Raaz Abhijeet Ke Atheeth Ka(Main Series Thread)

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

For once isca you are posting a relevant video.😊 Thanks.

Ok, dekhte hi pata chal raha hai ki yeh specially shot promo hai, like AC promo. It is in the wide-screen format. These scenes will not be seen in the main episodes. 100% sure.

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Guess on the story Abhi sir driving the qualis , with a happy expression on his face.

His phone rings

Abhi: Hello

Other guy: Main aapke attet ke baare main kuch jaanta hoon, jise sunle aapke hosh ud jayenge

Abhi: Kya bakwas kar rahe ho

Guy: Mujh se aake ABC jagah milo

Scene -II

A masked man gives Abhi a letter, Abhi reads and gives the Daya to gaya expression............

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

OMG! I watched the promo again. And heard how powerful Daya Sir's voice while shouting 'Sir'😳. I again and again fell in love with him, his voice...!!

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Since we know FW's format, I'm giving the story a try!!!!

FW, if this is your plan, then must say it's pathetic!!!!😡😡

First of all, I'll make a continuation to Nandini's story....... And I've written the English tanslation of the initial story in case some find it a bit difficult.....

Abhi sir driving the qualis , with a happy expression on his face.

His phone rings

Abhi: Hello

Other guy: Main aapke attet ke baare main kuch jaanta hoon, jise sunle aapke hosh ud jayenge (I know something about your past, which after hearing, you'll be left dumbstruck!!!)

Abhi: Kya bakwas kar rahe ho (What rubbush!!!!)

Guy: Agar apne ateeth ke bare mein jaanna chahte ho, to mujh se aake ABC jagah milo (If you want to know about your past, then meet me at ABC place)

Scene -II

Abhijeet reaches the ABC place, some person just wants to phasoafy Abhijeet, when Abhijeet come there, he somehow manages to beat Abhijeet and hypnotises him!!!! In his hypnotism, that man tells him that, the reaso of his mother's death was none other than the CID team itself!!!! And the kidnapping was just a plan to ruin Abhijeet's life!!!

Hearing this Abhijeet goes mad, and decides to take revenge with all other CID members for this!!!!! He goes and shoots all the other members, and then, after a long standoff, even shoots Daya and ACP sir!!!!! Suddenly he comes off his hypnotism and seeing what he did, gets sooo guilty, takes the gun, and shoots himself!!!!!

Next scene: All the taken to a hospital. The man is also present and the news is given that no one survived it!!!! The man will go to see them with evil eyes, since the bodies are covered, he cannot se them, and confesses his reason of doing so and crime. Just then he hears someone clapping!!!! It none other than our CID team!!!!!! They tell him that his plan failed and it was a drama to catch him!!!!! Abhijeeet was really hypnotised and first goes to kill Salunkhe, but he instantly managed to snap Abhijeet out of this hypnotism!!!! And then they make this plan!!!! And then, as usual ACP sir delivers his "phaansi-wala" dialogue!!!!!

OR, an alternative for the next scene!!!!!

The episode ends with the shooting wala scene!!!! Next episode starts with everyone in the Bureau, as if nothing happened ever, no bandages no nothing, all fit and fine and ACP sir, or Freddy, or Abhijeet will start promoting JDJ again, having a Daya fully blushing!!!!! And as usual stupid khooni cases on the move!!!!

THE END!!!!

Edited by Rashida13 - 14 years ago

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

@Visrom: Story kaisi hai???? FW se idea uthakar likha hai!!!!😆😆

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Aaj kal ka trend hi aisa hai. Hum unka mazaak uda rahe hain, phir bhi woh log nahin samajh rahe hain.

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

@Visrom: Yeh story mere mann main kal se chal raha hai!!!!! FW ke paas agar itna dimaag hota, toh aaj itne ghatiya cases thodi na milte humein!!!! Socha ki India jate-ate story likte jaao!!!!! Waise you can take this topic too for your story contest!!!!😆 20-30 entries to aaraam se aa jayegi!!!!😉

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Akshay.

@Akshay.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: visrom
Aaj kal ka trend hi aisa hai. Hum unka mazaak uda rahe hain, phir bhi woh log nahin samajh rahe hain.

Ye log sunte thodi hai ham jaise chhote logon ki baat?

Edited by akshay29 - 14 years ago

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

@Akshay: Chodo na yaar!!!!! Agar FW ko hamare saamne jhukte hue dekhna chahte ho, to you'll have to make your own story, where FW is soooo bebas in front of us!!!!!😆😆

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Waise another alternative of my story:

What if this turns out to be a Tintu-Pintu stuff!!!! Like Abhijeet's judwa bhai, one good one bad!!!!! Then to sure we'll put a copywrite case on them!!!!😆😆