

Why???????????? Hum MB Gang mebers kam hai kya????😆

MB gang is neglecting this thread!!!

I am watching deadly betrayel. Is Daya sir going to be heart broken again? 😲

yes, daya will be heartbroken....but am not neglecting this thread😲....tomorrow i turn 16....now nandini's song will come true😆

Originally posted by: deep_baner

yes, daya will be heartbroken....but am not neglecting this thread😲....tomorrow i turn 16....now nandini's song will come true😆

Deepika no need to remind us in this subtle way, We know😆😆